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kahiin to hoga - love story of sk-part-18 (Page 7)

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[FONT=Verdana]awesome update!!!!!!......kashish is feel jelous bcoz sujal was flirting with anjali, but she act normal like it doesn't effet her LOL ........ kashish is starting to fall for him or that what i think Wink ...... on the other hand sujal is worrid about kashish and her problems Cry Cry Cry ........ great update
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part-12

her is the next part Smile

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RECAP:sujal sees kashish and chandru together again and
misumderstands as usual...Kashish shares her worries with umesh and
umesh consoles her...shruti sees them together and feels
jealous...now she wants to throw kashish out of that home...

............................................................ .......

Chandru gets caught by the police...kashish knows abt it thru news
paper...she gets shattered and doesnt know what to do....even to get
him out on bail she will have to pay them Rs.1 lakh(now i've no idea
as to how much they charge for these bails...but anyways we 've
already left our brains and logic behind so doesnt matter i guess)she
goes to umesh immediately to ask him for help....But when she went
there....
umesh,shruti and also sujal were standing there...all worried abt
something....


Umesh:shruti did u check all ur cupboards carefully?

shruti:yes papa...

umesh:how can u be so careless...do u know its value..lits a diamond
necklace ,damn it....

shruti acts like suddenly she remembered something...
"papa i know its a little weird but kashish came into my room y'day
to say bye abd after she left only i did not find the necklace"

sujal is stunned.....he looks at shruti with disbelief...and also he
sees kashish at the entrance...he is totally confused and he
expresses various emotions of confusion,disbelief,anger,hurt,doubt
etc and etc looking at her...he keeps looking at her...

kashish is astonished to hear what shruti was saying...she cant
believe her own ears....for a minute she looks at sujal and
immediately she turns her gaze towards umesh wanting to listen to
what he has to say.....

umesh shouts at her"shruti....do u understand what u r saying?how can
u say that to kashish...we know what kind of a girl she is...no it
cant be.....go and search carefully...u will find it right there..."

Shruti:i dont know why u believe in her so much....
while saying this she realizes that kashish is already there....s

shruti:ha here she is...ask her only papa....

umesh:looks at kashihs but doesnt say anything...

kashish:not having a clue of what is happening,sir what's the issue?

umesh:.............

shruti:dont be so innocent kashish...u also know what u;ve done and
just admit it and return my necklace....otherwise i'll have to call
the police....

kashish:confused...necklace?

sujal is very closely observing kashish's reactions...he doesnt want
to believe in what shruti was saying but at the same time facts also
cant be overlooked...here the fact is the necklace is gone...

shruti:its high time u come out of that achi hone ki natak...u
probably can fool my dad but not me...i very well know people like
u...

Kashish totally breaks from inside...she never expected that she will
have to see this day...she never ever imagined that she will have to
bear such a big insult and accusation...but she knows what she is,so
she decides to fight it...she realizes that its her responsibility to
prove herself innocent...

kashish:talking to umesh with a very feeble voice...sir, i really
dont know why all this is happening...but if u 've any doubt u can
come and check my house sir...i 've no problems...

umesh is so devastated...he has a feeling that something is wrong
somewhere but did not know what it is...and he is not able to say
anything to shruti also...he just looks at sujal helplessly...

sujal is even more helpless and he is not looking at anybody...he is
totally distressed,confused and lost...he wants to help kashish but
before that he wants to make sure that she is not at fault....he is
in a big dilemma now, abt what he has to do....

shruti asks the driver to take out the car,asks kashish to get in and
they go to kashish's house....
.................................................

Here ravi's granny comes to kashish's home to see her mamma...her
main purpose of visit is to tell her that when kashish was alone at
home, she entertained some stranger at home and all that,that she
observed y'day ,with of course a lot of masala added....

by the time kashish came home with shruti and the driver...the scene
is all set to crucify kashish...

Mamma and maami both of them r very angry at kashish....kashish's
mamma is again back to square one in terms of her health...she is
totally shattered....

Now shruti stormed inside and aathe hi she orders the driver to
search for the necklace....seeing all this and kashish,her mom gets
heart attack....

The driver searches for the necklace making all the house upside down
but only to tell shruti that nothing is there....

shruti simply says sorry to kashish and leaves with the driver....

But here kashish's mom is in her last minutes of life....she cldnt
take it, that her daughter is such a characterless girl...

kashish runs to hold her,but she doesnt allow her...and eventually
she leaves her last breath....

Kashish is completely broken by now.....she screams"mamma...i'm not
guilty...ur daughter is spotless mamma..mamma please wake up..dont
leave me mamma....." she breaks down and loses her consciousness...

