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Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) (Page 8)

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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
lol yeah.. no prob.. ill doo that.. OMG guys..big twist coming up in next part.. =] enjoy.. Wink
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PART 14
Everyone is tensed..
Kt is miserable..
Laksh is Horrified..and is thinking who it could be..
L: (tensed) kaun ho sakta hai yeh?? kya chata hai?? kya dushmani hai iski hamaare saath..
Sahil: (keeps his hand on laksh's shoulder) laksh beta.. dusri baar uska phone aaye..to soch samajh ke faisla lena beta...
L: (nods) ji papa..
The phone rings, and laksh puts it on speaker..
L: hello?? (he hear's pulkit crying, and gets tears in his own eyes, and whispers "pulkit"..everyone is shocked)
Phone Guy: heraan ho?? mat ho..kyunki agar tumne mujhe meri woh cheez nahi di..to yeh aakhri baar hogi ke tum ya koi bhi, is bache ki aawaaz sun rahe ho samjhe...
L: (tensed) nahi..tumhe jo chahiye main dene ko tayiaar hoon..
Phone Guy: (cackles) apni jaan de sakte ho.. dekho mujhe pata hai ki tumhara javab kya hai..par mujhe aur kushi hogi agar tum apne khudke muu se bolo..
-Everybody is nodding "no"..and so is kt-
L: (in confidence) HAAN...
Phone Guy: (cackles) very good.. ab kisi ko bahar ke darwaaze par bhejo..
Laksh turns..and starts to leave..
Phone guy: ruko laksh.. maine kaha kisi ghar wale ko..tumko nahi..samjhe..
-Laksh stops, and archita goes-
Archita opens the door and see's pulkit on the doorstep's, she bends down to pick him up, and right at the moment..laksh is shot through the window..
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GUYS PLEASE TELL ME IF I SHOULD CONTINUE..
THANKS!!
Wink
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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
wow what a twist in the perfect fairytale Tongue
continue soon Smile
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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
wow i love ur ff it is great with all the twists Clap Clap
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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
thank u guys.. the next part is coming up soon, now! Wink
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PART 15
Archita opens the door and see's pulkit on the doorstep's, she bend's down to pick him up, and right at that moment..laksh is shot through the window..
-The speakers are still on the phone-
Phone guy: (cackles) mujhe jo chahiye that..mil gaya.. apne bache ko ek aakhri baar dekne ke tumhe..let's see..hmm... paanch minute..sirf..paanch minute milte hain..apni aakhree saanse apne parivaar ke saath khushi khushi le lo..(cackles)
-Phone is ingaze-
-Laksh is shown hit near his heart area, and is bleeding a lot-
-Laksh sit-falls on the couch (sit-falls means that he falls but is sitting on the couch lol LOL)-
-He touches his chest in pain..and see's blood all over his hands-
Archita comes with pulkit, and is shocked to see laksh in this condition..
K: (screams) LAKSH!!!!!!
(she takes pulkit from archita, and puts it in laksh's lap)
Laksh picks up pulkit in his hands..
L: (smiles) main to chala jaoonga..par..tu apni maa ko chod kar kabhi mat jaana beta.. is parivaar ko chod kar kabhi mat jaana..aur hamesha yaad rakhna ke tera papa..tujhse bahut pyar parta tha.. (the baby sweetly cuddles in laksh's arms, and smiles)
-Everyone is crying and horrified-
K: (crying) nahi laksh..tum hume chod kar nahi jaa sakte laksh..apne bache ko chod kar nahi jaa sakte..
L: (smiles) (he puts his hand on kt's face) (softly) kt..mere jaane ke baad tum sabka khayaal rakho gi naa..??
K: (crying) nahi..laksh..tumhare bina mai adhoori hoon..
L: (softly) tum mere bina adhoori nahi ho kt.. meri parchaiie hamesha tumhare paas hai.. woh parchaiie jo abhi meri goud mein khel raha hai..
Ganga: Laksh..tumhe kuch nahi ho ga laksh..dekho hum tumhe hospital le jayenge laksh.. dekho tum..
L: (softly) maa.. main aapse bahut pyar karta hoon..meri kt ka kyaal aap..
-he is starting to turn unconsious-
L: (in his head remember's) paanch minute..sirf..paanch minute milte hain..apni aakhree saanse apne parivaar ke saath khushi khushi le lo..(cackles)
Laksh gives his finger to his baby boy..his little fingers hold on to it..laksh smiles, and kisses pulkit..and turns unconsious..
G & K: Laksh!!!!!
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HEY GUYS!!! IF YOU'RE WONDERING HE'S NOT GONA DIE, BUT THERE IS ANOTHER TWIST COMING UP!!
THANKS!!
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Posted: 05 May 2007 at 1:07am | IP Logged
okay my eyes just got watery Cry   Cry Cry
nice part continue soon Smile
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG LAKSH BETTER NOT DIE OR IT WILL SUCK!!!!! PLZ!! MAKE SURE LAKSH DOESN'T DIE!!!!

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