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nycdesiqt

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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 5:43pm | IP Logged
please continue Big smile
u r doin a fabulous job Clap

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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 5:45pm | IP Logged
ok..i waz just wondering becuz..u guys have replied to every one of my parts, but this.. does this mean i should end it soon?? or are you waiting for more twistz.. Wink

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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 6:17pm | IP Logged
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ********************************************
PART 12
-The doctor had discharged laksh. he is welcomed home-
-Laksh is in his room, in SN-
-Laksh hears a baby crying, and gets confuzed-
-he decides to go see where it is-
L: (in the hallway, wondering) yeh..bache ki aawaaz kaha se..??
-Finally..he reaches damini's room, and saw a baby lying on the bed crying-
L: (picks the baby) Arerererere..kyun ro rahe hain aap?? kya ho gaya?? (he play's with the baby sweetly, until the baby falls asleep)
-kt comes to the room, and is shocked to see laksh there-
L: (looks at kt, and confuzingly says) kt..yeh bacha yaha.....!! kiska hai yeh??
-Everyone enter's the room, and decide's to tell himthe truth about himself-
L: koi batao naa? kiska hai yeh?? koi bataiye naa..
T: Laksh..yeh bacha tera aur krishna tulsi ka hai..
-laksh was finding it hard to believe-
L: (confuzed) kya..?? mera aur kt ka bacha?? yeh kaisa mazaak hai?? kt.. tum..!! daadi..yeh mera bacha nahi ho sakta..meri to shaadi bhi nahi hui hai ab tak.. aap yeh kaisi baate kar rahi hai?? daadi main..
K: (sadly) baa theek kaih rahi hai laksh.. yeh humara hi bacha hai..
-laksh touches his head in pain. he starts having more and more flashbacks of the accident. everyone is worried. nakul and mihir go and catch laksh, since he was turning unconsious-
L: (before he turns unconsious) ab..yaad aaya.. accident........ab...yaad.........aaya....(he turns unconsious before saying anything else)
K: LAKSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ********************************************
IN THE HOSPITAL
-Laksh is admitted in the ICU room-
-Kt is not able to control herself from crying-
-Everyone is tryng to get her to calm down-
-doctor comes out of laksh's room-
Sahil: doctor ab kaisa hai laksh??
D: abhi ghabraane ki koi baat nahi hai..woh bilkul theek hai..bas ab puri tarha se theek hone ke liye, unhe regular yeh dawaayieya khaani hongi..(the doctor hands sahil a list of medicine)
S: ji doctor saab..
K: Doctor..kya hum laksh se mil sakte hain??
D: of course..kyn nahi?? par abhi woh bihosh hain.. par aap mil sakte hain..
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ********************************************
IN LAKSH'S ROOM
-Laksh is still unconsious-
kt goes and sits beside laksh..and gets a hold of his hand..
K: (softly) laksh.. (she says sweet thing about laksh, and apologisis for any of her stupid mistakes, when she made him feel bad, and finishes it off with) "I Love You Laksh", aaj ke baad main aisa kabhi nahi karoongi.. mujhe maaf kardo laksh..
-as she finishes a tead from her cheek falls on laksh's forehead-
L: (mummurs) kt..main bhi tumse bahut pyar karta hoon, kt.. par tum maafi kyun maang rahi ho? isme tumhari kya galti..
-they have a sweet moment-
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ********************************************
-Laksh is back home, with his fully gained memory =] yay)
He sweetly holds his baby boy, and plays with him..
Laksh and Kt..love each other, and most of all their baby, and afamily ofcourse.
-Happy Ending, after many Twists-
=]
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SO GUYS?? HOW DID YOU LIKE MY "12 PART" FANFIC.. LOL..
SO YOU GUYS WANT ME TO ADD ANOTHER TWIST, OR KEEP IT LIKE A HAPPY ENDING, AND MAKE ANOTHER FANFIC
PLEASE REPLY..
THANKS!!
LOVE,
ZINU =] Wink

Edited by Zinu29 - 04 May 2007 at 6:18pm

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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 6:19pm | IP Logged
why was kt crying?
how did they get in the new house ?
didnt read all to long but very very intresting. i love it but hate reading on comp. Smile

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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 8:07pm | IP Logged
That parts were really cute with laksh adn baby boy in it. I want you to write more. Don't stop! i want to read your next twist. do write the next part soon. Clap Clap Clap

