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Angad's angel Senior Member
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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
that was really good plz continue
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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
thnx guys
i'll post the next part in like 1 hr.
bye
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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 4:28pm | IP Logged

good start..............

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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
nice plz continue
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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 5:23pm | IP Logged
Ok guys sorry for the delay I'll continue now

SHARMA HOUSE

A girl is getting out of the washroom in a pink bathrobe, her room is all pink decorated. Her hair is still wet and the sunshine is filling her room. She starts of talking to big teddy bear on her bed- good morning sweetie, did u sleep well last night? Acha now I have to get ready for my recordings islie ab tumhe chod ke jana padega, cyu at night.

She quickly dresses in a pink sleevless(spelling??) top and blue jeans, and runs downstairs telling herself: oh god, aaj to dee mujhe maar dalengi I'm soo late, god help me.

Downstairs another girl is sitting and having breakfast. She yells now: kripaaaaaaaaa, kitna time lagaogi, we're late. Angry

K: aai mishti, I mean dee!!

M: tum na, roz late kar deti ho, acha by the way, mom-dad ka kal raat ko phone aaya tha, tumhare baare mai pooch rahe the, maine kaha tum studio gai ho aaj raat ko unhe phone kar lena, tumne bade dino se unse baat nahi ki hai.

K: ok dee.

Their parents live in USA and they have a big textile bisnuess their.

M: acha ab jaldi chalo, der ho rahi hai.

K: chalo dee.

They both head towards the studio in mishti's car. They reach the studio and ya! Mishti is managing kripa's work just like naina is of angad. They reach the studio and mishti's secretery is waitning outside for them, mishti tells kripa to carry on and she will catch her later. Mishti's secretory tells her that she has something important to tell her.

M: haan bolo

S: ma'am vo aaj subah ek producer ka phone tha vo kripa ke saath ek album karna chahte hain, bohot bada contract hai, I think kripa ko ais oportunity miss nahi karni chahiye.

M: hmmm.. tum unse appointment fix karlo mai kripa ko bata deti hoon.

S: thik hai.

M: acha sanya?

S: ya?

M: solo album hai?

S: nahi duet hai, unhone kaha tha ki co-star abhi finalise nahi hua jaise hi hoga vo bata denge.

M: ok, tum jald se jald appointment fix kar lo.

S: ok

Then mishti enters the studio, kripa has already started her recording, she is singing the song with her co-star: piyu bole from parineeta

You're mine, say you're mine
What do you think?

Piyu bole piya bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na

Not bad, ab yeh suno
Dil ki jo baatein hain, baatein jo dil ki hain

Dil hi mein rakhna piya

Lab to na kholoon main, kholoon na lab to par

Aakhon se sab keh diya
Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na

Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na

Ek nadi se maine poochha itla ke chaldi kahan
Door tere peekha ghar hai balkhaake chaldi kahan
Thoda woh ghabraayi thoda sa sharmaayi
Ujhli yahaan se wahaan
Saagar se milne ka uska jo sapna tha meri hi tarah piya
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na

Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Maine poocha ek ghata se itra ke chaldi kahan
Pyaas ki bari zameen hai barson bhi tarsao na
Thoda woh gurraayi thoda sa tharraayi
Gajhri yahaan se wahaan
Preet rootha thi phir cham cham woh barsi hi teri tarah piya

Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Piyu bole piya bole jaanu na


All of them give her good round of applause when she is finished. The music director: wow, aaj tum dono bohot acha gaya!

both k and her co-star: thnk u sir.

M: kripa mujhe tumse kuch bat karni hai to tum apna kaam khatam karke mere office mai pohoncho.

K: ok dee.

Mishti goes back to her cabin and sanaya tells her that the meeting has been fixed for next week, Wednesday, 11am sharp, and she also tells her that kripa's co-star has been finalised.

M: acha? Kaun hai?

S: mr. Kapoor keh rahe the ki uske baare mein vo meeting mai bata denge.

Just then kripa enters: kiske baare mein? Aur kaunsi meeting ki baat ho rahi hai?

S: mai chalti hoon, mujhe bohot kaam hai.

M: ok, tum jao, and ya unke prposal ki ek copy mujhe de jaana, ok?

S: ok

K: guys, koi mujhe bataega aap log kya aur kiske baare mai baat kar rahe ho? Wat's goin'on?

M: arre vo mr. Kapoor hai na, unhone tumhe ek contract offer kia hai bas usi ki baat kar rahe the.

K: oh I see.

M: wed ko meeting rakhi hai, apne co-star se bhi tabhi mil lene

K: kaun?

M; abhi nahi pata, vo meeting mai hi pata chalega.
Teri recording khatam?

K; yep, I'm done for the day.

M: ok, then chal kahin ghumne chalte hain, mai manan ko bhi bula leti hoon. Embarrassed (guys there's a slight change in the story, mishti is in love with with manan and not kartik)

K: ok.

They go to caf, manan meets both of there. He gives a sweet hug Embarrassed to mishti and krpia goes: ahem,ahem. LOL

Ok mishti=M, manan=Ma

M: kripa, shut up. Angry

K(giggling): ok.

Ma:to kahan jana hai? Ya kahin jana he nahi aur iss boring caf mai baith ke coffe pini hai?

K: let's go to the beach.

M and Ma: cool, lets go.

They all go to beach and spend rest of the enjoying and just chilling out.


Meanwhile, anagad is also done his recording for the day, so he decides to pick up aaliyah on his way home. He drives to her college and picks her up.

Aa: bhai, aaj aapki recording itni jaldi kaise khatam ho gai?

A: aaj suprisingly bhootni meherban ho gai. LOL LOL

They both start laughing. They always make fun of naina with her hair down or up or watever, behind her back.

Aa: oh I see. Bhootni ko daya aa gai. LOL

A: aaliyah!

Aa: ya?

A: shut up!

Aa: ok.

Aa: bhai, abhi mujhe ghar nahi jaana, kahin aur chalen?

A: kyu? Circus jaana hai? Wink

Aa: grrrrr.. Angry

A: ok, bolo kahan jaana hai?

Aa: I dunno, beach pe chalen?

A: ok, as u say, mai prithvi ko bhi bula leta hoon.

Aa(happy) Embarrassed : us bandar ko bulana zaroori hai?

A: yep, 'cz us bandar se iss bandariya ko pyar ho gaya hai Wink Wink

Aa: BHAIII Embarrassed Embarrassed

A: ya?

Aa: shut up!

A: ok.

Then they call prithvi and all of them go to the beach.
There,

P: hey angad, hi aaliyah

A and Aa: hi prithvi.

ok i'll stop here for now, plz post ur comments


Edited by kool_gal - 27 July 2005 at 6:02pm
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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 5:32pm | IP Logged

HEY KRITIKA i was just wonderring that in the parinnta song both male and female sing so how did kripa manage to sing the whole song on her own???????

any way its was a gr8 part plz continue as soon as possible

HEY ATLEAST IN THIS FANFIC THERE R NO LOVE TRIANGES OR ANY MIXUPS THATS GOOD

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Edited by ritu29 - 27 July 2005 at 7:55pm
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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 5:45pm | IP Logged
awesome parts! Keep writting, i love Anagd and Aaliya, bro-sis relation its very cute! Clap
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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 5:51pm | IP Logged

that was really nice plz continue

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