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Painful...Days of my life - Part 2 Page 1

Yuvraz-Krishna Senior Member

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Painful … Days of my life! – Ek Choti Se Ladki ki Zindagi Ki Kahaani

Character Summary

Ekta Patel 

-          Oldest daughter of Jitendra and Sampita

-          Takes care of her younger brother and sister

Dhruv Patel – Sachin Sharma –

-          Only son of  Jitendra and Sampita

-          Went to Canada for higher studies.

-          Different from his parent because of his values.

Sanjana Patel

-          Youngest daughter of Jitendra and Sampita

-          Just a carbon copy of her mother.

Ajay Patel – Amit Sareen –

-          Oldest Son of Harsh and Mohini

-          Only lives for himself without worrying what's happening around him.

Prince – Ejaz Khan -

-          Second son of Harsh and Mohini

-          Twin brother of Arjun but more sweet personality.

Arjun Patel – Ejaz Khan –

-          Youngest son of Harsh and Mohini

-          Is a spoiled – brat but dose care for his sister Gauri and Amisha and nothing like his twin brother

Gauri Patel – Pallavi Subhash –

-          Oldest daughter of Jai and Bani

-          Live as a mother for Amisha after their mother's death. Still this day she feels like her dad is responsible for that.

Amisha Patel – Moni Roy –

-          Youngest daughter of Jai and Bani

-          Learns the hard way of doing things mostly challenges given to her.

Part One – Arrival At Balaji College –

Two drench girls walked into Ms. Janki Sharma's cabin. They both looked at each other when Ms. Sharma asked them "why isn't their father's name filled in?"
Both Girls-
Sorry Ma'am but we don't know where is our father of who he is?
It's ok girls but next time please arrive early anyways welcome to Balaji College.
Both Girls-
Thanks Ma'am
After leaving the cabin both girls walked outside when two other girls came running behind them.

 Hey Amisha,
What's sup?
Good as I was Prachi and Kajal.
By the way meet my older sister Gauri

Kajal, Prachi-
Nice to meet you Gauri Di
Why are you guys calling me Di?
You are Amisha's older sister so that makes you our sister.
You will never change
And you both are staying at my place because my parents won't mind

It's ok we will stay in a hostel
Di is right
I won't take no for answer
Alright than but we will pay rent as monthly.
That isn't up to us but Papa will decide and welcome to Mumbai.
Amisha hugged her friends than all of them went to Kajal and Prachi's house. 


Why are you both shouting?
Sorry Dadi, but where is Mamma and Papa?
Just ten minutes ago they both left for Canada.
Kajal, It's ok we will stay in some Hostel
Kajal Beti, Who are these people?
Dears Dadi these are mine friends from London and they came to study here in Mumbai at the same college we are so I told them they don't have to at any hostel when we are here but Dadi
They said they will stay only if they pay monthly for the rent.

Than they can't stay in the house?
Gauri, Amisha, Kajal, and Prachi turns around to see a old man looking at them.
Come on Dadu
They can only stay if they won't pay monthly because they are your friends.
Sorry Dadaji but staying at a friend's house like this we don't feel good
You just called me Dadaji that means you are like my grandchild so how can we take money from our granddaughters.
That's right what Anurag is saying we can't take money from our grandchildren.
In that cast only one condition we get to call you both Dadaji and Dadiji.
Both Dadu and Dadi-
Fine with us
Kajal and Prachi, take them to the gust room.
Both girls hugs their grandparents after takes Gauri and Amisha to the gust room for them to freshen up afterwards they all will lunch than go shopping.

Gauri Di, I'm going down you come in few minutes.
Amisha, Please don't let people know about our past history.
I promise
Amisha was going down when she notice a locked door to a room and asked Prachi about it. Prachi told her that in this room no-one have entered only Mamma and Papa.
Leave that!
What classes do you have?
First class is a Spare, than Math, History and not but least Drama class that I didn't want to take but they gave it to me.
You are in all of my classes except for Drama
                 Don't worry Amisha, I'll give you company in Drama.
Thanks Kajal
 After they had lunch they all went shopping for things while Amisha thought about what might be happening at home in London.

