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Posted: 17 May 2007 at 3:21pm | IP Logged
guess what bheegiiii guess whatttt I FINALLY READ ALL OF IT HEHE:P:P:P
but waitttt....javed and naina cnt hav a past....tht wud make angad tehzeeb's brother!!!!

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Originally posted by *Ejaz4Hinna*

guess what bheegiiii guess whatttt I FINALLY READ ALL OF IT HEHE:P:P:P
but waitttt....javed and naina cnt hav a past....tht wud make angad tehzeeb's brother!!!!


Thanks for reading the whole thing

Don't worry, Angad and Tehzeeb are not related to each other in any way!! Smile

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PART 42:

EID DAY:

Angad and Mishti got ready early in the morning.

Mishti had told Angad that Dr Sohail Mirza wanted her to accompany him to Tehzeeb's house for the Eid celebrations.

"Chalo, main bhi wahin jaa raha hoon…saath saath chalte hain" Angad smiled at Mishti.

Angad wore the black sherwani, they had purchased yesterday. Mishti wore a beautiful green and gold lehnga.

"Arre…subah subah bhai-behen kahan chal diye?" Naina asked

'Mama…aap bhi chalo na…." Angad asked

"Nahin nahin…aaj meri samaj waalon ke saath mandir mein meeting hai….aaj waise bhi tumhare nanaji ki barsi hai….chalo tum dono bhi mandir chalo…." Naina insisted

"Haan mama….hum bhi chalenge….yadi nanaji ki barsi hai tho hum zaroor aayenge…par aap bhi hamare saath chaliye…" Angad pleaded

"Lekin kahan jaa rahe ho? Kisi dost ki shaadi hai kya?" Naina enquired

"Nahin mama…..hum Tehzeeb aur Sohail sahib ke saath Eid manaane jaa rahe hain…" Angad said frankly; there was no point beating around the bush anymore.

Naina dropped the puja thali from her hand, "Hey Ram! Yeh kya keh rahe ho? Tumhari mati tho maari nahin gayi….wo manhoos ladki phir teri zindagi mein aa gayi? Aur yeh Sohail kaun hai? Kya Mishti tuney bhi?"

Mishti just lowered her eyes and nodded gently, "haan mama….wo ek doctor hain….bahut acche hain…"

"Us manhoos ladki se peecha nahin choota aur ab ek aur musibat aa gayi…" Naina started crying.

"MAMA! Bas bahut ho gaya ! Aap apni bahu ke baare mein aisa keh rahi hain! Aap jaanti bhi hain us ladki ne aapke liye kya kya kiya hai?" Angad raised his voice

"Kya kiya hai? Jhooth bolkar mere ghar ko apavitra kar gayi…phir mere bete ko khaa gayi….wo tho maine itney somwaar vrat kiya jo tu wapas aa gaya…." Naina said angrily.

"Mama..yadi aapne vrat kiye the tho wahan bhi Tehzeeb aur uski dadi ne mere liye masjid mein dua maangi thi…..main jaanta hoon aap sab ne mere liye puja aur dua ki thi par sach tho yeh hai ki mera pyaar hi mujhey wapas laaya hai….jitna mujhey Tehzeeb ke pyaar par vishwaas hai, utna na aapke bhagwan mein hai aur na hi kisi khuda mein!" Angad's eyes were burning with anger.

"Us muslim ladki ne tera dimaag kharaab kar diya hai…" Naina yelled.

"Mama! Mere peeche aapka aur Mishti ka saara kharcha us MANHOOS MUSLIM ladki ne hi uthaya tha….yahan tak aapka bone marrow transplant bhi uski wajah se huya hai!" Angad shouted back.

"Aisi zindagi se kya faayda?" Naina kept complaining.

Mishti was shocked, "kya…wo saari pension aur charity….sab Tehzeeb ne…Oh my God!….mainey usey kitna bura bhala kaha….wo kya soch thi hogi hamare baare mein?"

