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miss_neha

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Posted: 16 May 2007 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Awewsome part....c nt wait for rajveer n anina to meet... btw u wrote rajjev ere instead of rajveer loll

n:i'll come myself.i m not a small kid
nav:no .wait .let me think.......i have an idea.yes dat will be right.i'll send my frend rajeev 2 pick u up.
n:no bhai,no need of that

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Posted: 16 May 2007 at 9:07am | IP Logged

Originally posted by yoginisahakari

hey amritafan


good story

pl continue

and dont take so long to update

i'll try and update soon

amritafan

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Posted: 16 May 2007 at 9:09am | IP Logged

Originally posted by nehagupta_9

Awewsome part....c nt wait for rajveer n anina to meet... btw u wrote rajjev ere instead of rajveer loll

n:i'll come myself.i m not a small kid
nav:no .wait .let me think.......i have an idea.yes dat will be right.i'll send my frend rajeev 2 pick u up.
n:no bhai,no need of that

Loll   LOL LOL LOL

oops a blooper.LOLLOL

thx 4 tellingLOL

amritafan

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Posted: 16 May 2007 at 11:39am | IP Logged
i just got 3 replies.i want atleast 4-5 more replies

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Posted: 16 May 2007 at 11:48am | IP Logged
whole story till now(sorry pics not included)
part1

a neat beautiful room with pink walls ,a medium size bed at the corner,a book shelf on it's side,a large window with pink curtains.

air is blowing fluttering the curtains.a sweet,soft,melodious,soothing voice is heard humming a song while coming out of bathroom wrapped in a towel.

naa jane kaise

lagta hai aise

tumhara hain intezar

dil ki gali se

bachke guzarna

yaha toote hain dil hazaar

tumhare rahenge hain hum

tumhare hain hum

yeh dil jo badla duniya bhi badli

kya hota yahi hain pyaar

dil ki gali se

backhe guzarna yaha toote hain dil hazaar

ek din kahoge tumm....

tumhare hain hummmm.........



then the girl opens her wardrobe and picks up a blacj skirt which is just above her knees,a pink simple t-shirt and a white suit.she takes the clothes and goes back into her bathroom.after a while the girl comes oyt.then she goes towards her music system,puts a c.d. and it starts playing the song.

((dheere dheere hua dil yeh jawaan
dheere dheere jage naye armaan) - 2
dheere dheere har na na na bhi
ho gayi dekho ha ha ha) - 2
dheere dheere hua dil yeh jawaan - 2
dheere dheere jage naye armaan
dheere dheere har na na na bhi
ho gayi dekho ha ha ha

(nayi nayi raahen nayi manzil
naye naye jalwe nayi mehfil
sab kutch hai naya aur dekho
nayi si ada se dhadke dil) - 2
(dheere dheere gayi duniya badal
dheere dheere badla har pal) - 2
dheere dheere har na na na bhi
ho gayi dekho ha
dheere dheere hua dil yeh jawaan
dheere dheere jage naye armaan
dheere dheere har na na na bhi
ho gayi dekho ha ha ha

(rang raliyon ka hai mela
saath hai saathi albela
aur is anjaane safar mein
dil ka raaahi hai akela) - 2
(dheere dheer dil jaane laga
dheere dheere koi bhaane laga) - 2
dheere dheere har na na na bhi
ho gayi dekho ha
dheere dheere hua dil yeh jawaan
dheere dheere jage naye armaan
dheere dheere har na na na bhi
ho gayi dekho ha ha ha
she goes towards the window and starts drying her hair with her
towel,the air is blowing her hair.then she goes towards her dressing
table and starts combing her tresses.
then her beautiful pair of eyes r shown
in background another songs plays (obviously frm cd player)
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 4
aankhein teri - 2, kitni haseen
ki inkaa aashiq, mein ban gayaa hoon
mujhako basaa le, iname tu
(ishq hai
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 2) - 3