Parvati(kashish's maamiji) is also at a complete shock...she feels
very bad for kashish...cos she cant believe that kashish can do such
a thing...but more importantly she is shocked with savita's sudden
death...everything happened so quickly that now, she is the only
person to think of something there....and she is also not in a
position to think anything....(remember shyamlal went on a
pilgrimage...he is to return any day now)
............................................................ ..

Sujal slowly and very hesitantly enters kashish's house...he cld
sense that something is seriously wrong there....he is stunned to see
kashish lying on the floor unconsciously and her mamma lying at
another corner with parvati on one side crying bitterly...he very
quickl understands the scene and feels very bad for kashish....

Parvati looks at him with a question mark...sujal"er...i am from
where kashish works"...i came here to say sorry to kashish abt the
incident that happened in the morning....(something he blabbers...)
parvati is least interested anyways...she is actually delighted that
there is another soul along with her in that room...

sujal:how did this happen?

parvati:tells him briefly...if u dont mind can u help me?

sujal:sure...i care for kashish..i mean we all care for
kashish...anything for her and her family...

parvati:what shall we do now...

sujal:first lets wake up kashish....he goes and sprinkles some water
on her...

kashish wakes up with a jolt...she sees sujal and cries very
bitterly...sujal very helplessly looks at her and tries to console
her...in that pain kashish holds his hands and cries...sujal takes
her into his arms and pats her on her head...

kashish finds a lot of consolement in his reassuring
hands....temporarily she forgets the tension between both of them.....

parvati gets a little
suspicious at this...even in that pain she cld sense that special
feeling for kashish in sujal's eyes and its not just the concern that
a boss has for his employees....

Sujal slowly seperates himself from kashish and starts thinking abt
what needs to be done...a few neighbours come in but lookin at the
situation they get scared that whole thing will come on them..so they
quietly sneak out...

sujal makes a few calls and before he is done with his calls and
arrangements for the final rites of kashish's mom, shyamlal
enters.....

He quickly realizes that something very horrible happened and also
the bitter truth that his sister is no more....he also breaks
down...sujal goes to him and tries to console him....he is not in a
position to ask who sujal was in the first place...but sujal's
support he gets up and starts thinking abt what needs to be
done...sujal assures him that he already made the neccessary
arrangements and the people shld be coming in anytime....he looks at
sujal thankfully....

Then shyamlal starts wondering how he can get chandru(he still doesnt
know that chandru is in the jail)...

Shyamlal goes to kashish...she again cries bitterly looking at her
uncle....he doesnt know how to control her but he is reminded of the
immediate call for the duty...he asks kashish for chandru's address...

kashish breaks down again...in between she manages to mutter that
chandru is in police custody and they need 1 lakh to bail him out....

shyamlal is shocked once again....sujal doesnt understand who this
chandru is...shyamlal,without his knowledge started depending on
sujal now....(when u r deep in waters with no where to go that's what
happens)...

sujal asks him who this chandru is...shyamlal says chandru is
kashish's younger brother....

sujal says that he will go and bail him out...and asks for chandru's
picture...kashish gives him that day's news paper...

sujal is in for a shock yet again...he feels miserable at the way he
misunderstood kashish...he looks at her meaning to say sorry...
...................................................

sujal bails out chandru and gets him home...

they finish the final rites and come home....

chandru is very unhappy with himself...he did not even have the
chance to meet his mom for one last time...and on the top of it he
has this smuggling case on him....he is not able to show his face to
kashish....

meanwhile all the neghbours collectively come and attack kashish and
family...sujal is right there standing quietly with a angry face....

they want them to vacate that place as they r a black mark to that
neighbourhood....

Shyamlal tries to explain to them but they r just not in a mood to
listen...they call the owner of the house also...and the owner also
comes and starts throwing their things out...

Sujal cld not take it anymore and blasts off all of them..he tells
them to mind their own business...he does not feel its safe anymore
for shyamlal and others to stay there so he invites them to his
home...

shyamlal doesnt see any other go and so agrees to his proposal...but
kashish is not at all happy...she rejects outrightly...but shyamlal
tries to explain to them but she is not ready to listen to them....

sujal gets very irritated with this behaviour and tells shyamlal that
he will explain to kashish...

he goes and sits next to kashish on ground very
secretly"kashish,listen to me carefully....if u dont agree gracefully
to come with me, i have to tell everybody abt ur mangalsutra,dont get
me wrong...i'm not trying to blackmail u here...but that's the
truth...so come with me quietly...is that clear?"

kashish looks at him and she knew that he meant what he said....so
she agrees to going along with him....
..........................................

that's it guys end of part12....as always i did not check for any
spelling mistakes or any other gramatical errors in the dialogues
etc...so forgive me and correct them for urself...i know u r already
so sweet to do that for me...