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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 8:27pm | IP Logged
ok..guys..i decided...to....
MAKE ANOTHER TWIST LOL
it'll be up by some time today =] Wink

Edited by Zinu29 - 04 May 2007 at 8:27pm

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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ********************************************
PART 13
After 2 years..
IN SN'S HOUSE...
L: (happily) Chalo pulkit beta..cake kato..mama ke saath..aaj unka birthday hai..bolo happy birthday.. =]
(everyone starts laughing)
The baby sweetly cuddles in laksh's hands..
Laksh and Kt keep the baby in the room, with archita and go and have a little dance on kt's birthday..
Archita runs downstairs, and interrupts laksh and kt's dance..
A: (worried) Laksh bhaiyaa...
L: (gets worried) Archita tumm itne ghabrai hui kyun ho??? kya baat hai..??
K: bolo archita..kya baat hai??
A: (panicked) Laksh bhaiyaa..Pulkit apne kamre mein nahi hai..
(echo in laksh and kt's heads; Pulkit apne kamre mein nahi hai..)
kt faints, but laksh catches her.. Laksh is horrified....
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ********************************************
The party is officially called off
Everybody is sitting in the living room discussing the matter, while laksh is trying to calm kt down..
T: (horrified) mujhe shak ho raha hai mihir..
M: (confuzed) shak?? kis baat ka..
T: mujhe lagta hai ki..us din kt aur laksh ka accident hua tha.. woh sirf accident nahi tha.. balki uska jaal buna tha kisi ne..
Everyone looks shocked
M: haan..shayad tulsi theek keh rahi hai.. aisa ho sakta hai..
K: (crying) jaane kaisa, aur kaha hoga mera bacha.. kya pata kis haal mein..
L: (hurtfully) kt..mujhe pata hai ki tum par pya beet rahi hai..
-while he tries to complete his sentence..the phone rings-
K: (off mind) mera bacha..ushi kaa phone hoga..(cries) (picks up the phone) Hello..?? (she hears a baby cry on the phone, and yells..) PULKIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Laksh and everyone else are horrified-
-Laksh goes and takes the phone from kt-
L: (horrified) Hello?? kaun hai yeh?? humare bache ko kyun le gaye ho..
Phone Guy: Chilaao mat Laksh..nahi toh anjaam bahut bura hoga..tumhare liye, tumhare parivaar ke liye, tumhari patni ke liye..sabse khaas..Tumhare bache ke liye..
L: (breaks down into tears) nahi..aisa kuch mat karna..tumhe jo bhi chaiyee hum denge..paisa..sab kuch..jo tum maango..par humare bache ko kuch mat karna please..
Phone Guy: Relax laksh..vaise tumne sach kaha..san kuch to mujhe milega..aur jo mujhe chahiye woh tum hi mujhe de sakte ho..
-Before laksh could reply..tulsi take the phone-
T: (yells) KAUN HO TUM AUR BACHE KO KAHA LE KAR GAYE HO...
-the phone is ingaze-
T: HELLO?? HELLO?? kaat diya..
K: (holds on to laksh's shoilder) (cries) laksh..humaara bacha..laksh...
L: (cries and sweetly hugs her) (softly) kuch nahi hoga kt..main humaare bache ko wapas laaungaa..main waada karta hoon..humaare bache ko kuch nahi hoga..shaant ho jao..
-kt is still crying non.stop-
The phone rings again.. Everybody is scared..laksh is about to pick up the phone, but mihir puts it on speaker..
L: hello??
Phone guy: laksh..kya tum mujhe woh cheez dene ke liye tayiaar ho..jisse tumhe tumhara bacha wapas mil sakta hai..kyunki main to tumhare bache ko abhi bhi khatam..
L: Nahi..aisa kuch mat karna..tum jo chahte ho..main tumhe doonga..
Phone guy: (cackles) good boy...waise tum lagte to bahut sharif ho....hahahaha....main phirse phone karoonga..
-the phone is ingaze-
-mihir swithes off the speaker-
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TELL ME HOW IT WAS GUYS.. PLEASE REPLY..HOPE YOU LIKED IT...
THANKS!! Wink

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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 9:52pm | IP Logged
nice twist! lol
its good
keep it up Smile

juss one favor...its just my opinion...don't really have too if u don't want to....can u stop making kt faint all the time...its just when she hears bad news all she does is faint LOL

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