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part-9

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hi guys


Here i'm with the next part of my story...but before that i just want
to give a big hand to all of u for the continued love and support...i
need it big time and thanks for making this a success...

Lets get going now with the part 9:

Recap:Kashish decided to take away that sujal who once tried to
destroy her, from her memories and make the sujal who is an apple of
everybody's eyes, her companion....
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Kashish is very happy for some reason...maamiji gave her a cup of
coffee and found out that she was unusually happy...

maamiji:arre wah kashish..aaj badi khush nazar aa rahii ho.,....khya
baat hai?

kashish:kuch nahi maamiji...aise hi...

maamiji:ha kashish tumhe yaad hai naa aaj tumhare maa ko doctor ke
paas le jaana hai...

kashish:haa maamiji mai shaam ko jaldi waapis aaongi...

maamiji:theek hai...

kashish leaves...
.....................................................

Umesh is thinking abt kashish...

flash back:

umesh and savita love eachother and marry against everybody's wishes
at home...they start living together and have one daughter also and
savita is carrying again...that's when umesh gets a telegram from his
home saying that his mom is serious...so he leaves for home and since
savita is in full months she stays back....when he went home umesh's
mom is really in her last stages and emotionally blackmails him into
marrying their friend's daughter kamini...he was helpless and agrees
to it...but he tells kamini that he is marrying her just for the name
sake and he is already having a family... very surprisingly she agrees
to the deal...his mom dies after that and kamini requests umesh to
come along with her just for once to her home town to see her grand
father....by the time umesh goes back to his place it is a little
longer than he planned and alas!...his family is no more there...no
body knows where they have gone....so that's how he lost his family
and that's how kashish and chandru grew up without their dad....

What umesh doesnt know is, when umesh did not come by the time she
expected, savita gets a little worried and calls his home,but nobody
picks up...she gets worried and calls her brother as she is due
anytime now...so shyamlal, her brother,comes and takes her to his home
and takes care of her....he sends a word to umesh's home that his
family is with him...but that information reaches kamini and not
umesh...kamini very conviniently ignores that and does not allow it to
reach umesh....after that umesh searched for his family all over but
never cld find them....he finally gave up on them and decided to give
kamini,who is with him in these tough times(he thinks so),full status
as his wife...but he was never able to forget his first wife and the
kids,so deviated all that pain into focus on business and like midas
touch whatever he did became a success and now he is one of the top
most business men in the country....

so finally he is able to find his family thru kashish,his own
daughter...but he is scared to tell her the truth as he doesnt know
how she will take it....it pains him to see her in so much poverty
when the truth is she is the daughter of a millionnaire...he is also
worried abt his chandru and wants to find more details from
kashish...for the time being he has decided not to disclose the fact
that he is her dad...

............................................

Kashish saw umesh as soon as she entered and said good morning
sir...but he doesnt respond...he is totally lost in his own thots...so
she goes near him and says goodmorning again...umesh wakes up smiles
in return...he is very happy to see her...

Kashish;sir today i need to go hoem a little early....is that okay?

umesh:yeah...but why kashish?is everything ok...

Kashish:actually my mamma is not doing that well sir...so i need to
take her to a doctor...

umesh:gets very concerend and worried...dont hesitate to ask me if u
need anything....

he curses himself for his helpless ness....

kashish:ok sir

shruti comes running from her room and tells kashish how happy she is
today....kashish is very happy for her and asks her if she can know
the reason why she is so happy...

umesh:oh i did not tell u right...today shruti's good friend anjali is
coming from US...and our madam is no able to sleep properly eversince
she came to know abt anjali's trip to India...so shruti is sujal also
coming to receive anjali?

shruti:yes dad...dad i think sujal now likes anjali...what do u think?

kashish gets alarmed with this...she starts listening to each and
every word carefully....

umesh:well..cant say...anyways shruti we better not gossip...jo hona
hai wo tho hoke rahega...uske baare mein khya baat karna....

actually umesh doesnt like this candidate anjali that much...and now a
days his mind started flashing a new idea to him...why not get KASHISH
MARRIED TO SUJAL...he is all set to ask sujal abt it....just waiting
for the right time....and now this anjali's arrival is defntly not to
his liking...khair honi lo kaun taal saktha hai...

