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great fanfic..but dnt the mods say no more fanfics here..you have to post it in the Fanfic section..right..

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Yes u guys r right.. i have to post this into the FanFic section.. but i am helpless.. i tried so many times, but it says, i can't since i don't have atleast 25 posts so i will have to later on.. sorry about this everyone.. but i am unable to do anything about it..

NEXT PART COMING SOON!!!!!!!
THERE IS GOING TO BE A BIG TWIST IN THE STORY!!!!!!
ENJOY!!!
HOPE YOU LIKE IT!!
THANKS!! Wink

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PART 5
-laksh walks away crying in anger, unknowingly that Tulsi is following him-
T: Laksh, ruk ja laksh, kaha jaa raha hai??
-Laksh doesn't here her-
-Meanwhile.. Laksh's phone rings-
-he picks it up-
L: Hello?
-its nakul, on da phone-
N: hello? laksh?
L: nakul bahiya?? (he quickly wipes off his tears.. and pretends on phone, he is not crying).. ji boliye..(waits for a reply)..
N: Laksh.. Laksh.. Ganga mom ka accident ho gaya hai..
L: (paniks) KYA?? MOM KA ACCIDENT HO GAYA HAI??
-Tulsi hears him, since he was shouting.. and she is also shocked-
L: (cries) NAKUL BAHIYA.. KAHA HAI AAP??
N: Laksh.. tum jaldi se city hospital pohunch jao.. hum wahi aa rahe hai abhi..
L: bhaiyaa main pehle se his yahan hoon..
N: (confuzed) tum phele se his wahan ho?? kyun kya hua?? sab theek to hai naa??
L: Bhaiyaa, aap phele yahan aa jayie, main aapko sab kuch samjha doonga..
N: theek hai laksh.. rakhta hoon..
-the phone is cut, and laksh burst into tears-
T: laksh..
L: (crying) daadi.. mom...
T: suna maine.. (starts to cry)..
L: (crying) daadi..ek taraf kt mushkil mein hai.. aur ek taraf mom.. mujhe juch samaj mein nahi aa raha hai.. main kya karoo...
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ********************************************
GANGA IS ADMITTED IN THE HOSPITAL..
EVERYONE FROM THE FAMILY IS THERE..
NAKUL ASKS LAKSH WHY HE WAS ALREADY THERE..
N: Laksh.. ab batao.. tum pehle se yahaa?? sab theek to hai naa??
L: (a tear falls down his cheek) kuch theek nahi hai bhaiyaa..
-Everyone is shocked-
-Laksh tells everyone what happened (like he told Tulsi..in my flashback) and also that what happened before the phone call-
-Everyone is shocked and can't believe what happened-
-Everyone is speechless-
-Doctor comes out of Ganga's Room-
L & N: Ab kaise hai mom, doctor??
D: Dekhiey, ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai.. woh khatre se bahar hai..
-Meanwhile a nurse comes out of kt's room-
Nurse: aap log mein se patient ka pati kaun hai??
L: ji main hoon.. kahiye..
Nurse: aapki patni aapko pukaar rahi hai..
-Laksh goes inside the room-
While laksh and kt are talking..everyone else outside the room starts talking ablout how bad kt must be feeling, etc.. they were talking about kt's un-born child)-
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ********************************************
IN KT'S ROOM
K: laksh.. kya tumne baa ko..?
L: haan kt..
K: par laksh.. tum inte tensed kyun ho? kya hua? sab theek to hai naa?
L: (begins to cry) kt.. ganga mom ka accident..
-he is too much hurt to continue-
K: (shocked) kya?? yeh kya ho raha hai is parivaar ke saath??
-The doctor butts in their conversation, and says that he needs to do a check up-
-Laksh nods, kisses kt's hand, and sweetly leaves crying-

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I am a bit confused here. Is kt already pregnant? Everything else is really good. Do continue soon zinu29. Clap   Clap    Clap    Clap   Clap    Clap

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I am a bit confused here. Is kt already pregnant? Everything else is really good. Do continue soon zinu29. Clap   Clap    Clap    Clap   Clap    Clap

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Posted: 02 May 2007 at 8:06pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by uru_hershey

I am a bit confused here. Is kt already pregnant? Everything else is really good. Do continue soon zinu29. Clap   Clap    Clap    Clap   Clap    Clap

Hi. um yah.. did you read the flashback?? u get a clue, becuas ein there the doctor says sumthing about the baby, but if u need eny more info.. plz tell =) thanks..

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Zinu =)

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************************************************************ ************************************************************ ********************************************
PART 6
-Oh sorry forgot to mention, kt and ganga have the same Doctor-
anywayz..
-The doctor walks out the room-
L: Doc.. kt kaisi hai??
D: dekhiye ab aapko ghabraane ki koi baat nahi hai.. woh bilkul theek hai..
-Everyone is happy-
-Laksh goes to meet ganga-
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ********************************************
IN GANGA'S ROOM
G: (happily) Laksh... =)
L: (smiles a lil bit) Mom.. =)
G: Laksh kaise hai sab...?? KT kaisi hai?? khush rakhta hai naa tu usko?? Rakhta hi hoga.. tu to..
-Laksh interrups-
L: Maa..(tells her all about what happened before her accident like; the flasback, etc.)
G: (shocked) Kya?? Kt theek to hai naa??
L: haan mom.. ab woh bilkul theek hai..
G: shukra hai bagwhan ka.. ki use kuch hua nahi..
-just when ganga says that... Laksh realizes what he has done-
-Laksh goes into his flashback when he said all those thing in anger infront of the god's murti-
L: (whispers) maine yeh kya kar dia hai??
-Laksh rushes out the room, and is seen infront of the same murti, in the hospital-
L: He bhagwaan.. mujhe maaf kar do.. paagal tha main.. jo aap par ungli uthai.. bhool gaya that ki..main is duniya mein sirf aapki vajay say hoon..sirf aapki vajay se mujhe kt milie hai.. ho sake to apne is paagal bete to maaf kar di jiye gaa.. maine aap par ungli utha kar bahut badi bhool ki hai.. mere paas pehene ke liye kuch bacha hi nahi hai.. main sharminda hoon.. (how bows his head in sorrow).. mujhe maaf kar di jiye..
-Tulsi listens to all this-
T: Laksh.. galti to sabse hot hai.. par tujhse koi galti nahi hui... tu to bas apna haq maang raha that.. isme koi paap nahi..
L: paap hai daadi.. maine..
T: jaanti hoon main... par tu is sab ke liye apne aap ko kyun doshi maan raha hai.. tune hi to kt se kaha tha.. "yeh kismat hai".. apni baat ko bhool gaya laksh.. huh...
-in sorrow a tear drops down his cheek, and he sadly hugs tulsi-

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poor lakshya great ff continue soon1

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