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Posted: 02 May 2007 at 3:58pm | IP Logged
WOW, i love this fanfic, i hope kt is alrite though Cry

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i am very happy to see u guys like my very first fan fic.. anywayz.. the 3rd part will be up soonWink

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hey fabulous

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PART 3
-The doctor comes out of the room-
-Laksh and Tulsi get up to ask about Kt-
-Just Before they ask.....The doctor nods "NO"-
L: DOCTOR, KYA HUA KT KO?? KUCH BOLIEY.
D: I am extremely sorry to say...............
-Laksh and Tulsi are HORRIFIED-
D: She has just gone through a heartattack...
-echo: she has just gone throught a heartattack-
-echo: she has just gone through a heartattack-
-Laksh is ready to faint...he can't believe what had happened with kt-
-Tulsi extremely shocked-
-Both of them are Speechless-
-Laksh goes to the little murti of krishna bhagvan-
L: (angry, crying, worried, yelling) AAP KO MAIN ITNA MAANTA THA.. AAP PAR MAINE ITNA VISHWAAS KIYA.. MAINE AAJ TAK KOI GALAT KAAM NAHI KIYA.. TO YEH SAZZA KYUN?? MAIN POOCHTA HOON KYUN?? MERA PARIVAAR BICHAD GAYA.. MAINE USE SEH LIYA.. MAINE SAARE ZULM SAHE HAI.. PAR ITNA KATHOR ZULM KYUN?? MERI GALTI KYA HAI?? AAPNE MERE NASIB MEIN PYAR MAA KA PYAAR NAHI LIKHA.. MAINE USE SWIKAR LIYA.. AB KYA MERI ZINDAGI MEIN MERA HAQ BHI MUJHSE CHEEN LO GE KYA?? PEHLE MEIN AAP PAR VISHWAAS KARTA THA BHAROSA KARTA THA.. PAR AAJ.. AAJ.. AAPNE US BHAROSE KO TOD DIYA HAI.. AGAR MERE PEHLI ZINDAGI MEIN MAINE KUCH GALAT KIYA THA.. TO USKI SAZA.. MERI KT.. KO KYUN DE RAHE HO?? AAJ SE.. MERA AAPME KOI VISHWAAS NAHI HAI.. AAJ MAIN ANATH HO GAYA HOON.. SIRG AAPKI WAJAY SE..! AB AAJ KE BAAD MEIN AAPKI KABHI POOJA NAHI KAROONGA..! AGAR KAROONGA TO SIRF AGAR MUJHE MERA PYAR MIL JAYE..!! MAIN NAA APKE TARAF DEKHOON GA, AUR NAA HI AAPKA NAAM APNE ZUBAN PAR KABI LAAUNGA..!!
-Laksh leaves-
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TELL ME IF I SHOULD CONTINUE.. AND PLZ WRITE COMMENTS..
THANKS!!

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Posted: 02 May 2007 at 6:10pm | IP Logged
OMG.. it waz soo short!!!.....continue plz

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Posted: 02 May 2007 at 6:10pm | IP Logged
Laksh was really terrified and angry when he said hose things right? Now you shouldn't ask if you can continue or not. I really love your FF. But please don't kill kt. If you wanna kill laksh and kt's baby or something, it won't be that sad. My last word to this FF is " This FF is really Phoenominal!!!" Clap

Edited by uru_hershey - 02 May 2007 at 6:10pm

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Thanks u guys, im really happy to see that u guys like my FF. thanks a lot. next part coming in a couple on minutes. thanks Wink