"Mishti….meri Tehzeeb aisi nahin hai….she has forgiven both of you…..wo aap dono se milna chahti hai…please mama, insaniyat ke naate hi sahi, aap please hamare saath chaliye….aur Tehzeeb ke baare mein please kuch bhi ulta seedha mat boliye…"

"NAHIN! Main apna dharam bhrasht nahin kar sakti!….Tum dono ko jaana hai tho jaao…aakhir…aakhir….," she paused, "jao…aur mandir aane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai….wahan ka pavitra mahaul mat kaharab kar dena…" Naina picked her puja thali and went back to her prayer room

"Mishti…chalo hum chalte hain..mama ka gussa thanda ho jaane do…..hum baad mein mandir bhi chale jaayenge….chalo.." Angad picked the car keys and left with Mishti.

Mishti hesitated, but she knew Angad was right. She followed him to the car.

Naina was fuming, "yeh Angad tho pagal tha hi us muslim ke peeche…yeh Mishti ko kaun mil gaya? Hey bhagwan….yeh kalyug kahan se aa gaya?"

AT THE MANDIR:

"aaiye aaiye Naina devi….aap hi ka intezaar tha…" Gopal Verma, an activist of the Hindutva Samaj welcomed her.

"Chalo bhaaiyon kirtan shuru karo…" Sai Thackarey, another member of the samaj ordered the singers at the temple.

After the kirtan and puja, some of the followers came and sat next to Naina, "Naina devi hum chahte hain ki aap hamare samaj ki uttaradhikari ban jaaye….president of hindutva samaj…." Gopal Verma pleaded

All the other members agreed and started touching her feet or honoring her with garlands.

"Yeh aap sab logon ka pyaar hai warna main is layak kahan?" Naina said

"Nahin nahin….Khanna sahib ke baad aap hi is samaj ko ek rakh sakti hain…aakhir wo tho rahe nahin is duniya mein…un darindon ne unhey maar daala!" Sai Thackerey said as he still remembered the riots, which had killed Naina's father, Dharam Kumar Khanna.

Naina was a little uncomfortable with the term "darinda"

"Khair bhaiyon aur behenon, un riots mein tho dono hindu aur muslim marey the…..kisi ek ka dosh nahin tha!" for some unknown reason she tried to defend both sides of the community. Somehow, Mishti and Angad had touched an old chord inside her. She remembered how she used to argue with her fanatic father, but it seemed like she was becoming just like her father now!

"Naina ji aap kya keh rahi hain?….Aapko tho yaad hai na unhone Khanna sahib ka kya hashr kiya tha?"

"Haan main jaanti hoon…par mujhey lagta hai ki sab ek saath pyaar se rahe tho shayad aise riots ho hi na.." Naina said

"Naina devi! Aap soch samajh kar boliye…..aapke pitaji ki aatma ko shanti nahin milegi warna…" one of the activists interrupted.

"Chaliye…beeti batein bhoolkar hum sab pitaji ki yaad mein kuch der shanti rakhte hain..," Naina closed her eyes and meditated for her the peace of her father's soul.

TEHZEEB'S HOUSE:

Tehzeeb's house was beautifully decorated for the festive occasion. Mishti and Angad were greeted by the darbaan and led to the main celebration area.

There were a group of women sitting in a corner and singing festive songs with a dholak and harmonium. A lady was putting mehndi on people's palms. Angad saw Tehzeeb in the corner wearing the beautiful lehnga and jewelry, he had selected for her.

He gave her a approving look and bowed a little with a 'salaam'

Tehzeeb blushed and returned his 'salaam' coyly.

Mishti went and sat with Tehzeeb, "Eid mubarak Tehzeeb! Kaisi ho?"

Tehzeeb gave Mishti a big hug, "Eid mubarak!" she had tears in her eyes, 'mujhey bahut khushi hai ki tum is mubarak mauke par hamare yahan aayi….mama nahin aayi?"

Mishti lowered her eyes, "wo…wo aaj hamare nanaji ki barsi hai na…iss liye nahin aa saki…." Mishti covered up for her mom

"Koi baat nahin…main un se milne chali jaaoongi….wo kab tak mujhsey naaraz baithi rahengi?" Tehzeeb said confidently.

"Tehzeeb…I hope you can forgive me for what I said and did to you…meri wajah se tum aur bhai ko kitni taqleef uthaani padhi…." Mishti held Tehzeeb's hand.

"Mishti…main tumhari jagah hoti tho shayad main bhi yahi karti….akhir ek jhooti ladki ka kaun yakeen kar sakta hai…" Tehzeeb squeezed Mishti's hand.