The goings on in the KTH have become so disgusting and gut wrenching
that now i want kashish to marry that rahu guy and get a nice
thrashing from him, a lesson which she will never forget...that time
sujal shld also not be around....yes agreed, sujal's happiness is in
kashish's happiness...but even now he is not happy...if this is what
he is going to get,i've a better idea...how abt introducing a new
girl..a look alike of kashish, into his life..who is very sinsible
and falls for sujal at the first sight and slowly makes him forget
all abt this lady torture...they both shld marry and be happy right
in front of kashish...and this bimbo will be searching for
her 'kahiin to hoga' all her life.....seriously, very pissed of with
this lady...






Edited by saranya - 02 May 2007 at 2:16am
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hey. just mind blowing.marvellous, amazing. can't wait.
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OmgOmg,just now i sent u a pm that pl send it soon and now the part is here, i am so happy.u r gr8.excellent and marvellous.u really make my day wonderful with full of enjoyment.even ur kth updates(old) r so interesting with the lovely comments.i really enjoy them.u really made me cry 4r kashish and sujal.pl continue soon.u r so sweet.
bye sullu.
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great update !!!! Clap Clap Clap ......... suajl can't see kashish like that Cry Cry Cry n want to console her....... Clap Clap . i can't believe that shruti blame kashish Angry ....... continue soon plz
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here is the next part enjoy Smile Smile



............................................................ ........
RECAP:Kashish's mom dies and sujal helps them in bailing chandru and
also he takes them to his home as they were thrown out from their
present home...
.........................................................

Umesh is very upset with shruti...he balsted her off for balming
kashish without even knowing the truth properly....shruti kept a
sorry face but inside she is very happy that her plan is successful
and she got rid of kashish forever....cos she knows how swabhimani
kashish is and after such thing she will never show up....

umesh can think of only one person with whom he can share the
suffering that he is going thru...so he decides that the time has
come to tell sujal abt kashish,that she is his own daughter....so he
calls sujal on his cell phone...

sujal:hello

umesh:hi sujal...

sujal:ha boliye uncle...kaise hai aap?

umesh:mein tho theek hu beta...do u have some time today....actually
i 've to talk to u abt something...

sujal:actually uncle even i 've to tell u something...but u have to
forgive me uncle..today its not going to be possible..

umesh:oh...that's ok beta...

sujal:uncle i will call u later uncle..ok..

umesh:alright...bye sujal

sujal:bye

he wonders why umesh is sounding so upset...
.........................................................

Kashish did not stop crying after that day...she's been not eating
but only crying all the time, cos of which she becomes very week and
one day parvati comes running to shyam lal and sujal saying that
kashish fell behosh...

sujal gets worried and calls the doctor right away...doctor comes and
checks up kashish and tells them that there is nothing to worry but
she needs to take food properly ...he gives some tonics etc and goes..

kashish regains her consciousness and sees the worried faces of
chandru,shyamlal and parvati...she looks for sujal but he is no where
around...

sujal is actually instructing ramu kaka what food he needs to prepare
for kashish...first he asks him to make tomato soup....

kashish looks at chandru and gets really agitated...she wants to
throw him out of her sight...

kashish:u..how dare u come before me?dont show me ur face....u've
totally broken my faith...i dont want to talk to u get lost from
here...

parvati and shyam lal try to pacify her but she is out of
control...listening to her shouting sujal comes there running and
takes chandru out of that room...

kashish is very angry on sujal for getting chandru out and keeping
him at his home...she knows that chandru is at wrong and she feels
that he shld be punished....

sujal on the other hand wants to see what he can do in chandru's
case...he knows that if he is able to get chandru on the law's side
and make him tell all the things that he had done and also abt the
people who r helping him and who he is working for,it will be of a
great benefit to everybody and who knows the court may leave chandru
with very minimal punishment...

chandru is feeling very sad and low...he is sitting there on one
corner of the sofa and feeling very guilty...he is not able to meet
eyes with anybody...he did all this to earn a lot of money so that he
can keep his sister happy...but never thot abt the vehicle he took to
reach his destination...

sujal looks at chandru and asks him to come into his office room...

chandru quietly goes and sits inside his office room...

sujal also comes in and starts asking general things...but even
before he cld complete kashish barges in and holds chandru by his
shirt collar and demands an explanation for why he stooped down to
such a low level...

chadru is speechless and not able to lift his head...

sujal tried to pacify kashish...

sujal:kashish please..let me talk to chandru...trust me..i will solve
this thing...

kashish:no...today only i'm talking to him...please dont try to tell
me anything...i know what i have to do...

sujal:kashiish....i told u leave this room...did u hear....leave
now...and go into ur room...is that clear?

kashish ignores him and holds chandru's collar even more
tightly...chandru gets choked...

sujal gets very angry :kashish u know very well what are the
consequences of not listening to me...and also u know that i dont
like to repeat myself....are u leaving now?