When they were engrossed in talking sujal comes in to pick up shruti
as they have planned to go to the airport together...he doesnt even
look at kashish...but kashish looks at him...to her he seemed to be
unusually happy and she doesnt like it...she thinks that this
happiness is coz this new irritant anjali's arrival....

umesh:hi sujal...talking abt u only and u came in...jug jug jeeyo...

sujal smiles and tells shruti if she is ready they shld leave now...

shruti says:lets go...bye dad...bye kashish...
..........................................................

Kashish and umesh sit there and do there work...kashish is busy
feeding something into the computer but umesh is thinking something
else...he suddenly asks kashish...

umesh:kashish can u introduce ur brother to me?i want to see him...and
if possible see if i can recruit him into my company...

kashish is a bit surprised...'sir...whenever i see him the next time i
shall defntly try and introduce him to u...but i told u no,abt
him...he is totally a mistery to me now'

umesh:that's ok dont worry kashish...lets see what we can do to
him...if because of me one person also gets benefitted,my life is
worth it...

kashish looks at him very greatfully....

umesh:kashish can i ask u something...if u dont mind...

kashish:sir please....dont make me feel ashamed...u just have to tell
me sir and its done...

umesh:can i call u beti?

kashish is really surprised now...but she is only happy to say yes...
'i'm so lucky to have u in my life sir...u make me feel like i also
have a father...sorry sir if i spoke too much'

umesh;arre nahi beta...u r right...even i feel the same abt u...

kashish and umesh very happy....
................................................

shruti storms in very happily talking very loudly with a new beautiful
girl....

dad see who;s here....

umesh:arre anjali aa gayi beta?safar kaisa rahaa?

anjali:oh uncle how r u?i'm so happy to see u all after this long...

shruti:more happy to see sujal..right?

anjali blushes and looks at sujal who just entered....

sujal takes it a little sportively and says...yeah yeah happy coz she
can eat my brain again like before...

anjali jumps at him and almost gives him a gentle slap...she sees
kashish in the meanwhile and asks shruti:arre shruti u did not tell me
that u 've hired such a beautiful girl as ur care taker....when u said
that uncle hired a care taker for u, i imagined a middle aged lady...

sujal and umesh for some reason did not like this word 'care
taker'...before they can say anything...

anjali says:hi...i'm anjali...nice to meet u and i think u r very
beautiful

kashish:thanks and i'm kashish...

sujal asks anjali if she is tired with jet lag and alll that...she
shld go and take rest....he will come in the evening and take her to
so and so place...(cld not think of any place so....)

kashish doesnt like this at all and she leaves from there into the
kitchen to see if everything is ready for lunch....

sujal:waise anjali....are u really in US all these years?

anjali:why do u ask?

Sujal:arre yeh fate hue kapde dekhkar lagta hai ki koi chidiyaghar me
khaid ho yeh saare saal...

she is actually wearing some stupid clothes...

anjali:sujal...arre tum itna mazaaki kab ban gaya tha...

sujal:jab se tumhe dekha

umesh is also a little bit uncomfortable with this whole thing and
shruti is surprised with this unusual behaviour of sujal...

sujal cld care less...all he wants to see is if he can find atleast a
ray of jealousy or concern in kashish's eyes....that;s all...that;s
why all this natak...nahi tho he hates this muh jali anjali....

kashish is listening to all this from inside and becoming very
irritated...she wants to push that anjali out of her sight...

Sujal:alright uncle ab mujhe jaana chahiye...aap log aaram se khana
kayiye...main baad mein milungaa...bye shruti and anjali...

umesh:arrre arre sujal...tum kaha jaa rahe ho...khana tho hum khayenge
hi lekin tumhare saath...chalo tum bhi rukh jaao...

sujal expected this....

alright uncle...

shruti and anjali become very happy but kashish is not....she is not
happy abt sujal spending some more time with that anjali...
............................................................ ..

Everybody is around the dining table...waiting to be served...

Kashish is helping ramu kaka...

sujal,anjali and shruti are cracking jokes and laughing for something
or the other...

finally food is being served...

umesh asks kashish also to sit along with them but kashish refused
saying today was her fast day...

anjali:so sujal when r u going to marry...i'm surprised that u still
did not marry...

sujal:hm...yeah...i will get married when i find the right kind of
the girl...
he looks at kashish to see how she is reacting...no reaction..sigh!

anjali:did u find any so far?

sujal:nope...

anjali:hm...cant believe the most eligible bachelor is not able to
find a suitable girl....right uncle?

umesh:what to do anjali...all of us gave up trying to tell him that
he shld get married...dont know what he is looking for...i wonder if
that girl is born yet...

anjali:sujal....why r u doing this?

sujal:dont worry now u 've come right...very soon i will get
married...

everybody is shocked...including kashish...she had to put in a lot of
effort to look like she is least bothered...

she takes the excuse of getting something and goes in...

here anjali is getting all blushed and happy...

sujal:what happened?why r u all so quite?i thot since anjali is
showing so much concern she will help me in finding my girl...did i
say anything wrong?

anjali's face becomes like a deflated tire....oooooooooooh....

sujal pours something on his shirt by mistake(or is it
purposefully),excuses himself,goes in to wash...

