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Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44)

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Posted: 01 May 2007 at 9:59pm | IP Logged

Hi everyone. This is my very first FanFic. It is on Laksh and Kt. I know many of you might hate it, but i made it anywayz. This is a mystery story which Laksh and Kt are hiding, after their honeymoon!

Kt and Laksh just came back from their Honeymoon, in Switzerland..

T: are.. laksh? kt? wapas aa gaye? (says happily)

L: Ji daadi, hum aa gaye.

T: to phir kt.. meri "good news" kahan hai? huh?

-Kt runs towards the stairs-

L: (laughs) daadi. abhi to aap wait kijiye.

T: Lay.. itni der se aaye, aur kete ho ki wait kijiye? kamaal hai.

L: nahi daadi woh..

T: laksh..

-Tulsi points towards up (kt is standing on the stairs, waiting for laksh)-

T: Jaa.. teri dulhan abhi bhi tera intzaar kar rahi hai. jaise ki suhaag raat ho. (laughs) Jaa..

-Laksh (shyly) runs towards the stairs-

K: (whispers) abhi nahi.......pehle oopar chalo......

-they both shyly go up to their room, unknowingly that Tulsi is following them-

K: Laksh.. abhi nahi! Hum abhi nahi bata sakte ki..

L: Main jaanta hoon kt. mujhe pata hai ki yeh baat tumhaare liye kitna mayine rakhti hai.

K: (starts to cry) sab theek to ho jaye ga na laksh? (says in a shakey voice)

L: Kt.. tum ro kyun rahi ho? dekho kt, rone se khushiyaan wapas nahi aayengi.. (he sweetly wipes off her tears and hugs her, so she dosen't feel bad).

T: (in her head) rone se khushiyaan wapas nahi aajayengi?? iska kya matlab hua?? he Thakur-Ji! kuch buraa na hua hoye in ke saath.

************************************************************ ************************************************************ ***\

NEXT MORNING

Laksh and Kt walk in the door. Laksh is trying to calm Kt down, since she wouldn't stop crying.

T: (worried) Kt?? Laksh..kya hua kt ko? woh ro kyun rahi hai?? KYA HUA??

-Kt runs upwards, and Laksh follows her-

IN THEIR ROOM

L: Kt sambhalo apne aap ko. dekho kt. humme ab unko batana hi ho ga.. sach ke baare mein. dekho kt, agar hum yeh chuppate bhi hain..to aur kitni der tak??

T: LAKSH BATA NAA KYA HUA HAI!!

-Laksh and Kt look up at Tulsi Shocked-

 

TELL ME IF YOU LIKE IT! THIS IS MY FIRST ONE! BE HONEST. IF YOU WANT ME TO CONTINUE PLEASE REPLY.

THANKS!!Smile

 



Edited by Zinu29 - 20 May 2007 at 5:36pm

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Posted: 01 May 2007 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
hi zinu it's really nice n honestly i'am saying this Clap par problem kya hai Cry Cry kya hua kt ko?suspense mat bada
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Posted: 01 May 2007 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
Why is KT crying??? I want to know really badly!!!
....Please do continue

***Please remember that all fanfics must be posted in the fanfics
section---then, you can tell a dev team member of the kyunki forum, and
they can add the link of your fanfic to the archives Tongue
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Posted: 02 May 2007 at 6:11am | IP Logged
I really want to know why kt is crying? Do continue soon, and Great part. Clap Clap Clap
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Posted: 02 May 2007 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ***
PART 2
K: woh. kuch nahi baa..bas..
L: Kt..sach bata do..(he says, just when a tear drops from his cheek)
K: nahi laksh..mujhme himmat nahi hai (says in a shakey voice)
T: (worried) LAKSH KYA BAAT HAI BOL NAA............(waits for a reply..)
L: Daadi...Kt...Daadi...
-Just When He is About to reply, he feels a weight on his shoulder, and realises that Kt has passes out (i mean fainted)
L: (shocked, worried, and yells) KT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
-Tulsi is also shocked-
L: KT!!! AANKEN KHOLO KT!!! KT!! (begins to cry)
T: KRISHNA!!! (shocked)
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ***
IN THE HOSPITAL
Doctor Comes Out Of The ICU Room.
L: (worried) Doctor?? Kt kaisie hai ab??
-Tulsi standing beside Laksh, both worried-
D: Dekhiey patient ki condition bahut critical hai. bachne ke chances kam hai. inko koi bahut bada sagma pohuncha hai. aap please wait kigiye.
L: NAHI...YEH NAHI HO SAKTA...AAP GHOOT BOL RAHE HAIN..(grabs the doc by the collar)....MERI KT KO KUCH NAHI HO SAKTA...
T: Laksh.. Laksh.. Laksh.. Chod de unko.
-Laksh lets go off his collar-
-Laksh Sits down on the bench, and begins to cry-
T: (gently puts her hand on his head) Kuch nahi ho ga laksh. agar tere pyar mein shakti hai. to bharossa rakh. Vishwaas kar ooparwale ka.
L: (crying) Daadi.. kt ko kuch nahi hoga naa??
L: (crying) Daadi.. agar kt ko kuch ho gaya, to main bhi..
T: CHUP LAKSH....KT KO KUCH NAHI HO GA..AUR TO NAA..AISA KABHI SOCNA BHI MAT...
-Laksh gently keeps his head on Tulsi's Lap, but still is crying-
L: Daadi.. Mujhe Kt se milna hai..
T: Theek Hai Laksh..
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ***
IN KT'S ROOM [IN THE HOSPITAL]
-Laksh comes and sits beside Kt. he gently hold's her hand and kisses it-
L: Kt.. jaldi se theek ho jao kt.. mujhse tumhara dard/dukh dekha nahi jaata..
-Meanwhile.. while laksh and tulsi are in the room..something starts happenning to Kt, it is hard for her to breathe-
L: (worried) KT?? KT?? KT??
-Laksh and Tulsi are horrified-
-They go and call the Doctor-
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ***
-The doctor comes out of the room-
-Laksh and Tulsi get up to ask about Kt-
-Just before they ask.....The doctor nods "NO"-
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ***
HEY GUYS TELL ME HOW YOU LIKE MY 2ND PART TO THE STORY.. AND SAY IF I SHOULD CONTINUE OR NOT
THANKS!!

Edited by Zinu29 - 02 May 2007 at 2:59pm
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Posted: 02 May 2007 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz don't let kt die cuz then laksh will be all alone plz just let the baby die they can have another one but if kt dies teh story will SUCK!!! plz don't make her die in this story but otherwise this story is AWESOMEEEE Clap Clap Clap

Edited by iluvpulkit - 02 May 2007 at 3:17pm
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Posted: 02 May 2007 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
don't worry guys, im not guna kill Kt.. i wudn't want the 2 luv birds to be lonely. i will make them be together. But.. just watch for the tWiSt.. Wink
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Posted: 02 May 2007 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
OMGG....wat happen to kt????? hope shez alrite!!.... nyce part Clap Clap Clap continue soooon!!!

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