ki inakaa aashiq, mein ban gayaa hoon
mujhako basaa le, iname tu

mujhase yeh har ghadi, meraa dil kahe
tum hi ho usaki aarzoo
mujhase yeh har ghadi, mere lab kahe
teri hi ho sab guftagoo
baatein teri itni haseen, main yaad inko jab kartaa hoon
phoolon si aaye, khushaboo

rakh loon chhupaa ke main kahin tujhako
saayaa bhi teraa naa main doon
rakh loon banaa ke kahin ghar, main tujhe
saath tmaula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 4
aankhein teri - 2, kitni haseen
ki inkaa aashiq, mein ban gayaa hoon
mujhako basaa le, iname tu
(ishq hai
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 2) - 3
then her soft delicate lips r shown .she applies pink lipstick to matsh
her dress.she wears pink dangling ear rings and a wrist watch on her
left hand to give her a professional ,yet a glamorous look.the wind
blows her hair.
julfen teri, itni ghani
dekh ke inako, yeh sochataa hoon
saaye me, inake main jiyoon
(ishq hai
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 2) - 3

(meraa dil yahi bolaa, meraa dil yahi bolaa,
yaara raaj yeh usane hai mujh par kholaa
ki hai ishq mohabbat, jiske dil mein
usko pasand karta hai maulaa) - 3< =text/>


then
someone calls her.
someone:breakfast is ready.come fast.
she turns around and we see her face.it's none other than naina singh
alluhwalia.a girl of confidence and determination.a girl of strong
character.

part 2
n:coming
naina goes 2 the dining table,eats her breakfast and goes 2 her office.she is walking confidently.every1 is saying"good morning madam"to her.the male couterpart of her r just staring at her.many of the employees come 2 office just to get 1 jhalak of so called MS NAINA SINGH ALLUHWALIA .most of them have hots on her.but @the same time .they r afraid of her as she is the most strict boss any1 can have.naina goes 2 her cabin & stats working.
scene 2
background
Aaye Hasina Yeh To Aaye
Mujhko Dikhane Apni Adhaye
Main Bhi Kuch Kam Nahin...Yeah
Aankhon Mein Aankhen Jo Daalu
Dil Na Churalu Hosh Churalu
Koi Ho Kitna Haseen
Mera Ho Gaya Woh
Jo Ek Baar Mujhse Mila

Chale Jaise Hawayein Sanan Sanan
Udhe Kaise Parinde Gagan Gagan
Jaaye Bhawaren Jaise Chaman Chaman
Yoon Hi Ghumoon Main Bhi Magan Magan

Hey, Hey, Hey, Hey
Hey Hey...O O O O....
Hey Hey Oh..Oh...Ah...Haa....Aaaaaa

Main Deewana Main Anjaana Gham Se Begaana
Hoon Awaara Lekin Pyaara Sab Ne Maana

Chale Jaise Hawayein Sanan Sanan
Udhe Jaise Parinde Gagan Gagan
Jaaye Bhawaren Jaise Chaman Chaman
Yoon Hi Ghumoon Main Bhi Magan Magan

Chale Jaise Hawayein Sanan Sanan
Udhe Jaise Parinde Gagan Gagan

a bike comes 2 halt.we see a tall man coming out.he is wearing blue jeans and black t shirt showing his gr8 body.we see him taking out his goggles and his deep brown eyes r seen.
all the girl around him r just heard saying "ooh" "wow"
he walks into nain's office.now it's the turn of female employees .they r staring at him,saying hi to him,ooh et,etc,
they r hypnotised by his stunning personality.two female employees r talking
g1:man!this dude is so cool
g2:he is not cool.he is so hot!
the dude .i maen the handsome hunk hears this .he winks at the girls and the girl r "oh my god"
he knocks on naina's cabin
n:come in
the man enters and says
man:hi sweetheart,my sugar lump dipped in chocolate
n(shocked)huda?
we see his face & he is none other than our hooda