"Tum bahut achhi ho tehzeeb…bhai is very lucky to have you…" Mishti wiped her tears.

"Mishti! Dekho kaun aa raha hai?" Tehzeeb pointed at the door

"Auntie aap!" Sarah ran towards Mishti and hugged her, "Eid mubarak ho!"

Sohail blushed a little and came forward, "Eid mubarak Mishti"

Tehzeeb joined them, "Sohail bhai…sharam kyon aa rahi hai? Aise nahin! Gale lag kar eid mubarak kahiye…"

Both and Sohail and Mishti just blushed and stood there with their eyes lowered.

Angad joined them and put his arm around Tehzeeb, "Tehzeeb saahiba…humein tho koi sharam nahin…aap jab kahe, hum aapko gale lagaane ko tayyar hain…"

Everyone laughed as Javed and Aapi also joined them in celebration.

"Aaj main bahut khush hoon…..mera poora parivar mere saath hai…..tum Angad ki bahen ho?" Javed asked Mishti

"Jee uncle….hum dono twins hain….par shukr hai ki saare good looks mujhey mil gaye…." Mishti laughed as she introduced herself. She thought, "uncle, aapko kahin dekha hai….in fact I have seen someone like you in a younger version…kahan? Pata nahin yaad nahin aa raha…"


Javed kept staring at Mishti, "tum sach much bahut khubsoorat ho beti….pata nahin kyon bahut jaani pehchaani si lagti ho…"

"Yeh apne school ki sabse strict teacher hai sir….ho sakta hai aap bhi Mishti ki class mein daant khaa chuke ho.." Angad ducked before Mishti punched him in front of everyone.

"Arre…arre..Eid ke din ladhte nahin hai…chalo sab milkar gaana gaate hain…" Javed announced

"Uncle gaana gaate hain?" Mishti asked Tehzeeb

"Haan…mujhey bhi badhe ho kar hi pata chala hai….lagta hai apne college ki dino mein Abbu kaafi naami gaayak the…" Tehzeeb whispered into Mishti's ears.

Then it clicked! Mishti remembered, "yaad aaya…mama ki college ki photo…Oh my God! What a coincidence….main ghar jaakar mama ko bataaoongi…."

Javed started singing this song. Sohail, Angad, Tehzeeb, Mishti and other guests at the function soon joined him in chorus:

"Eid mubaarak" from "tumko na bhula paayenge"

http://www.dishant.com/lyrics/song-5049.html


--MALE 1--
Assalaam alaikum assalaam
Eid ka hai yaaron yeh payaam
Hoye, assalaam alaikum assalaam
Eid ka hai yaaron yeh payaam
Yeh Eid ka tyohaar hai, khushiyon ka hai tyohaar - 2
Na tera hai na mera hai yeh sab ka hai tyohaar
Yeh pyaar ka paigaam hai yeh pyaar ka paigaam
Mubaarak Eid mubaarak, mubaarak Eid mubaarak - 2
(Chaahe voh rehman ho ya bhai apna ram
Hindu Muslim Sikh Isaai, sab ko hai salaam) - 2

--FEMALE--
Bas pyaar hi aaghaaz ho aur pyaar hi anjaam
Khushiyon ke is mausam ki kabhi na aaye shyaam

--MALE 1--
Yeh Eid ka tyohaar hai, khushiyon ka hai tyohaar
Na tera hai na mera hai yeh sab ka hai tyohaar
Yeh pyaar ka paigaam hai yeh pyaar ka paigaam
Mubaarak Eid mubaarak, mubaarak Eid mubaarak
Hoye, mubaarak Eid mubaarak, mubaarak Eid mubaarak
Ho ho ho ho, ho ho ho ho, ho ho ho ho ho - 2

--CHORUS--
Mubaarak Eid mubaarak, sabhi ko Eid mubaarak - 2

--MALE 1--
Ho, jo bhi samjhe pyaar ko
Voh hai sab ka yaar
Pyaar nahin to kuch bhi nahin
Pyaar se hai sansaar

--MALE 2--
(Oye Eid da jappi paake yaaron
Rab da shukar manaaye) - 2
Arre tera mera chadke yaaron sabno gale lagaaye
Ke main jhooth boliya, o ke main kufer toliya
O ke main jhooth boliya, ke main kufer toliya - 2