Kashish is fuming with anger...she thinks "khya samjta hai apne aap
ko...kitni shaadiyaa karegaa...he is talking to that anjali as if he
met his premika after a long time...be sharam...anyways why am i
thinking abt him.....well...why not?i think i shld let him know who
am i?if he thinks that he can spoil my life by marrying me
forcefully,i will tell him how mistaken he is...i will see how many
more times he will marry...by keeping quite i think i'm allowing him
to take me for granted"

she is lost into her thinking while taking the desert bowl from the
fridge...she is brot back into this world when she saw somebody
closing the fridge door...with a surprised look she lifts
her head...sujal...looking at her with a very mischevious smile...and
asks her if she needs any help...

kashish ignores him and tries to go away from there...

sujal:kashish...why r u so angry...did anybody say anything?

kashish is still on her way to the dining hall...sujal stands on her
way and holds her shoulders...he looks into her eyes in a very loving
way...kashish just gives him a serious look...

sujal is enjoying that proximity with kashish...he came even more
close to her...kashish is not able to resist...she is scared that
somebody will come in...sujal is not ready to leave her at all...she
suddenly remembered the conversation between him and anjali...that's
it she gets so angry again that now she is ready to give some peace
of
mind...

kashish:leave me...what do u think of urself?u can do whatever u want?
how many girls u want....i dont understand why u r after me...just
leave me alone...she rudely pushes him aside and goes off from
there...

after a few seconds sujal also comes out but doesnt even look at
kashish...they finish their lunch and sujal leaves,promising anjali
that he will come and pick her up in the evening to go somewhere...
.......................................................

kashish is leaving for home when umesh calls her...he says kashish
take this money...u said u have to take ur mom to a doctor right?

kashish:but sir...money...no sir...

umesh:please kashish dont say no...by taking this u will give me a
lot of happiness...

kashish:ok sir...
actually she was wondering how she is going to bye the medicines that
the doctor is going to prescirbe....
.....................

kashish took her mom to the doctor and on the way bought all the
medicines...her mom is really surprised to see her spend so much
money..she is scared what kashish is upto...she has seen so much in
her life that she cant believe that somebody will give money just
like that....

savita:kashish kahaa se laayi thi itne saare paise?

kashish:mamma my boss gave me...he is a very nice person...

savita looks at her with disbelief...

she is thinking now...

at home..."kashish kal se tum ye job chod do"

kashish:mamma....leking kyo?(she feels that her mamma is over
reacting)

savita:mein kah rahi hun isliye...

kashish:nahi mamma i cant do that...i'm sorry...

savita:ok then talk to me...she starts crying...

maamiji:she is scared that kashish will listen to her mom and not go
to the job...now a days after kashish started working there,they r
atleast able to eat properly...arre savita khya baat hai...khyom tum
nahi chahte ki hum do wakt ki roti thik se khaye?

savita:bhabhi aap nahi samajhte..

maamiji:ha ha mein sab samajh gayi...u started feeling that ur
daughter is unneccesarily spending her money on us...but kashish is
my daughter also...dont forget that i'm the one who took care of
her...bla bla bla...

kashish:mamma,maami please listen to me....NO MATTER WHAT...I CANT
LEAVE THAT JOB....IS THAT CLEAR....

maami is very happy....but savita asks kashish to never ever talk to
her in life...

kashish cries bitterly and sleeps....