No impact...

sujal has had enough of it by now...he lifts kashish in his hands
from there and carries her into her room and almost throws her on the
bed in her room...all thru the way kashish went on beating him but he
doesnt care...

kashish starts crying bitterly...

sujal feels very bad for her and goes close to her and tries to
console her...

she cries even more badly...sujal cld not control himself and wraps
his arms around her and tells her...:pleas kashish...trust me...i
will do everything that needs to be done and solve this case...i'm
there for u...please dont cry...

kashish clings on to him and in between her crying she says..."mamma
did not even talk to me before dying and she left me forever and
chandru also did such a thing and i'm sure he will be punished for
that....i have no body in this world...i have no body"

sujal feels really bad now and he wants to say that he is there for
her...but cld not mutter the courage to say those words...he was
scared that he will increase her problems even more if he tries to go
close to her....so with a great difficulty he seperates himself from
her and leaves the room...

kashish feels very ashamed of herself for clinging on to him like
that....and also she realizes that sujal did not say anything when
she said that she has no body in this world...she misunderstands
sujal that he still has no feelings for her...she decides that very
soon she shld take her folks and leave that house as its not a good
idea to throw all her problems on sujal...

Sujal comes back into his office room and closes the door behind
him...he looks into chadru's eyes and tells him to get any kind of
help from him, he needs to hear the truth and only truth...chandru
gets prepared to tell sujal...he starts telling what all happened so
far.and how he got into this this........

.........................................................

Sujal calls umesh to tell him that he is coming to his home that day
to talk to him....

umesh is very happy...sujal comes and just when he was abt to tell
him the truth, sujal gets a call from home saying that kashish is
again not well...sujal immediately rushes excusing himself from
there....

............................................................ ....

kashish is lying on the bed and parvati and shyam lal are very
worried abt her...sujal gets doctor along with him...doctor,after
checking kashish says its the same problem...she is weak and all
that...and needs to follow the same things that he earlier
prescribed...

sujal drops doctor and comes home....he asks parvati and shyam lal
for the reason, why there is no development in kashish's
health...they tell him that how much ever they try,she is not eating
anything and also she is not able to forget her mom etc and etc...

sujal tells them that henceforth they tell him if she is not
listening to them...

he goes into kashish's room sits in the chair next to bed and keeps
looking at her with a very worried face...he wants to scream to the
whole world that she is not alone but he is with her....he wants to
take her into his arms and tell her how much he loves her,how much he
cares for her...he wants to ask her to forget abt everything that has
happened between then so far and start life afresh...

Kashish even in that sleep looks very upset....she is anything but
peaceful...he wants to take all her pain and give her only
happiness,pure happiness....he sits there for some more time and
leaves with a sad face...

Parvati's sister is not feeling well and she has to go immediately to
see her...but they dont know what to do...kashish is not in a
position to travel so they dont know how to leave her...kashish tells
them to leave and she will take care of herself but they r just not
willing to do that....when all three of them were engrossed in their
talks,sujal comes in and asks what was the matter...they tell him abt
the issue...sujal asks them, they shld leave right away,since here
sujal and chadru are there to take care of the things...and also
kashish is ok now and can take care of herself...so they get ready to
leave reluctantly...

............................................................ ..

Kashish is sitting in the lawn lost in her thoughts...after her
maama.maami left she is feeling even more lonely now...sujal drives
in and sees kashish sitting in the lawn...he parks his car and goes
close to her...she is so lost in her thoughts that she doesnt even
see him standing there....


sujal:kashish...

kashish:comes out of her thoughts and looks at him...

sujal:kashish lets go in...u need to take ur medicine...

kashish:that's ok....i want to sit here for some more time.....

sujal:but its getting late and u need to eat something also..so lets
go in....

kashish ignores him and looks at the other side...

sujal controlling his anger,:kashish tumne suna nahi maine khya
kaha...andar chalo....

kashish:sujal mein koi bachi nahi hu...mujhe pata hai mujhe khya
chahiya...filhaal tho mujhe meri haal pe chod do...

sujal:kashish tum kyo harbaar mujhe boore banne ke liye majboor karti
ho....maine kaha andar chalo....

kashish gets very uneasy but she doesnt want to give up...

kashish:nobody forces anybody to become bad...anyways i'm not scared
of u...please leave me alone...

sujal: as long as u r at my home tumhari manmani nahi chalegi...u
have to listen to me...

kashish looks at him very hurt...
"theek hai i will leave then...right away.."

sujal:ha u can leave but before that dont forget the Rs.1 lakh that
i've spent for ur brother...u can leave my plave only after returning
that money to me...otherwise who knows....

kashish is really stunned at what he said...
"alright i will pay u back everything...after that i will not stay
here for a second also"

sujal smiles at her zid..."ok...done..but for now lets go in"
............................................................ .

End of part13...
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Edited by saranya - 03 May 2007 at 12:56am

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