--FEMALE--
Yeh Eid ka tyohaar hai, khushiyon ka hai tyohaar
Na tera hai na mera hai yeh sab ka hai tyohaar

--MALE 1--
Yeh pyaar ka paigaam hai yeh pyaar ka paigaam
Mubaarak Eid mubaarak, hoye mubaarak Eid mubaarak

--FEMALE--
Mubaarak Eid mubaarak, mubaarak Eid mubaarak

--MALE 1--
Assalaam alaikum assalaam
Eid ka hai yaaron yeh payaam
Yeh Eid ka tyohaar hai, khushiyon ka hai tyohaar
Na tera hai na mera hai yeh sab ka hai tyohaar
Yeh pyaar ka paigaam hai yeh pyaar ka paigaam
Mubaarak Eid mubaarak, mubaarak Eid mubaarak - 2

--CHORUS--
Mubaarak Eid mubaarak, sabhi ko Eid mubaarak – 2


After the song, everyone ate a hearty meal and sat around talking.

Tehzeeb and Mishti joined the other women and decided to get mehndi applied on their palms.

Javed made an announcement, "Bahut jaldi hi main apni beti, Tehzeeb aur apne bete se bhi badhkar Sohail ka nikaah unke pyaar Angad aur Mishti se karwa raha hoon….aap sab bhi nikaah mein in sab ko dua dene aayie ga…"

Some of the guests whispered amongst themselves, "ek hindu se shaadi? Tauba tauba…yeh kya ho raha hai? Arre khud Javed sahib bhi tho kisi hindu ladki ke ishq ke shikaar the…unke college mein gaana gaati thi unke saath…...jaisa baap waisi beti…." They laughed at Javed and Tehzeeb's expense.

Mishti overheard the conversation, "Hey bhagwan…yeh ladki kahin mama….oh my god! Mujhey ghar jaakar photo phir se dekhni hogi…"

Soon after the announcement, some ladies broke out into a beautiful song from "Zubeidaa"



http://www.dishant.com/lyrics/song-19981.html

Mehndi hai rachnewali
Hathon mein gehri laali
Kahin sakhiyaan ab kaliyaan
Hathon mein khilne wali hain
Tere manko jeevan ko
Nai khushiyan milne wali hai

O hariyali banno
Le jane tujhko gooeeyan
Aane wale hain sahiyan
Thamenge aake baiyan, goonjegi sahnaiyan
Anganai anganai

Mehndi hai rachnewali
Hathon mein gehri laali
Kahin sakhiyaan ab kaliyaan
Hathon mein khilne wali hain
Tere manko jeevan ko
Nai khushiyan milne wali hai

Gayen maiya aur moti
Gayen behna aur bhabhi ki
Mehndi khil jaye, rang laye hariyali banno
Gayen phufi aur chachi
Gayen nani aur dadi ki
Mehndi man bhaye . saz jaye hariyali banno
Mehndi roop sanware ho, mehndi rang nikhare ho
Hariyali banni ke aanchal mein utrenge taare

Mehndi hai rachnewali
Hathon mein gehri laali
Kahin sakhiyaan ab kaliyaan
Hathon mein khilne wali hain
Tere manko jeevan ko
Nai khushiyan milne wali hai


Tehzeeb, Angad , Mishti and Sohail then danced on a few other songs.

By late afternoon, most of the guests had left and everyone was exhausted.

"Tehzeeb…humein chalna chahiye…aaj hamare nanaji ki barsi hai….humein mandir jaana hoga…" Angad said

"Nahin…main bhi chaloongi….mujhey mama ko dekhe kitne din ho gaye….Farhan ko bhi le chalte hain…." Tehzeeb insisted.

Angad looked serious, "Nahin Tehzeeb aaj nahin!"

Tehzeeb was offended, "kyon? Aaj kyon nahin? Kya mere mandir jaane se tumhara mandir naa-pak ho jaayega?"

"Tehzeeb…..kya keh rahi ho tum? Mera yeh matlab nahin tha…..tum se pavitra meri duniya mein aur kuch nahin hai…..main nahin chahta ki mama tumhari be-izzati karein….pehle main unhey manana chahta hoon….phir tumhey izzat ke saath unke paas le jaaoonga…." Angad caressed her sad face.

"Theek hai….jaisi tumhari marzi……Farhan ko le jao…shayad usey dekhkar unka dil pighal jaaye…" Tehzeeb suggested.

