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part-11
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Recap: Sujal helps kashish in the hospital in taking care of her
mamma...she tells him that he doesnt have to do these things to
impress her,he is never going to be impressed by these outward show
off...he says may be he will do these things cos he likes to impress
his wife....Kashish is totally confused with sujal's behaviour....
...........................................................

Savita wakes up and finds herself in the hospital...she wants to get
up but kashish comes running to her to find out if she needs
something...but savita doesnt want to talk to her...so kashish calls
her maamiji to take care of savita and she leaves from there to come
to cook some food and get....
...................................................

At home....

Kashish came home very tired...she wants to lie down for a while but
she knows that she will have to take food for her mom...so she goes
to take bath...she took head bath nicely and came out a little
relaxed...she wore her trade mark cotton salwaar kameez(short salwaar
white in color and red bandini dupatta) and left her hair loose to
dry (she has medium length, thick,straight beautiful
hair....)....she is busy in the kitchen and somebody knocks the
door...she wonders who that cld be at that point of time, and as she
is already in a rush, she gets a little bit irritated also...with
this irritated look she opens the door(yes i'm inspired by nargis's
opening the door for rajkapoor in in..i think its shree420).she opens
the door and gets surprised....ITS SUJAL THERE....

She is just dumb founded....She is not able to guess what this guy is
upto...why is he here?

Kashish:you.....here?

sujal is totally taken over by her beauty...he is staring at her
without saying a word...he just loved her simplicity...

kashish:yes...u want to say something?

sujal:hi...is this how u generally treat the people who come to ur
home?

kashish:no this is not how i treat the people who i hate...i treat
them even worse...anyways tell me what do u want?

sujal:two things....first i want to come in...cos i dont want to u to
get into any trouble...

kashish:very reluctantly gives way to him to come in....

sujal comes in and looks around....he sees a big laminated picture of
her and chandru hanging on the wall...he gets very irritated but this
time he decides to ask her in a cool way who that was...

kashish:u came here to find that out?

sujal:no i came here to find out how ur mom is doing...actually i was
passing this way an hour back and saw u un locking the door and
coming in....i just finished my work and while going back i want to
see if u r still there and if neccessary i want to help u....

kashish:no thank you....i dont need any help....and for heaven's sake
atleast not from u....and now please if u leave, i have a lot of work
to do....and in our household we dont entertain any ajnabhee men at
home when we r all alone...so please leave........

sujal:arre wah...i like that principle...but i'm not ajnabhee...come
on u know me....dont worry if somebody comes in i will tell them the
truth only...

Kashish:very irritated...storms into the kitchen very helplessly....

sujal did not want to irritate kashish too much so he tells her that
he is going to wait outside in the car and once she is done with her
work, he will take her to the hospital....

kashish is relieved that atleast he is out of there for the time
being...

But by then the damage is already done....the neighbour already saw
him coming in and talking to her...(remember ravi's granny).....

she looks at sujal who is sitting in the car,very
suspiciously....sujal oblivious of these things turns on the music in
the car and starts waiting for kashish.....

kashish very quickly finished the cooking, packing the food and
everything, got ready and rushed out of the house,not wanting anybody
to see her with sujal....

sujal seeing her, starts his car and opens the front door for
her...but she just walks past the car very fast....

sujal gets so angry but controls it...

he drives the car till the end of the road and waits there...kashish
comes there and without even looking at him opens the front door and
sits very quitely....

sujal doesnt understand this...he looks at her for explanation....

kashish:i did not want anybody gossiping abt me...if they see me
sitting in ur car, that too when no one's home, i cant even imagine
what cld be the consequence....

sujal realizes that for the first time kashish spoke to him very
softly....he cant help smiling...

They sit quitely without talking much....sujal looks at her a couple
of times but kashish is lost in the thots of her mom...she is worried
abt her...she is feeling bad that her mom is doubting her as to where
she got all that money from, for her treatment.....

Sujal:kashish are u ok? very softly he asks, without a lot of concern
in his voice....

kashish:looks at him...yeah i'm fine...

just when they were abt to get to the hospital kashish sees chandru
walking on the footpath there....she waves at him and asks sujal to
stop the car...sujal doesnt understand her sudden excitement...he
stops the car and looks at kashish...but she is not even
bothered...she picks up her stuff, gets down and runs to
chandru ...not even saying thanks or bye to sujal...now sujal is
totally pissed off....he wants to punch that guy black and blue,but
before he thinks of anything they disappear into a small restaurant
there....again whatever self talk sujal did that he is not going to
be nasty to kashish,all went into drain...

