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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
ok guys i'll post the next short pat now in 5 minz

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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
here's the next part!enjoy!

He gets up real fast and says : I'm sorry, I'm really sorry, aapko kahin chot to nahi lagi na? Vo mai apne frnds ke saath khel raha tha aur gati se prithvi ne mujhe dhakka dia aur mai Embarrassed Ouch

K: ok, ok , its ok, it really is, mai thik hoon.

A: oh ok. Ouch

Angad and company get outta there giggling.

M: kripa, tum thik ho?

K: of course dee, I'm perfectly ok.

M: tune usse pehchcana nahi?

K(brushing sand out of her clothes): ab vo koi prime minster hai kya, jo usse mai pehchanti rahoo??

M: kripa, duffer, vo angad tha, angad khanna.

K(blinking at mishti): w-w-what??????? Confused Confused

Mishti starts laughing: krips yaar tum bhi na, bilkul budhu ho.

K(smiles): watever dee not fair, aap mujhe hamesha tang karte rehte ho. Angry

M(hugging her): awww my stuipid sweet litle sis
Embarrassed

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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Manan enters the scene and says: ab tum dono sisters ka pyar khatam ho gaya ho to chalen raat ho gai hai, mujhe neend aai hai. LOL LOL

M: kya manan tum bhi na, sone ki padi rehti hai, pehle humein dinner karao phir apne ghar jaake jitna sona hai sote rehne Angry

Ma: jo hukum mere aaka Smile

K: dee pehle mujhe change karna hai mere saare kapde to kharab ho gaye Confused

M: haan mujhe bhi, manan ek kaam karte hain pehle mere ghar chalte, fir vahan se dinner karne chalte hain

Ma: ok meri maa ab chalen plss, bhookh se jaan nikal rahi hai. Confused Confused

K & M: kumbhkaran part-2 LOL LOL

M: bas khane aur sone ke alawa aur koi kaam nahi hai tumhe?

Ma: hai na, tumhe pyar karna.

M: duh Dead

And manan gives her a swee kiss on her forehead, and kripa goes: ahem! Ahem! Mai yahin hoon abhi!

M and Ma: kripaa!!

K: ya?

Both of them: shut up!

Ma: kya zamana aa gaya hai, ab mai apni gf ko kiss bhi nahi kar sakta, hayeeeee rammm!!!!!! Dead Dead

Now it's the girl's turn o shut him up.

Ma: acha yaar mai to paedayishi chup hoon, ab chalo naaa.

K: haan chalo mere to-be-jeejz

Ma: bhai wah! Meri to kismat khul gai

M:ab chalen????

K & Ma: yep ! let's go!

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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
guyss dont forget to post ur comments plz

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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
an yeah! preview- angad and kripa go out for dinner, with each other or not, just wait and watch LOL LOL LOL

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Posted: 28 July 2005 at 12:32am | IP Logged
hey great story plzzzzzzzzzz continue

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Posted: 28 July 2005 at 1:15am | IP Logged
hey i read it 10 mins ago,its gr8,plz continue!!!!!!

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Posted: 28 July 2005 at 1:42am | IP Logged
hey kool gal ur story is truely fab n different so cant wait more............................

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