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Posted: 01 May 2007 at 4:41pm | IP Logged
i just finished reading you ff its great continue soon! Tongue

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Originally posted by sirza

i just finished reading you ff its great continue soon! Tongue


Thanks Smile I will continue soon

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really really lovely part. continue soon. r u gona update today? all are waiting for ur next part. Tongue

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Originally posted by sweetmittal

really really lovely part. continue soon. r u gona update today? all are waiting for ur next part. Tongue


Thanks Smile next update coming up-it is a hot one!

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PART 7:

As the days went by, it was becoming quite obvious to Damini and Dr Misra that Angad and Kripa were more than 'just friends'

Damini called Gayatri one day, "Behenji….aap se ek baat karni thi…"

Gayatri: "Bolo Damini…."

Damini: "Aapko Dr Khanna kaise lagte hain?"

Gayatri: "Bahut accha ladka hai, doctor bhi accha hai, uski dawai se mera BP bahut dino baad control mein aaya hai…"

Damini: "Hamari Kripa ke liye kaisa rahega?"

Gayatri: "Tumney tho mere mooh ki baat cheen li….main bhi yahi soch rahi thi….aakhir Kripa bhi tho ab 21 ki ho gayi hai…..lekin darr lagta hai…"

Damini: "Darr? Kyon?"

Gayatri: "Pataa nahin wo Mumbai ka rehnaey waala…..yahan sirf ek saal ke liye hi aaya hai…..aage kya iraada hai uska? Lagta tho mujhey bhi aisa hai ki wo Kripa ko aur Kripa usko pasand karti hai, par aage baat kaise badhaaun?"

Damini: "Main Dr Misra se baat karti hoon……wo shayad Angad ke dil ke baat jaan sakein"

Gayatri: "Theek hai! Main Kripa se bhi baat kar leti hoon….uske dil ki baat bhi pataa chal jaaye tho accha hai…."

After Kripa's wounds had healed well over the next 3-4 weeks, there was no reason for Angad to "examine" her regularly. He was very pleased with the results and could not help patting himself on the back, "shayad Dr Misra theek kehte hain, meri ungaliyon mein sach much jaadoo hai…..I should consider plastics as an option after my training…."

At some pretext or another, Angad started paying regular visits to Kripa's house- "auntie main aapka haal poonchney aaya tha…….Kripa se kahiye ki clinic mein thoda kaam hai…..Kripa ke ghaav dekhney aaya tha……"

Gayatri knew that those were all excuses; Angad was there for Kripa and Kripa only.

One day, when Gayatri was massaging Kripa's long thick tresses, she asked, "tujhey Dr Khanna kaise lagte hain?"

Kripa blushed, but Gayatri could not tell as she was facing Kripa's back.

"Maa…..aap kyon poonch rahi hain? He is a good doctor…..aur…aur sab log unhey pasand karne lage hain….aur kya?" Kripa replied

"Main teri baat kar rahi hoon pagli!"

"Maaaaa…..aisa kuch nahin hai…. Wo ek acche insaan aur acche doctor hain…bas!" Kripa lied.

"Hmmm…..chalo dekhtey hain….par beta ek baat ka dhyaan rakhna….wo badhe sheher ka rehney waala hai…..hum chote log hain, sab log humein yahan jaante hain, kabhie koi aisa kaam mat karna jo hamari maryada se baahar ho…..aur yadi tujhey wo sach much pasand hai tho main bhaiyya se keh kar aage baat badhaa sakti hoon…" Gayatri caressed her hair affectionately.

Kripa just blushed and shut her eyes; she knew her mom was right-there was no doubt that what she felt for Angad was not friendship or a mere fondness-it was beyond that…..she had fallen for him and his charm badly……the way he looked at her, touched her, smiled at her…..it was irresistible……..but she was too shy to admit to it or express it.

One day, when Gayatri was out shopping and Kripa was alone at home in the kitchen, Angad dropped in unannounced as usual, "kya banaa rahi ho? Bahut acchi khushboo aa rahi hai…," he just walked in casually.

"Maa ghar par nahin hai….wo bazaar gayi hain…" Kripa dropped a hint that she was alone

Angad followed her to the kitchen and grabbed her wrist. He pulled her closer and looked into her eyes, "tho kya tum soch thi ho main roz maa se milne aata hoon?"

Kripa tried to free herself and lowered her eyes, "nahin….aap maa ka BP check karne aate hai na?"

"Hmm….unka BP tho theek ho gaya, par mere BP ka kya hoga?" he smiled with a little twinkle in his eyes and looked into her eyes.

"Chhod iye…please main kitchen ka kaam kar rahi hoon…," she said softly

"Ek shart par," he was still holding her wrist with his strong hands.

"Shart?"

