Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) - Page 6

why was kt crying?
how did they get in the new house ?
didnt read all to long but very very intresting. i love it but hate reading on comp. 😊

That parts were really cute with laksh adn baby boy in it. I want you to write more. Don't stop! i want to read your next twist. do write the next part soon. 👏 👏 👏

ok..guys..i decided...to....
MAKE ANOTHER TWIST 😆
it'll be up by some time today =] 😉Edited by Zinu29 - 16 years ago

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PART 13
After 2 years..
IN SN'S HOUSE...
L: (happily) Chalo pulkit beta..cake kato..mama ke saath..aaj unka birthday hai..bolo happy birthday.. =]
(everyone starts laughing)
The baby sweetly cuddles in laksh's hands..
Laksh and Kt keep the baby in the room, with archita and go and have a little dance on kt's birthday..
Archita runs downstairs, and interrupts laksh and kt's dance..
A: (worried) Laksh bhaiyaa...
L: (gets worried) Archita tumm itne ghabrai hui kyun ho??? kya baat hai..??
K: bolo archita..kya baat hai??
A: (panicked) Laksh bhaiyaa..Pulkit apne kamre mein nahi hai..
(echo in laksh and kt's heads; Pulkit apne kamre mein nahi hai..)
kt faints, but laksh catches her.. Laksh is horrified....
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The party is officially called off
Everybody is sitting in the living room discussing the matter, while laksh is trying to calm kt down..
T: (horrified) mujhe shak ho raha hai mihir..
M: (confuzed) shak?? kis baat ka..
T: mujhe lagta hai ki..us din kt aur laksh ka accident hua tha.. woh sirf accident nahi tha.. balki uska jaal buna tha kisi ne..
Everyone looks shocked
M: haan..shayad tulsi theek keh rahi hai.. aisa ho sakta hai..
K: (crying) jaane kaisa, aur kaha hoga mera bacha.. kya pata kis haal mein..
L: (hurtfully) kt..mujhe pata hai ki tum par pya beet rahi hai..
-while he tries to complete his sentence..the phone rings-
K: (off mind) mera bacha..ushi kaa phone hoga..(cries) (picks up the phone) Hello..?? (she hears a baby cry on the phone, and yells..) PULKIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Laksh and everyone else are horrified-
-Laksh goes and takes the phone from kt-
L: (horrified) Hello?? kaun hai yeh?? humare bache ko kyun le gaye ho..
Phone Guy: Chilaao mat Laksh..nahi toh anjaam bahut bura hoga..tumhare liye, tumhare parivaar ke liye, tumhari patni ke liye..sabse khaas..Tumhare bache ke liye..
L: (breaks down into tears) nahi..aisa kuch mat karna..tumhe jo bhi chaiyee hum denge..paisa..sab kuch..jo tum maango..par humare bache ko kuch mat karna please..
Phone Guy: Relax laksh..vaise tumne sach kaha..san kuch to mujhe milega..aur jo mujhe chahiye woh tum hi mujhe de sakte ho..
-Before laksh could reply..tulsi take the phone-
T: (yells) KAUN HO TUM AUR BACHE KO KAHA LE KAR GAYE HO...
-the phone is ingaze-
T: HELLO?? HELLO?? kaat diya..
K: (holds on to laksh's shoilder) (cries) laksh..humaara bacha..laksh...
L: (cries and sweetly hugs her) (softly) kuch nahi hoga kt..main humaare bache ko wapas laaungaa..main waada karta hoon..humaare bache ko kuch nahi hoga..shaant ho jao..
-kt is still crying non.stop-
The phone rings again.. Everybody is scared..laksh is about to pick up the phone, but mihir puts it on speaker..
L: hello??
Phone guy: laksh..kya tum mujhe woh cheez dene ke liye tayiaar ho..jisse tumhe tumhara bacha wapas mil sakta hai..kyunki main to tumhare bache ko abhi bhi khatam..
L: Nahi..aisa kuch mat karna..tum jo chahte ho..main tumhe doonga..
Phone guy: (cackles) good boy...waise tum lagte to bahut sharif ho....hahahaha....main phirse phone karoonga..
-the phone is ingaze-
-mihir swithes off the speaker-
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TELL ME HOW IT WAS GUYS.. PLEASE REPLY..HOPE YOU LIKED IT...
THANKS!! 😉

nice twist! lol
its good
keep it up 😊

juss one favor...its just my opinion...don't really have too if u don't want to....can u stop making kt faint all the time...its just when she hears bad news all she does is faint 😆

lol yeah.. no prob.. ill doo that.. OMG guys..big twist coming up in next part.. =] enjoy.. 😉

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PART 14
Everyone is tensed..
Kt is miserable..
Laksh is Horrified..and is thinking who it could be..
L: (tensed) kaun ho sakta hai yeh?? kya chata hai?? kya dushmani hai iski hamaare saath..
Sahil: (keeps his hand on laksh's shoulder) laksh beta.. dusri baar uska phone aaye..to soch samajh ke faisla lena beta...
L: (nods) ji papa..
The phone rings, and laksh puts it on speaker..
L: hello?? (he hear's pulkit crying, and gets tears in his own eyes, and whispers "pulkit"..everyone is shocked)
Phone Guy: heraan ho?? mat ho..kyunki agar tumne mujhe meri woh cheez nahi di..to yeh aakhri baar hogi ke tum ya koi bhi, is bache ki aawaaz sun rahe ho samjhe...
L: (tensed) nahi..tumhe jo chahiye main dene ko tayiaar hoon..
Phone Guy: (cackles) apni jaan de sakte ho.. dekho mujhe pata hai ki tumhara javab kya hai..par mujhe aur kushi hogi agar tum apne khudke muu se bolo..
-Everybody is nodding "no"..and so is kt-
L: (in confidence) HAAN...
Phone Guy: (cackles) very good.. ab kisi ko bahar ke darwaaze par bhejo..
Laksh turns..and starts to leave..
Phone guy: ruko laksh.. maine kaha kisi ghar wale ko..tumko nahi..samjhe..
-Laksh stops, and archita goes-
Archita opens the door and see's pulkit on the doorstep's, she bends down to pick him up, and right at the moment..laksh is shot through the window..
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GUYS PLEASE TELL ME IF I SHOULD CONTINUE..
THANKS!!
😉

wow what a twist in the perfect fairytale 😛
continue soon 😊

wow i love ur ff it is great with all the twists 👏 👏

thank u guys.. the next part is coming up soon, now! 😉