h(cheekly)yes darling
n(angrily):huda !wat r u doing here?
h:i came 2 meet u my princess
n(more angrily)i m not ur princess or darling or ur sweetheart or ur sugar lump dipped in syrup
h:not syrup ,chocolate
n:watever
h:chill lady, chill
n:huda,will u let me work?
h:no
n:wat?
h:yes ,20 hrs out of 24 hrs a day u work & the rest 4 hrs u sleep.can't u do something interesting?such a handsome hunk is in front of u .u an atleast flirt with me.
n:just shut up huda
h:come on naina .i have 2 movie tikets.let's go and watch a movie.
n:(sarcastically)i don't want 2 come mr.handsome hunk
h:(stubbornly)u'll have to come

will she go 4 movie.just wait and read

part 3
huda is trying his best 2 convince naina but she says she has lot of work 2 do.huda later gives up.after huda leaves,naina dials a no.
n(excited):hello
x:(much more excited):hi
n(little emotional and teary)how r u?
x:i m fine and stop crying naina
n:how do u everytime come 2 know abt my feelings
x:coz i m ur brother 'NAVIN SINGH ALLUHWALIA'.

navin singh alluhawalia hona koi aisi waisi baat nahin
n:yeah yeah,i know
nav:so wat's up?
n:ceiling(giggles)
nav:stop giggling!how's everything in office?how's huda?
n:everything's is smooth in the office.and don't ask me abt huda he is so chipku,stupid ,fool,idiot and..... and... and wat not

nav:     
n:bahi!! u r laughing?if he was not our family frend ,then i would have shown him dat who naina singh alluhwalia is!
nav:ok chill naina.so how did my lil sis called me 2day?
n :bhai don't tell me dat u forgot dat rakshabandhan is coming
nav:uummmm actually
n(angrily):BHAI
nav:by the way naina,when r u coming?
n:i m not coming.when my bhai doesn't remember abt rakshabandhan,then why should i come?
nav(feels guilty and sad and wat not):i m sorry naina,i m really sorry.
naina smiled mischeviously


and then burst out laughing
nav:why r u laughing?
n:i was kidding bro.u always fall into my trap.
nav :NAINA

n:chill bro,anyways i m coming 2morro by 10 am train
nav :
oh my god!school will be open at dat time .i won't be able to take leave 2morro
n:so?
nav:so who will come 2 pick u up?
n:i'll come myself.i m not a small kid
nav:no .wait .let me think.......i have an idea.yes dat will be right.i'll send my frend rajeev 2 pick u up.
n:no bhai,no need of that
nav:there is need.rajveer will come 2 pick u up.
n:ok,but i don't know how he looks
nav:don't worry .i'll show rajveer ur pic.he'll be able 2 identify u.
n:ok see u 2morro
nav:bye
n:bye..bhai wait.wat is ur frend's name
nav:rajveer singh shekhawat
n:ok ,bye
nav:bye
naina calls all da staff members for an urgent meeting
n:ok guys.i m going 2 nainital 4 abt 1-2 weeks.so.i don't want any mess when i come back.m i clear?
every1:yes ma'm
naina goes back 2 her cabin.
huda who was there waiting outside 4 meeting 2 finish came 2 know frm an employee abt the nainital trip.
after the meeting huda went to naina's cabin.
h:may i come in?
n:yes,come in
h:r u going 2 nainital
n(curtly):yes an problem?
h:i'll miss u
naina gives a disgusted luk 2 him.
n:huda can u plz leave.i have many things 2 wind up here.
huda leaves sadly.
naina feels guilty for talking so badly.
when huda reaches home he finds an envelope frm here.
he opened the envelope.there was a card saying
"sorry"
sorry 4 talking so rudely huda

love naina

he was touched.dat was wat he liked abt her .she was never hesistant in accepting her mistakes and in saying sorry for dat.

yyyy

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Posted: 16 May 2007 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Clap Clap Clap ...good story dear...waiting earely 4 rajveer's entry...continue soon

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Posted: 17 May 2007 at 11:15am | IP Logged

Originally posted by yyyy

Clap Clap Clap ...good story dear...waiting earely 4 rajveer's entry...continue soon

thx

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Posted: 18 May 2007 at 12:32am | IP Logged
hey pl update soon

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