"Haan….promise ki tum mera dil chura logi….," he came behind her and whispered in her ear, "please….chura lo na dil mera…."
Kripa pulled away, "na…na..na…"

Enjoy this song as Angad keeps pleading Kripa to fall for him and Kripa keeps denying her feelings:

http://www.dishant.com/lyrics/song-972.html

"chura lo na dil" from "kareeb"



ANGAD:
Dil mera chura lo
Aankhon mein chhupa lo
Apna bana lo sanam

KRIPA:
Na na na..
Na na na..
Haan haan haan
Na na na na

ANGAD:
Chura lo na dil mera sanam
Bana lo na apna sanam
Ki tere bin na ji sakenge
Ki tere bin na mar sakenge
Kuchh bhi na kar sakenge

KRIPA:
Chura lo na dil mera sanam
Chura lein kyon dil tera sanam

Na na na..

ANGAD:
Haan haan haan

KRIPA:
Na na na na

Masala baant loon
Main pyaaz kaat loon
Chhuri kidhar gayi
Uff hai nal khula hua
ANGAD:
Main keh raha hoon kya
Tu sun rahi hai kya
Tu sun rahi hai kya
Main keh raha hoon kya

KRIPA:
Tera deewanapan hai yeh
O bekhabar kitchen hai yeh
Yeh kyon vahaan utha dhuaan
Kya jaane kya jal gaya

ANGAD:
Tere bin na ji sakenge
Ki tere bin na mar sakenge
Kuchh bhi na kar sakenge
Chura lo na dil mera sanam
Chura lein kyon dil tera sanam


KRIPA:
Na jaane kya kaha
Kaho na phir zara
Sunoon mein gaur se
Kaho na zor se

ANGAD:
Kaha jo zor se
To chaaron aur se
Hasenge hum pe sab
Hamaare shor se

KRIPA:
Karenge baat phir kabhi
Jawaab chaahiye abhi
Nahin nahin abhi nahin
Itni bhi jaldi hai kya

ANGAD:
Ki tere bin na ji sakenge
Ki tere bin na mar sakenge
Hum soch kar kahenge

Angad finally got frustrated and went into the backyard. He pretended he was really upset and would stop wooing her any more:


Achcaha hua jo pyaar ki pehchaan ho gayi
Dete thay jis pe jaan woh anjaan ho gayi
Mausam to main nahin hoon
Jo aaoonga jaoonga
Rootha jo ek baar to vaapas na aoonga


Na na na..
Na na na..

KRIPA:
Haan haan haan
Na na na na

Kripa followed him and knew that she could not deny her feelings for him anymore:


Chura lo na dil mera sanam
Bana lo na apna sanam
Ki tere bin na ji sakenge
Ki tere bin na mar sakenge
Hum soch kar kahenge

Dil mera churalo
Aankhon mein chhupalo
Apna banalo sanam..

Angad was standing with his back to her. She came and leaned her head on his back and said, "mujhey tumhari shart manzoor hai….par kabhie wapas jane ki baat nahin karna…..warna main jee nahin paaoongi….."

Angad smiled and turned around. He looked at Kripa and cupped her face in his hands, "sach?"

Kripa shut her eyes and nodded silently. He traced the curves of her face and outline of her lips with his thumbs, "God! You are beautiful! Kripa maine aaj tak tumhare jaisi khubsoorat ladki nahin dekhi…..main tumhara diwana banta jaa raha hoon……mera ilaaj karogi?"

Kripa's heart was racing at 100 miles an hour; she was breathing heavily as she felt sweat beads on her forehead and her hands; her eyes still closed, she whispered back, "jo khud bimaar ho, wo ilaaj kaise kare?"

Angad kept caressing her lower lip with his thumb, driving her into a frenzy of sensations, her body had never experienced before.

He finally bent over and gently touched his lips to hers and whispered into her lips, "aise…"

Kripa's arms impulsively circled his neck, as he gently pulled her closer by her waist. His hands gradually slipped under her kurta, feeling the soft curve of her bare back and waist. Their bodies were throbbing against each other; their hearts beating in unison as Angad's tongue and lips deepened their grip on hers. Kripa surrendered herself to the sweet and steamy sensation of his kiss and thought she was like a feather floating in the air, far far away from the ground……….

They heard the front door unlock, "KRIPA! KRIPA! Kahan hai tu? Zara yeh bazaar ka samaan andar le aa…..," Gayatri's voice floated from inside the house. Kripa pulled herself back in haste, still dizzy from Angad's passionate kiss. She wiped her lips and straightened her kurta, "Uh…Uh…main abhi aayi maa!" She looked at Angad; his eyes were still burning with hunger; he did not let go of her.

"Angad….please mu…mujhey jaane do…" she stuttered, trying to swallow hard as her throat felt parched.

Angad pulled back, but kept his piercing gaze on her, "aaj chhod diya hai…..ab kabhie chhod ne ki baat mat karna…..main tumhara ghar par intezaar karoonga……please aaj shaam ko wahan aa jaana….I will wait for you….," he smiled and left from the back gate of the house.

…to be continued….

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it is really hot part. i loved it. yay they admit there feelings. continue soon. i am waiting. Embarrassed

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Posted: 01 May 2007 at 8:51pm | IP Logged
Heart thats was soo hot continue soon1 Tongue

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Posted: 01 May 2007 at 8:54pm | IP Logged
gr8 part

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