I hope you all like this one like my other ones. Please do please your comments.

Edited by Yuvraz-Krishna - 11 May 2007 at 3:03pm

hIra_89 Senior Member

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Posted: 30 April 2007 at 3:51am | IP Logged
nice ff Clap Clap
just one question no pulkit samarat??? mouni roy is there but no pulkit....
Yuvraz-Krishna Senior Member

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Posted: 30 April 2007 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by *nIha*

nice ff Clap Clap
just one question no pulkit samarat??? mouni roy is there but no pulkit....

Nice question but the main leads will be enter soon and don't worry they will be in soon but just wait.
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Posted: 30 April 2007 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
all of them are patel but different mom/dads... confusing..

continue soooonn
Yuvraz-Krishna Senior Member

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Posted: 11 May 2007 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
 Thanks for asking me question. First of all I introduce the Patel family generation because I thought I'll introduces others during the fan-fic. All those Patel are Gauri and Amisha's cousins. (I hope this will help you guys to understand it.)

Painful … Days of my life! – Ek Choti Se Ladki ki Zindagi Ki Kahaani
Part Two
Recap- The girl's are staying in Kajal and Prachi's place.

Sampita- I knew this was going to happen because they both are like their mother.
Jai-Will you shut up
Sampita- I was telling the truth! If those girl's worried about your honer they wouldn't leave like this on their wedding day.
Mohini- Jai I know these girls they wouldn't do anything like this only if there was a reason behind it.
Jai-What kind of reason? The only reason they have is to make me shame in front of one hundred- eighty-nine people.
Jai was burning in anger that his so called daughters ditch him on a special day like this. Sampita Bhabhi is right these girls are just like their mother Bani.
The girls return back home early because next day was first day of college for Gauri and Amisha. Gauri put Amisha into sleep before she changed. After changing she sat down on the table and took out her diary and wrote about her first day in Mumbai.
-Gauri's Diary-
Date- May 13, 2007
I never knew that one day destiny would bring me back to the place where I loss Mummy in accident with my uncle. Mohini Kaki told me that who I use to call uncle wasn't my uncle but someone pretty close to me before she could finish Dad came in. Yes! My dad is none-other than Jai Patel. The most biggest business man but in a father status he wasn't the great. Sometimes when I think about that uncle and the way he use to love me like a father. After my mother's death Amisha became everything to me her smile made me feel like I was her mother but when Dad set up our marriage with his business partner. That moment all the love for him vanish like thin air. We didn't have another option but to ran away from home like with the help of Harsh Kaka and Mohini Kaki. From tomorrow is going to be a new kasauti in our life. Where ever you are Mummy please give us blessing.

~Next Day - May 14, 2007 ~
Dadi was mad at the girls for leaving without having breakfast. Amisha wasn't in a rush but she went early to find all her classes so it won't be hard for her. Gauri wasn't happy o know that she had to sit beside Shiv after yesterday's meeting at the road. Amisha was looking for her history class but she couldn't find it and was scared to ask those boys standing in-front of Prachi's locker.
  Hey! Manthan isn't this girl new here?
Manthan looked at the girl who was nervous from top to bottom. Manthan went up to the girl and asked her if she needed help before Amisha could answer Prachi came.
Prachi-She doesn't need your help so move out of the way Manthan.
Amisha- Who were these boys?
Prachi- Those boys are from very rich family who think they can do anything. The boy asked you for help is Manthan Virani only son of Karan Virani. Second person was Eklavya son of Gautam Virani. Him and Manthan are cousins.
   Hey Prachi, where are you heading?
Prachi- No where Lakshya! Just helping my old friend from London getting to her class.


Edited by Yuvraz-Krishna - 11 May 2007 at 2:59pm
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gr88 ff Clap continue soooon
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