..................................................

chandru:kashish sorry for that day...i just had to leave cos i saw
somebody observing us(he means sujal)...and today i find u with the
same person....dont mind me asking but who is he?

kashish:i've recently known him...he is a family friend of my boss...

chanru:acha...that's all is it.....(ounds very disappointed)

kashish:that's all means what else u expect....

chandru:kashish i want to see u settilled...i know i'm younger than
u...but i've always felt very responsible for ur future and always
found my happiness in urs....

kashish:smiles and says...i know that....its the same with me also
chandru....that's why i'm so worried for u...tell me what r u
upto...just leave everything and come back to home...now also its not
too late...

chandru:no kashish...it is already late...now i'm too involved....now
even if i come back its not only dangerous for me,but its dangerous
for u'll also...so now its only onwards journey for me...no looking
back....

and he suddenly goes off from there saying bye to her in a hurry....

kashish is thinking, how she can get her brother out of that
dangerous thing that he is involved in....
.......................................................

chandru:his cell rings...hello

hi chandru...

chandru:hi is that sam...

sam:yes

chandru:yeah tell me sam

Sam:u need to go and deliver the product todaay evening only .....

chandru:but u said its tomorw evening right...

sam:no now we changed the plans...somehow the police go to know abt
tomorw...so we r doing it a day earlier....now listen to me carefully
and everything is as per the original plan,except the code word...bla
bla bla...some code word he says....

chadru:ok done...but remember the deal right....if something happens
to me dont forget to deposit that money in the account number that i
gave u....i trust u sam...

sam:dont worry chandru u will be fine....

...........................................

Kashish after a long time goes to umesh's house...umesh is very happy
to have her there....

kashish:hello sir...

umesh:hi kashish how r u?how is ur mamma?

kashish:fine sir...sorry sir i cld not come all these days...i wanted
to come much earlier to give my resignation...

umesh:so u still did not forget what happened that day...please
forget all that kashish...i need here....i really do....

kshish:sir but...

umesh:please kashish i dont know why sujal behaved like that,that
day...i ask for fogiveness on behalf of him...( i know its very
strange to hear these words from a boss,but from a father i think
these words are very natural, that too for his long lost daughter)

kashish:no sir please dont make me feel ashamed...

umesh:but i'ms till surprised at his outburst....if u dont mind
kashish...who was with u that day?

kashish:my brother sir...i told u everything abt him....now i hardly
get to meet him...that day he told me that he was coming to that
park..that;s why i came there to meet him(she tells him the whole
thing that happened)

umesh:very disappointed...arre kashish i told u to introduce ur
brother to me no?

kashish:sir i did not know that u were there only...

umesh:that's ok...but he is fine right...

kashish breaks up hearing somebody talking to her softly...all her
composure is gone with the wind....in between she says that she just
manages to say that nothing is going on ok now...her mom is not doing
good and also her brother's safety is a big point of worry for her....


umesh tries to console her taking her into his arms....

shruti comes that way and gets very jealous...she thinks that her dad
never took her only into his arms...she wants to somehow throw
kashish out of her house....one more reason for that is, that
everybody at home including sujal is giving her more
importance.....and she cld not bear that....

Here umesh manaofies kashish to take back her resignation...
........................................................

end of part 11...



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Posted: 01 May 2007 at 1:58am | IP Logged
darling u made my day.i ve no words to express my love and feeling for such a cute story.jis tarah se sujal kashish ke kareeb aa raha hai aur kashish with her stubboruness like nahi chahte huye bhi uske kareeb aarahee hai and the jealousy of sujal 4r kashish is mindblowing.u r toooo good.pl continue soon.waiting eagerly.thanks alot,i was waiting madly for this part.
luv bye sullu.

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darling u made my day.i ve no words to express my love and feeling for such a cute story.jis tarah se sujal kashish ke kareeb aa raha hai aur kashish with her stubboruness like nahi chahte huye bhi uske kareeb aarahee hai and the jealousy of sujal 4r kashish is mindblowing.u r toooo good.pl continue soon.waiting eagerly.thanks alot,i was waiting madly for this part.
luv bye sullu.

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sorry it came two times as it waas clicked twice by mistake.

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hey saranya dear awesme part loved it it was great continue sooooon Clap can't wait more Clap

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thank u honii and sulatana thank u so much
i really loved ur comments a lot
thank u thank u

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Posted: 01 May 2007 at 5:09am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sultana_sange

sorry it came two times as it waas clicked twice by mistake.

thank u so much

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Posted: 01 May 2007 at 5:10am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sultana_sange

darling u made my day.i ve no words to express my love and feeling for such a cute story.jis tarah se sujal kashish ke kareeb aa raha hai aur kashish with her stubboruness like nahi chahte huye bhi uske kareeb aarahee hai and the jealousy of sujal 4r kashish is mindblowing.u r toooo good.pl continue soon.waiting eagerly.thanks alot,i was waiting madly for this part.
luv bye sullu.

thank u so much

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