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Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) (Page 9)

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Posted: 05 May 2007 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
don't worry guyz..he won't die.. Wink
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PART 16
Everyone escorts Laksh to the hospital..
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The doctor comes out of the ICU room..
G: doctor? laksh ki ab kya halat hai..
D: dekhiye..unhe heartattack aaya hai..unke sharir me se humne goli to nikaal di hai..par unke sharir mein zeher fael raha hai..hume pata nahi ki hum usko poori tara se bacha payenge ya nahi..
G: (tensed and crying) kya hum usse mil sakte hain?
D: dekhiye mil to nahi sakte..par dur se dekh sakte hain..
G: Ji..
Everyone stands infront of laksh's room window.. and see's his condition..
Pulkit: (cuddling) (smiling sweetly) papa..... =]
Everyone is shocked to see pulkit say his first words.. but can't decide either to be happy or sad..
K: (crying) kaash..pulkit..kaash there pappa ne yeh sunaa hota..(she glares inside, and looks at laksh)
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Everyone is gathered around the bench outside laksh's room..
Meanwhile.. Nakul notices a male nurse go in laksh's room.. but nakul dosen't say anything..
-After a couples of minutes-
A nurse goes in laksh's room, and comes out panicking..
Nurse: Doctor?! Doctor?!
Doctor comes racing down the hallway..
D: what's wrong nurse??
Nurse: Doctor!! patient ko kuch ho raha hai.. aur unka oxygen mask bhi on nahi hai..
D: KYA?!?!?!?! OMG!!! (he runs in his room)
Everyone is shocked to death..
N: Ek minute.. (thinks for a moment)...haan..yaad aaya.. jab hum sab yaha bench ke paas the..to maine ek male nurse ko laksh ke kamre ke andar jaate dekha tha..
Everyone is shocked, and the doctor overhears everything..
D: kya?! par maine to yaha kisi ko bhi nahi bheja tha.. jab main yahan nahi tha..tab mujhe is patient ki reports mili, aur woh positive aa rahi thi.. par ab..shayad negative aaye..
T: (shocked, whispers) jaane yeh kaun hai jo, haath dho kar laksh ke peeche pada hai.. itna kyun sata raha hai usko..
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GUYS..I HOPE YOU LIKE THIS..NEXT PART WILL BE UP SOON..
PLEASE REPLY..
THANKS!!
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Edited by Zinu29 - 05 May 2007 at 1:33pm
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Posted: 05 May 2007 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
I didn't follow some of the last parts. But I was almost about to cry in the last 2 parts. Can't wait till the next part. I just finished reading some parts last night and you are really fast girl. You wrote a lot of parts in 12 hours. Clap
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thanks. Wink
NEXT PART WILL BE UP SOON!! Wink
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Posted: 05 May 2007 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
plz continue..
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PART 17
The doctor is seen walking down the hallway towards laksh's room..he is about to reach it but..suddenly someone appears, and drags him to his office..
IN THE DOCTOR'S OFFICE
D: (his mouth is covered) (mumbles) kaun ho tum..
Misterious Guy: Shh.........(he explains him everything that how he had gotten into laksh's room, and had taken his oxygen mask off, etc) and also threatens him, not to utter a word to his family, and takes the reports from his hands, and is happy to see it. (cackles) mera kaam ho gaya.. (cackles once again..and leaves)..
D: (shocked) (he wonders in his head) OMG!! yeh baat main kaise chuppa sakta hoon?? par bata bhi nahi sakta..yeh kaisi ulghan hai??
Pulkit is seen playing with kt's mangalsutra..saying "papa", and cuddling, but it suddenly breaks, and all the little pearls fall out and scatter all around the floor...
Pulkit gets sad, and starts crying..
Everyone looks at kt, thinking "abshagun..abshagun"
The doctor is once again seen walking towards laksh's room, but sahil stops him..
S: doctor..reports mein kya likha hai?
D: (scared im..sorrt..reports negative hain..he's in coma..(he says and leaves)
-Echo in everyone's heads: "He is in Coma"-
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PLEASE REPLY IF I SHOULD CONTIUE GUYZ..
THANKS!! Wink
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Posted: 05 May 2007 at 4:44pm | IP Logged
no comments... Ouch

is this a sign of stopping.. Ouch Cry Cry
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PART 18
IT'S BEEN 2 YEAR'S SINCE LAKSH WAS IN COMA...
PULKIT IS NOW TURNING 2 TOMORROW..
KT SEEMS MISERABLE SINCE SHE HEARD THE NEWS OF LASKH GOING IN COMA..
SHE NEVER TALKED TO ANYONE.. BUT TO PULKIT, AND LAKSH'S PHOTO'S..
EVERYONE IS CONCERNED FOR KT..BUT ALSO LAKSH, EVERYONE SINCE 2 YEAR'S GOES AND VISITS LAKSH EVERYDAY...
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THE NEXT MORNING
K: (crying) (looking at Laksh's Photo) laskh...
P: (starts crying) papa...
Kt picks him up, and realizes how much he has missed his papa in 2 years..(she hugs him crying, with laksh's photo in her hands)
K: (crying) mujhe maaf karde mere bache.. main tere papa ko yaha nahi laa sakti.. kaash ki tere papa aaj tere saath kel rahe hote..
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T: (screams from downstairs) KRISHNA!!!!!!!!!! JALDI NEECHE AA!!!!!! ABHI!!!!!!!!
Kt just walks downstairs to tulsi, like she has no life, but still is living..
T: krishna.. hospital se phone aaya tha..laksh thoda thoda coma se bahar aane laga hai.. haan..
Everyone gather's around and decide's to ge and meet laksh..
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM..IN THE HOSPITAL..
L: (unconsious) (whispers) kt........pulkit.......nahi...........
T: (wonders) nahi??
L: (unconsious) nahi...........mujhe.........maarne.......koshish........... kt.........pulkit.............
Laksh comes out of coma, with a huge gasp...
L: (screams) NAHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (breathes hard)....
P: (sweetly) Papa....(smiles)
L: Pulkit?? (he gets happy seeing his child)
L: (turns around) Kt...daadi...baa...mihir daadu...papa...maa...nakul bhaiyaa...(he is very happy to see them..)
Kt is just standing there saying nothing..
L: (hold's kt's hand) Kt?? kya hua?? tum...
A tear drops down kt's cheek...and falls on laskh...
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TO BE CONTINUED.......HOPE YOU LIKE IT.....PLEASE REPLY.......
THANKS!!
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