..........................................................

next day morning kashish as usual went to her mamma taking a cup of
coffee...but savita doesnt even look at her...

from that day onwards savita stopped talking to her....

one may feel that savita is overreacting...but she has seen so much
in life,lost so much in her life that now she has become very
sensitive towards everything....already chandru has become very
distant from her...more than for kashish she always keeps praying for
chandru...

savita has become rock hearted...now she doesnt have any feelings
nothing...and with kashish not listening to her,she has become even
more stubborn....in this whole tension,savita got a mild heart attack
and she had to be rushed to the hospital...kashish is so lost in this
sudden thing, that she forgot to inform umeshji that she will not be
able to come on that day...
......................................................

umesh is pacing back and forth...he is worrid why kashish did not
come yet...its almost lunch time and she still did not come....he is
worried abt savita...but doesnt know what to do...he can send the
driver to find out what is happening...but he is scared that it wld
like he is overbearing...

sujal comes in as he needs to take some signatures...

sujal:uncle what happened?u look so tensed...

umesh:arre nothing sujal....just thinking abt tomorw meeting...

sujal:uncle doctor asked u not to worry abt anything right?

umesh:its not that easy sujal...as long as we have this heart,heart
ache is inevitable...

sujal:alright uncle i give up...but please can u share ur problem
with me...

umesh:who else will i tell....i'm also thinking of telling u
something...but i'm looking for the right time...khair kaho kya baat
hai...

sujal:i need some signatures uncle.....by the way where is everybody
else....there is no noise...

umesh:anjali and shruti went to meet some of there old friends and
pinki is playing inside...

sujal is not satisfied...he is least interested abt these people and
the person who he is interested abt,he cant ask directly abt her...

sujal:oh...what's the plan for the day uncle....i have some time in
the evening...shall we go out to the park...pinki is also after me
for sometime now to play with her....

umesh:seems like a great idea.....we will wait for u...

"ALL of u be ready then...we will go"...saying this he leaves....he
doesnt know that kashish did not come that day,so he is expecting her
also to come with them...
..............................................

kashish gets a message saying somebody wants to meet her in so and so
park...she understood that it must be from chandru...she feels very
happy that she can ask chandru to come and see their mom...she knows
that her mom will feel much better if she sees her son...
.....................................

sujal comes back at around 3 pm...by then umesh and pinki are all set
to go...pinki is very happy that finally she is able to spend some
time with him...she just loves sujal...sujal really has a way with
the kids...and after sujal if she likes anybody its kashish...in
these few short months pinki has become very close to kashish...she
started bonding with her more than her own sister shruti....

sujal doesnt see kashish there...he doesnt understand..."so uncle is
everybody ready...shall we leave?"

umesh:yes..lets go...pinki chalo beta

sujal holding pinki's wheel chair is looking around...umesh doesnt
understand what he is looking for...he thinks that may be he is
looking for shruit and anjali...so he says they are not back yet...

pinki meanwhile says:how nice it wld 've been if kashish was also
here....

sujal understood that kashish did not come today....he wants to ask
umesh,but keeps quite...

umesh:yeah...how i wish?but pata nahi kyo nahi aayi aaj...it never
happened before...i only pray that everything is fine at her home...

sujal now looks at umesh as to what he is talking abt...

umesh:ha sujal...actually i'm a little worried cos kashish told me
y'day that her mom is not doing well..and today she did not come
only...i'm hoping that everything is fine...

now sujal lost all his interest in going to the park....his mind
already went off to kashish....he wants to find out if everything is
okay with her....now its like a burden to be going to the park with
these guys...

But since he cant help it...he takes them to the park...
............................................................ .....

sujal is playing with pinki...but a part of him is not with him...its
thinking constantly abt kashish and praying that she is fine....

umesh is reading some book...

sujal while playing suddenly sees kashish and feels very happy...but
at the same time he sees that she is talking to the same person that
he saw her with, a few days ago....both of them are standing close
holding their hands talking very intensely and seriously abt
something...kashish is very emotional and angry and saying something
to that guy...but that guy is disagreeing or something like
that....sujal's blood just boils...all his worry for kashish
transforms into anger and doubt....he thinks that kashish did not
come that day to meet this guy...he feels very very jealous of this
guy....

He decides that he will teach a lesson to kashish....

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end of part 9...

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part-10

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dearest readers,

Oh thanks once again for the overwhelming response...i'm truly
touched...weekend has been hectic and cld sqeeze in only a few
minutes in between in which i manged to read a few mails and also
response to them...now i got a couple of hrs so i can aaraam se sit
and first complete writing the part10 and then i shall reply to the
rest of the mails....all the weekend, a part of me is occupied with
the tossing of various ideas as to how sujal is going to teach
kashish a lesson...now i know i've all ur expectations also to live
up to...do u really think sujal shld teach a lesson to kashish?i know
in KTH-1 he shld...IN FACT ITS HIGH TIME...but here dont u think so
sujal is being a little too mean...i guess i'm taking all my revenge
of KTH-1 kashish on the poor kashish of KTH-2...Not fair...right?
that's ok...dont think too much...lets leave the logic behind and
continue with our journey into the romantic world of sujal and
kashish...
............................................................ .....
Recap:sujal again sees kashish with chandru and misunderstands...this
time he gets so angry and jealous that he wants to teach a lesson to
her...
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Kashish is still trying to convince chandru to come and see their
mom...but chandru is not willing to do that...he says that the job
that he is doing demands that he shld not be having any family...and
if his boss knows abt it,it cld prove to be very dangerous for
them...kashish gets worried as to what kind of a job that it cld
be,that it has these strange rules...but chandru is already out of
time and he just leaves kashish there and goes off in a
hurry...kashish is too shocked and worried to even go behind him...

