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Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) (Page 6)

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Posted: 03 May 2007 at 10:30pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by ktandlakshyalov

oh! mt laksh n zinu how do u post in fanfic section plz tell me even i need to Smile

Hi, um.. well i opened 2 windows, one was for the fanfic section (new thread) and the other, was for the fanfic in the KSBKBT section, so i went to the section and slowly got the links.. thats all i did lol. i hope it helped =]

hope u like my story..

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Posted: 03 May 2007 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
zinu i loved ur story n ya thanx for the help.did u post only ur fanfic link or u posted the whole fanfic. Smile
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Posted: 03 May 2007 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
no not really.. but..im working on that..im guna post all the fanfic lists.. o and continue ur fanfic soon. i wanna read it so bad. im posting the next part right after.. this.. hope you like it.. after u read it please reply..
thanks!! Wink
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PART 10
The doctor comes out of Kt's room, and says, that she has given birth to a baby boy.
Everyone is happy for kt, but even more sad for Laksh.
The doctor comes out of Laksh's room.
M: Doctor, ab kaisa hai Laksh??
D: dekhiye, patient ki condition bahut hi zaada critical hai.. mujhe nahi lagta ki hum usse bacha...
M: [gets mad, and takes a hold of doc's collar] AISA KUCH NAHI HO GA.. AGAR AISA AAPNE BOLA BHI TO MAIN...
T: Mihir.. rukjao..
Mihir lets go of the doc's collar..
A nurse comes out of Laksh's room..
Nurse: Doctor..Doctor..Patient to hosh aa raha hai.. woh kisi ka naam le raha hai..
-Everybody is shocked-
Mihir and Tulsi go and meet Him.
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IN LAKSH'S HOSPITAL ROOM
L: (not fully in his senses, feeling a lot of pain, hard to speak) (whispers) kt........
Mihir and Tulsi are crying.
M and T: (crying in sorrow) laksh...
L: (opens his eyes a lil bit) (whispers in pain) daadi.. kt kaisi...
-before he could complete he closes his eyes-
doctor comes in the room.
D: abhi ke liye aap bahar chale jaaiye..please..
Mihir and Tulsi leave without uttering one word.
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OUTSIDE IN HALLWAY
Nurse comes out of kt's room.
Nurse: patient aap sab se milna chahti hai..
just when they are about to go in kt's room the doctor comes out of laksh's room.
D: aap mein se kt kaun hai??
T: ji woh..kt andar hai..jiska abhi bachaa hua hai, woh hi laksh ki patni hai.. kyun kya baat hai??
D: patient dard mein unka naam le raha hai.. dekhiye, yeh uske liye acha nahi hai..
M: (confuzed) accha nahi hai?? kya matlab hai aap ka??
D: mera matlab hai ki; us patient ke sar mein bahut gehri chot aayiee hai..[everyone's ready to faint]..us ko yeh to pata hai ki aap kaun hai.. par..karib 1 saal purani baat bhul gaye hai..[he concludes with saying]...."he is suffering to partial memory loss..."..I am sorry..we tried our best..
KT: (from in background) LAKSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (yells and faints)
The nurses pick her up...
*She screamed from in background because she was coming outside to meet everyone, but the doc frm laksh's room came, and she overheard everything..and coudn't take it*
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T: (remember's what doctor said) usse karib ek saal purani baat yaad hai..yani ki..usse sirf yeh yaad hai jab unn dono ki shaadi..
M: hum yeh baat laksh ko kaise sumjhayenge ki..
D: (interrupts) aisa mat karna..[mihir and tulsi confuzed] nahi..aisa mat karna..agar usko koi bhi baat yaad dilane ki koshish ki gayi, ya uske sar par kaisa bhi dabav aaye, yeh bahut khatarnaak ho sakta hai.. agar aisa hua..to main keh sakta hoon ki..woh apni poori yaaddash ko denge..
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GUYS YOU WANT ME TO GO ON??
PLEASE REPLY...
THANKS!!
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Posted: 03 May 2007 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
zinu seriuosly i loved it.it was gr8 Clap Clap
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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
THTS AWESOME AND SAD Cry PLZ CONINTUE Clap Clap
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PART 11
-Kt is back in her senses, and is arguing to meet Laksh in this codition-
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM
K: (crying) he bhagwaan.. yeh kya ho gaya.. Laksh..[she keeps her hand on his chest] Laksh.. aanken kholo laksh.. tum apne bache se nahi milna chahoge? aanken kolo naa laksh.. (cries even more)
L: (in constance pain, he mummers) kt...
K: (crying) laksh...
L: kt...
L: (comes in his senses, but still is in constance pain) Kt.. kya hua??
K: (crying) laksh...
L: kt tum ro kyun rahi ho? kya hua...
Tulsi takes kt out of the room, remembering what the doctor had said..
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K: (crying) baa.. apne mujhe..
T: krishna tulsi.. agar mai tujhe bataoungi to tu bardaash nahi kar payegi..
K: (crying) baa..mujhe apni chinta nahi hai..mujhe sirf laksh ki chinta hai.. boliye naa..
Tulsi tells everything the doctor had said..
K: (horrified, and crying) kya..?? matlab ki..laksh ko yeh nahi pata chal sakta ki uska beta..??
-Kt breaks down into tears and sits on the floor crying-
-Tulsi comforts her-
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM
L: (in constance pain, he softly says) mihir daadu..?? kt ko kya ho gaya hai? woh ro kyun rahi hai.. mujhe pata hai ki meri laa parvahi se mera accident hua..humari shaadi ke did..par mein theek ho jaunga..
Mihir is speechless..
M: (in head) main tujhe kaise bataoon laksh?? tujhe kaise samjhaoon?? ki, tere saath jo haadsa hua hai.. usmese kt to bach gayi.. par tu.. tune apne 1 saal ki yaadash kho di..apne pyar ke liye..
Mihir leaves without uttering a word. and Laksh is left un-answered.
L: (he has some flashbacks in head, about the accident) (yells) KT!!!!!!!!!!
K: (gets worried) (runs in the room)..Laksh?? kya hua?? tum theek to ho??
L: (softly) kt.. muhe ek ajib sa shayad..sapna..??
K: laksh..tum itna socho mat..tum aaraam karo..
L: kt.. ek baat poochoon..
K: (nods "yes") (softly) poocho..
L: jab mera..humari shaadi ke din..mera accident abhi hua tha..to tum..kitni ghabrai hui thi.. (he ends it with a sweet smile, waiting for a reply)..
Kt couldn't control herself, and started crying, and left the room. Once again, Laksh was left un-answered.
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What happened guys?? why didnt any one of you reply?? is it becuz u didnt like my part or sumthing.. Ouch

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