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DIL NE JISE APNA KAHA-fan fic (Page 4)

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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 5:53pm | IP Logged
very interesting can't wait for more. Clapplease continue.Smile
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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 5:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ritu29

HEY KRITIKA i was just wonderring that in the parinnta song both male and female sing so how did kripa manage to sing the whole song on her own???????


any way its was a gr8 part plz continue as soon as possible


HEY ATLEAST IN THIS FANFIC THERE R NO LOVE TRIANGES OR ANY MIXUPS THATS GOOD


<RITU>


oops! my bad Dead
and yeah! mix ups are there not now but in the future Confused Confused

Edited by kool_gal - 27 July 2005 at 5:57pm
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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 6:03pm | IP Logged
that was really good please keep continuing it...
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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 6:31pm | IP Logged
thnx guys i'm glad u like it

i'll post the next part very soon

byee
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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 6:36pm | IP Logged

Wow, that was just too good...Clap love the relation between Angad and Aaliyah...soo sweet!!!

Plz continue...

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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
thnx... i'll post the next part in 30-40 minnuts

byee
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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 8:12pm | IP Logged
On the beach,

Prithvi: hey angad, hi aaliyah.

A and Aa: hi prithvi!

A: ssup buudy?

Aa: kaisa hoga bhai? Apni vohi poorani ghisi piti life jee raha hai ye to

P: oh ya?

Aa: YA

P: well, welcome to the club.

And starts to run behind her threatning: aaliyah ki bachi, teri to mai!! LOL Embarrassed

Angad is watching them and laughing like crazy. Finally prithvi catches her and throws like a ton of sand on her clothes. Confused Confused
Now angad is rolling in sand and his stomach is aching 'coz of laughing so much, prithvi is also laughing seeing aaliyah covered in sand. Angad and prithvi give each other high-fives.aaliyah is REALLY MAD by now.

Aa: BHAI AAPKO SHARAM NAHI AATI MUJHE TANG KARTE HUE??????? Angry Angry

A: ummm…….. nahhhh.

And p and a start laughing again LOL

Aa: I hate both u.

A & P: me too.

Aa Angry : grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr …. Bhai aap to ghar chalo batati hoon, mom ke saath aapko ek kamre mai band na kar dia to mera bhi naam aaliyah khanna nahi. LOL LOL

They both r laughing even harder now, seeing aaliyah so mad. Just then, a tall, handsome guy showers tonss of sand on angad on prithvi Ouch Confused Ouch . Both of them immidiatly stop laughing, and turn around. Now the guy is giving high- fives to aaliyahand says: tum dono ne meri sweet si dost ko tang kia, ab bhugto, aage se aisa kia na, to mai dono ko sand main gaad hi doonga.

Aa: yay!!!!!!!! Gud one josh!! I love uuuuuu Smile LOL

A: josh!!!! Gaddar!! Cry
And starts singing: dost dost na raha, pyaar pyaar na raha. Cry Cry

J: chup be!

All of start laughing ang give friendly hugs and punches to each other. Smile

Meanwhile, kripa is playing with waves and mishti and mannan are too busy in each others eyes, right then angad spots her and freezes for a moment, he shakes himself and tells aaliyah: ye dekh, teri hi behen lag rahi hai, dekh kya paglon jaisi harkate kar rahi hai. LOL

Aa: bhai! Shut up! Aapko sharam nahi aati kisi ladki ke baare main aisa kehte hue?

A: ummm….. nahhhhhhh


Aa: watevaa

Now kripa is helping two kids build a sand castle. Manan and Mishti are still busy in each other.

And josh and angad and prithvi and aaliyah are playing something that resembles: tag. While, chasing each other they the spot where kripa, mishti and manan are sitting. And BOOM, a crash! And we see that angad has fallen on top kripa!!!!!!!!

that's it now

i know this was a bit short

but, i'll make it up tommorow

and sorry for leaving u guys in suspense LOL LOL

Edited by kool_gal - 27 July 2005 at 8:24pm
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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
and yeah i forgot to say: plzz post ur comments Wink

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