"Nahin main tum dono ek saath hi le jaaoonga…." Angad kissed her forehead and left with Mishti.

AT THE MANDIR:

Angad and Mishti received blessings from the pandit and wished all the people at the gathering. They sat around with Naina for a while and joined in the kirtan.

After the kirtan, they left with their mother for home.

"Mama…aap please ek baar Tehzeeb aur Sohail se mil leejiye…" Angad pleaded again

"Jo naamumkin hai, usey mumkin karne ki koshish mat karo…." Naina said sternly

"Mama…mera ek beta bhi hai….Farhan….aap uski dadi hain…please meet him at least" Angad requested

"Farhan? Naam bhi muslim hi rakha na usney……main jaanti hoon wo shaadi karke tujhey muslim banana chahti hai….yahi saazish hai in logon ki…" Naina said

"Mama…aap ko kya ho gaya hai? Aap nanaji se bhi zyaada kattar hoti jaa rahi hain…." Mishti spoke up.

"Tumhare nanaji ne apni jaan de di thi apne dharam ke liye…aur tum dono unke kiye karaye par paani pher rahe ho!" Naina turned her head away in anger.

Angad dropped his mother and Mishti home, "main jaa raha hoon….ho sakta hai late ho jaaoon.."

"Kahan jaa raha hai?" Naina asked

"Jahan log pyaar mein vishwaas karte ho…nafrat mein nahin!" Angad reversed his car and sped away.

…to be continued….

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PART 43: short update

Angad calmed down as he drove to Tehzeeb's house. He thought, "mujhey kya ho gaya hai? Main mama par gussa kyon ho raha hoon itna….kyon unhey pyar se samjha nahin paa raha….aakhir mama ne kitni taqleefon se mujhey aur Mishti ko paala hai….warna hum dono aaj bhi kisi anath ashram mein hi hote…..unhone kabhie shaadi nahin ki, sirf hamari parvarish mein itne saal nikaal diye….she has done so much for us, par main Tehzeeb aur mama ko saath saath apne dil mein rakhna chahta honn…..alag alag nahin!"

Aapi greeted him at the door, "aao beta….kya hua tumhari maa nahin aaya?"

Angad lowered his eyeand lied, "wo unki tabiyat kuch…"

"Koi baat nahin beta…main samajh ti hoon….itna aasaan nahin hai yeh sab….par mujhey naaz hai tum par….main jaanti hoon tum Tehzeeb ka saath nahin chhodoge…..kaash sab mein tumhari jaisi himmat hoti…." Aapi said somberly

"Aapi…Tehzeeb hai hi aisi ladki….main uske liye poori duniya se bagawat kar sakta hoon…" Angad smiled and reassured Aapi, "kahan hai meri duniya?" he grinned

"Farhan ko sulaane gayi thi…oopar hogi" Aapi smiled and gestured upwards.

Angad went upstairs and found Farhan sleeping peacefully in his room. Angad kissed his son and whispered, "you are my little Eid and Diwali gift.."

He looked around, but could not find Tehzeeb anywhere.

"Tehzeeb? Princess? Jaan-e-man? Kahan ho tum?" He searched everywhere, but could not find her. Finally, he saw her standing in the balcony outside her room.

He tip-toed into the balcony and grabbed her from behind, "mera Eid ka chaand, kahan gayab ho gayi? Kab se dhoondh raha hoon tumhey"

Tehzeeb did not respond, but Angad felt her sobbing. He turned her face towards him, "kya hua princess? Yeh aankhein kyon suja rakhi hain? Mujhsey naaraz ho? I am sorry mandir mein der ho gayi….I promise main kal tumhey mama se milwaane le jaaoonga….," he kissed her forehead.

Tehzeeb hugged him tightly and buried her face in his chest, "n..nahin…y..yeh baat n..nahin hai..," she said between sobs.

Angad pulled back and lifted her chin with his finger, "phir kya baat hai? Kya Eid gift pasand nahin aaya?…Andar bedroom mein chalo, bahut accha gift de sakta hoon…" he joked

"Mazaak ki baat nahin hai Angad….maine aaj…maine aaj…" she started sobbing again
"Kya hua?" Angad was getting concerned now

She hugged him again and bawled, "mera is duniya mein koi nahin hai…"

Angad caressed her back, "tho main aur Farhan paraaye hain kya? Aisi baatein kyon kar rahi ho?"

