Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) - Page 5

Posted: 16 years ago
zinu i loved ur story n ya thanx for the help.did u post only ur fanfic link or u posted the whole fanfic. 😊
Posted: 16 years ago
no not really.. but..im working on that..im guna post all the fanfic lists.. o and continue ur fanfic soon. i wanna read it so bad. im posting the next part right after.. this.. hope you like it.. after u read it please reply..
thanks!! πŸ˜‰
love,
Zinu πŸ˜‰
Posted: 16 years ago
PART 10
The doctor comes out of Kt's room, and says, that she has given birth to a baby boy.
Everyone is happy for kt, but even more sad for Laksh.
The doctor comes out of Laksh's room.
M: Doctor, ab kaisa hai Laksh??
D: dekhiye, patient ki condition bahut hi zaada critical hai.. mujhe nahi lagta ki hum usse bacha...
M: [gets mad, and takes a hold of doc's collar] AISA KUCH NAHI HO GA.. AGAR AISA AAPNE BOLA BHI TO MAIN...
T: Mihir.. rukjao..
Mihir lets go of the doc's collar..
A nurse comes out of Laksh's room..
Nurse: Doctor..Doctor..Patient to hosh aa raha hai.. woh kisi ka naam le raha hai..
-Everybody is shocked-
Mihir and Tulsi go and meet Him.
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IN LAKSH'S HOSPITAL ROOM
L: (not fully in his senses, feeling a lot of pain, hard to speak) (whispers) kt........
Mihir and Tulsi are crying.
M and T: (crying in sorrow) laksh...
L: (opens his eyes a lil bit) (whispers in pain) daadi.. kt kaisi...
-before he could complete he closes his eyes-
doctor comes in the room.
D: abhi ke liye aap bahar chale jaaiye..please..
Mihir and Tulsi leave without uttering one word.
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OUTSIDE IN HALLWAY
Nurse comes out of kt's room.
Nurse: patient aap sab se milna chahti hai..
just when they are about to go in kt's room the doctor comes out of laksh's room.
D: aap mein se kt kaun hai??
T: ji woh..kt andar hai..jiska abhi bachaa hua hai, woh hi laksh ki patni hai.. kyun kya baat hai??
D: patient dard mein unka naam le raha hai.. dekhiye, yeh uske liye acha nahi hai..
M: (confuzed) accha nahi hai?? kya matlab hai aap ka??
D: mera matlab hai ki; us patient ke sar mein bahut gehri chot aayiee hai..[everyone's ready to faint]..us ko yeh to pata hai ki aap kaun hai.. par..karib 1 saal purani baat bhul gaye hai..[he concludes with saying]...."he is suffering to partial memory loss..."..I am sorry..we tried our best..
KT: (from in background) LAKSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (yells and faints)
The nurses pick her up...
*She screamed from in background because she was coming outside to meet everyone, but the doc frm laksh's room came, and she overheard everything..and coudn't take it*
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T: (remember's what doctor said) usse karib ek saal purani baat yaad hai..yani ki..usse sirf yeh yaad hai jab unn dono ki shaadi..
M: hum yeh baat laksh ko kaise sumjhayenge ki..
D: (interrupts) aisa mat karna..[mihir and tulsi confuzed] nahi..aisa mat karna..agar usko koi bhi baat yaad dilane ki koshish ki gayi, ya uske sar par kaisa bhi dabav aaye, yeh bahut khatarnaak ho sakta hai.. agar aisa hua..to main keh sakta hoon ki..woh apni poori yaaddash ko denge..
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GUYS YOU WANT ME TO GO ON??
PLEASE REPLY...
THANKS!!
πŸ˜‰
Posted: 16 years ago
zinu seriuosly i loved it.it was gr8 πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Posted: 16 years ago
THTS AWESOME AND SAD 😭 PLZ CONINTUE πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 11
-Kt is back in her senses, and is arguing to meet Laksh in this codition-
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM
K: (crying) he bhagwaan.. yeh kya ho gaya.. Laksh..[she keeps her hand on his chest] Laksh.. aanken kholo laksh.. tum apne bache se nahi milna chahoge? aanken kolo naa laksh.. (cries even more)
L: (in constance pain, he mummers) kt...
K: (crying) laksh...
L: kt...
L: (comes in his senses, but still is in constance pain) Kt.. kya hua??
K: (crying) laksh...
L: kt tum ro kyun rahi ho? kya hua...
Tulsi takes kt out of the room, remembering what the doctor had said..
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K: (crying) baa.. apne mujhe..
T: krishna tulsi.. agar mai tujhe bataoungi to tu bardaash nahi kar payegi..
K: (crying) baa..mujhe apni chinta nahi hai..mujhe sirf laksh ki chinta hai.. boliye naa..
Tulsi tells everything the doctor had said..
K: (horrified, and crying) kya..?? matlab ki..laksh ko yeh nahi pata chal sakta ki uska beta..??
-Kt breaks down into tears and sits on the floor crying-
-Tulsi comforts her-
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM
L: (in constance pain, he softly says) mihir daadu..?? kt ko kya ho gaya hai? woh ro kyun rahi hai.. mujhe pata hai ki meri laa parvahi se mera accident hua..humari shaadi ke did..par mein theek ho jaunga..