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PART 4
-Tulsi has gone to the Mandir-
-Meanwhile.. Laksh is sitting on the bench, worried for Kt-
-The doctor comes-
D: Uh.. aap us patient ke pati hain??
L: ji haan doctor saab.. kya hua??
D: aap zara mere saath aieye.. mere office mein..
-Laksh follows the doc to his office-
-Doctor and Laksh have a talk about kt.. But we don't hear it-
-when Laksh gets out of the room.. he seems confuzed-
-Tulsi is searching for Laksh-
T: (worried) Laksh..?? Laksh..?
T: Laksh tu yahan hai?? kabse dhoond rahi hoon main tujhe..
L: kyun daadi.. kya hua??
T: Laksh Krishna Tulsi ko hosh aa gaya hai.. woh tujhse milna chaahti hai..
L: (a lil happily) kya?? kt ko hosh..
-Laksh and Tulsi go towards her room-
L: Kt..
K: laksh..
-Laksh gently holds her hand-
K: laksh.. kya tumne baa ko..
L: (with sorrow) nahi kt.. tumhari aise halat mein main..
K: bata do laksh.. haan.. bata do..
L: par kt tum..
K: meri chinta mat karo laksh.. tum bas baa ko sab kuch bata do..
L: (nods) theek hai kt..
-he starts to leave-
K: laksh.. agar unhe bura lage to..
L: (shekey voice (because he is crying)) main jaanta hoon kt.. agar unhe bura lage to tumhare paas le aana..
-kt gives a lil smile-
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OUTSIDE HER ROOM
T: kaise hai ab krishna.. laksh..
L: (with his head bowed down..sadly says) Tulsi daadi.. mujhe aapko kuch..
-he begins to weep-
L: daadi..mujhe aapko kuch kehna hai..
T: haan..bol..kya baat hai??
L: Daadi woh..
-They go into flashback's-
FLASHBACK:
-In Switzerland-
L: (happily) Kt sambhalo.. gir jaao gi..
K: haan haan..main to..
-just as she is about to finish her sentence she falls down the stairs-
L: (screams) KT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
K: (in pain) laksh... *aahh* laksh...
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STILL IN FLASHBACK
IN THE HOSPITAL
L: (worried) Doctor?? How is kt now??
D: Look.. she is abseloutely fine..
L: And how is the baby??
D: dekhiye bacha jab paida hoga, to uski metal condition theek nahi hogi.
-echo (in his head): bacha jab paida hoga, to uski metal condition theek nahi hogi.. uski mental condition theek nahi hogi..uski mental condition theek nahi hogi-
-A tear sadly falls down his cheek-
L: (sadly whispers) kt...
                                                                                                                                 ***
IN KT'S ROOM
L: (sadly) Kt..
K: (crying) laksh.. yeh kya ho gaya laksh??
K: (crying) Jo khushi hum kal baa ko sunane wale thei..woh khushi hi hamse chali gaye..
L: (sadly) dekho kt.. (wiped off her tears.. and hugs her).. hum isme kya kar sakte hai kt?? jab upar wala hume yeh khushi nahi de sakta.. isme hum kya kare?? yeh hi kismat hai kt..
K: (crying) par laksh.. baa ko agar yeh pata chal gaya to..woh toot jaayengi laksh..woh toot jayengi..
L: (sadly) kt dekho.. hum unse agar yeh baat chupate hain.. to yeh baat kitne der thak chhup payegi?? kabhi naa kabi to hume..
K: (crying) main jaanti hoon laksh.. par..
-kt can't control herself from crying..she is unable to finish her sentence-
L: (sweetly) shh.. kt.. rona band karo.. hum kuch sochte hain.. shhh...
L: dekho kt.. main jaanta hoon ke yeh khabar ek maa ke liye kitna dukh laa sakti hai.. ek maa hi hoti hai jisko uske bacho ke feeling kaa ehsaas hota hai.. ek maa hi bacho ke liye sabkuch hai.. aur ek maa hi hamesha unke saath rehti hai..
-As he finishes tears fall out of his eyes-
                                                                                                                                   ***
WE ARE OUT OF FLASHBACK
T: (horrified) he bhagwaan.. main samajh sakti hoon ki kt ki kya halat hui hogi..
-Laksh is crying-
T: (cries) jaane thakur ji ne aisa kyun kiya..
-Laksh just walks away crying in anger-

Edited by Zinu29 - 02 May 2007 at 6:48pm

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