"Nahin Angad…tumhare jaane ke baad maine Abbu aur Aapi ki baatein sun li thi…..main Abbu ki beti nahin hoon….main unke dost Saad Khan ki beti hoon…."

Angad was shocked, "tum yakeen se aisa keh sakti ho?"

CONVERSATION BETWEEN AAPI AND ABBU OVERHEARD BY TEHZEEB

"Ammi….aaj main bahut khush hoon….aisa lagta hai jaise meri zimmedari ab khatam ho rahi hai….ab Tehzeeb ka nikaah bhi ho jaayega,, tho Saad ko tassali ho jaayegi.."

"Beta, Saad tho ab is duniya mein hai nahin….ab tho tu hi Tehzeeb ka baap hai….Tehzeeb ne ek saal ki umar se tujhey hi Abbu maana hai…"Aapi said

"Haan Ammi….marne se pehle Saad ne mujhsey vaada liya tha ki main uski beti ko khush rakhoon aur ek acchi muslim ladki ki tarah paaloon….ab mujhey lagta hai ki main kaamyaab ho gaya…kya hua yadi wo Hindu se shaadi karna chahti hai…..Saad bhi tho uski khushi hi chahta hoga….."

"Haan….lekin beta kabhie Tehzeeb ko yeh baat mat bataana….wo tujhey hi apna sab kuch maanti hai….uska dil toot jaayega….Angad ke wapas aane se itni mushkil se juda hai…main apni bacchi ko phir se dukhi nahin dekh sakti…."

"aap sahi kehti hai Ammi…yeh raaz hamare beech hi rahega…"


ANGAD AND TEHZEEB IN THE BALCONY:

"Bas itni si baat hai princess? Tum tho itni bahadur ho…..tho kya hua yadi Abbu tumhare asli pita nahin hai…jo paalta hai wo hi pita hota hai….jaanti ho main aur Mishti bhi ek anath ashram se laaye gaye the….Nanaji laaye the humein…aur phir mama ne paala hai humein…unhone tho kabhie shaadi bhi nahin ki…" Angad said

"Really? Tho mama ne tumhey poori zindagi akele hi paala hai?" Tehzeeb was surprised

"Haan bilkul akele…..bahut ehsaan hai unke hum par…." Angad said

"Angad mujhey afsos is baat ka nahin ki main Abbu ki beti nahin, par is baat ka hai ki maine unhey kitni taqleef di…ghar se bhaag gayi…baat baat par unse ladh baith ti thi….I should have been grateful to him, instead I always defied him…." She started sobbing again
"Tehzeeb…yeh socho yadi tum unki har baat maanti tho aaj tum Mrs Aamir Ali hoti.." he grinned and looked into her eyes.

Tehzeeb hit him playfully, "main bhi tho yahi chahti thi….pata nahin tum kahan se aa tapke?" she laughed wiping her tears.

"Samunder se! Mediterranean sea se to be precise! Chalo….let's go for a drive….kuch change ho jaayega…." Angad held her hand and they walked out

"Hariram!…zara car le aana….hum zara drive ke liye jaayenge…" Tehzeeb ordered

"Jee madam….aap log baithiye…..main le chalta hoon….kahan chalein?" Hariram asked

"Worli beach ki taraf chalo…" Angad.

"Sahib, main abhi ek second mein aaya....mera license ghar par hi reh gaya hai..."

"Theek hai jaldi aana..." Angad said

Hariram got off and went to a corner to make a phone call......

…to be continued…

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amazing parts
if angad and tehzeeb are both adopted then naina and javed can get together
hope naina excepts thezeeb and frahan
your fanfic is getting intresting day by day
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i wonder if hariram is calling naina???? Angry Angry Angry or is it mishti who is trying to figure out the truth that she will come and talk with javed when tehzeeb is not at home good work Clap

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Posted: 17 May 2007 at 6:18pm | IP Logged
hey, sorry for the late comments yaar. i got my midterm to day so iwas studying. but i am happy i got B on my exam and i get to read this lovely and romantic parts of this ff. they are really awesome. please continue one more of this part if u can. can't wait. Wink

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Posted: 17 May 2007 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
awesome part


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