Mihir is speechless..
M: (in head) main tujhe kaise bataoon laksh?? tujhe kaise samjhaoon?? ki, tere saath jo haadsa hua hai.. usmese kt to bach gayi.. par tu.. tune apne 1 saal ki yaadash kho di..apne pyar ke liye..
Mihir leaves without uttering a word. and Laksh is left un-answered.
L: (he has some flashbacks in head, about the accident) (yells) KT!!!!!!!!!!
K: (gets worried) (runs in the room)..Laksh?? kya hua?? tum theek to ho??
L: (softly) kt.. muhe ek ajib sa shayad..sapna..??
K: laksh..tum itna socho mat..tum aaraam karo..
L: kt.. ek baat poochoon..
K: (nods "yes") (softly) poocho..
L: jab mera..humari shaadi ke din..mera accident abhi hua tha..to tum..kitni ghabrai hui thi.. (he ends it with a sweet smile, waiting for a reply)..
Kt couldn't control herself, and started crying, and left the room. Once again, Laksh was left un-answered.
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PLEASE REPLY GUYZ!!!!!!
Posted: 16 years ago
What happened guys?? why didnt any one of you reply?? is it becuz u didnt like my part or sumthing..
Posted: 16 years ago
please continue πŸ˜ƒ
u r doin a fabulous job πŸ‘
Posted: 16 years ago
ok..i waz just wondering becuz..u guys have replied to every one of my parts, but this.. does this mean i should end it soon?? or are you waiting for more twistz.. πŸ˜‰
Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 12
-The doctor had discharged laksh. he is welcomed home-
-Laksh is in his room, in SN-
-Laksh hears a baby crying, and gets confuzed-
-he decides to go see where it is-
L: (in the hallway, wondering) yeh..bache ki aawaaz kaha se..??
-Finally..he reaches damini's room, and saw a baby lying on the bed crying-
L: (picks the baby) Arerererere..kyun ro rahe hain aap?? kya ho gaya?? (he play's with the baby sweetly, until the baby falls asleep)
-kt comes to the room, and is shocked to see laksh there-
L: (looks at kt, and confuzingly says) kt..yeh bacha yaha.....!! kiska hai yeh??
-Everyone enter's the room, and decide's to tell himthe truth about himself-
L: koi batao naa? kiska hai yeh?? koi bataiye naa..
T: Laksh..yeh bacha tera aur krishna tulsi ka hai..
-laksh was finding it hard to believe-
L: (confuzed) kya..?? mera aur kt ka bacha?? yeh kaisa mazaak hai?? kt.. tum..!! daadi..yeh mera bacha nahi ho sakta..meri to shaadi bhi nahi hui hai ab tak.. aap yeh kaisi baate kar rahi hai?? daadi main..
K: (sadly) baa theek kaih rahi hai laksh.. yeh humara hi bacha hai..
-laksh touches his head in pain. he starts having more and more flashbacks of the accident. everyone is worried. nakul and mihir go and catch laksh, since he was turning unconsious-
L: (before he turns unconsious) ab..yaad aaya.. accident........ab...yaad.........aaya....(he turns unconsious before saying anything else)
K: LAKSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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IN THE HOSPITAL
-Laksh is admitted in the ICU room-
-Kt is not able to control herself from crying-
-Everyone is tryng to get her to calm down-
-doctor comes out of laksh's room-
Sahil: doctor ab kaisa hai laksh??
D: abhi ghabraane ki koi baat nahi hai..woh bilkul theek hai..bas ab puri tarha se theek hone ke liye, unhe regular yeh dawaayieya khaani hongi..(the doctor hands sahil a list of medicine)
S: ji doctor saab..
K: Doctor..kya hum laksh se mil sakte hain??
D: of course..kyn nahi?? par abhi woh bihosh hain.. par aap mil sakte hain..
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM
-Laksh is still unconsious-
kt goes and sits beside laksh..and gets a hold of his hand..
K: (softly) laksh.. (she says sweet thing about laksh, and apologisis for any of her stupid mistakes, when she made him feel bad, and finishes it off with) "I Love You Laksh", aaj ke baad main aisa kabhi nahi karoongi.. mujhe maaf kardo laksh..
-as she finishes a tead from her cheek falls on laksh's forehead-
L: (mummurs) kt..main bhi tumse bahut pyar karta hoon, kt.. par tum maafi kyun maang rahi ho? isme tumhari kya galti..
-they have a sweet moment-
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-Laksh is back home, with his fully gained memory =] yay)
He sweetly holds his baby boy, and plays with him..
Laksh and Kt..love each other, and most of all their baby, and afamily ofcourse.
-Happy Ending, after many Twists-
=]
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SO GUYS?? HOW DID YOU LIKE MY "12 PART" FANFIC.. LOL..
SO YOU GUYS WANT ME TO ADD ANOTHER TWIST, OR KEEP IT LIKE A HAPPY ENDING, AND MAKE ANOTHER FANFIC
PLEASE REPLY..
THANKS!!
LOVE,
ZINU =] πŸ˜‰ Edited by Zinu29 - 16 years ago

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