A strong hand on her shoulder got her back crashing into this
world...she is stunned to see sujal there...his eyes r fuming with
anger....for as sec she gets scared a little bit but within no time
she regains her composure and pushes away his hand and looks at him
in a challenging way...this makes sujal even more angry...

sujal:who is that guy?

kashish cant believe that he is asking her that qstn...

she just walked off ignoring him...

sujal went behind her, grabbed her arm and made her stand there...its
like he is not going to leave her unless she tells all abt that
person with whom she was just talking....

sujal:stressing each and every word...WHO IS THAT GUY?

Kashish:giving him a sharp and disgusted look....NONE OF UR
BUSINESS...WHO R U TO ASK ME QSTNS...AND WHY SHLD I ANSWER UR
QSTNS....

sujal:YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU....he is so angry that he wants to
give her a tight slap....

But thanks to umesh, he saw kashish first and then sujal who is very
angrily saying something to her....so he rushed to where these two
were standing...

umesh:arre kashish...what a pleasent surprise....oh my...how is
everything at home...u dont know how worried i'm....i was abt to send
the driver to ur home in the evening to find out if everything is
ok....

kashish:i'm sorry sir...

sujal:very angrily.....saying sorry is not going to be enough...ye
tumhara baap ka ghar nahi jaha tum jab chaho aa sakti ho,jab chaho
gayab ho sakti ho...dont forget that u r an employee here and u have
some responsibilities....we r not paying u, so that u can have field
time in the parks like this...u have to tell us what u were doing
here,bunking the work...just tell it out...

kashish is holding her tears very hard...umesh is really surprised at
sujal's behaviour and reaction...he thought that he was reacting that
way coz he cares for him too much....

umesh:sujal...that's ok beta...please dont make a scene here...lets
go home and talk...

sujal:no uncle...u dont know these type of girls...ye apne kaam
chalaane ke liye kisi had tak jaa sakte hain...aap bohot bhole
hai...please mujhe bolne dee jiye...

kashish is devastated at the way sujal was talking...for a few days
now, she saw some change in him and she thot may be he really
changed...but now she got to know that he did not change a
zilch...his attitude towards her is still the same...he still has
same cheap opinions abt her....

kashish:with tears in her eyes...sir, u r my boss here...and i think
i'm answerable to only u...but if that is not the case...i'm
resigning from my job right now...i cant work at a place where people
think that i'm a slave or something...where i shld not be having any
personal life of my own....

she waits for a second for umesh's response...

umesh is too shocked to say anything...

kashish:crying very bitterly...alright sir...i got it...i will send
my resignation thru post and ha...thanks a lot for whatever u have
done to me and my family....good bye sir...

now its sujal's turn to be stunned....he did not expect this thing to
turn like this....last thing he wanted was kashish out of his sight...

sujal:u cant get away so easily...whatever u want to do...u cant deal
with things thru post...come home tomorw and do whatever u want to
do...

kashish:gives the most disgusted and hurt look that she can manage to
sujal and leaves from there....

That's when umesh wakes up and realizes what has happened....he gets
angry with sujal...

umesh:sujal ye khya ho gaya tha tumhe...kyo itna over react kar raha
tha...

sujal:already cursing himself for such stupid outburst....walks off
from there without saying a word...

....................................................

umesh knows kashish is not going to come...but still somewhere, at
some corner of his heart he has a feeling that she is going to
come....

he lifts his head at he sound of the foot steps and gets happy that
it must be kashish....but sigh! its sujal....

umesh:oh sujal...thank God u came...i was thinking that u got angry
y'day with me for saying all that...but later on i understood that
its ur concern for me that made u speak like that....

sujal:that's ok uncle...in fact i shldnt have said all that...who am
i to talk anyway...

umesh:come on sujal..u know what is ur position in my heart...so dont
ever say things like this...

sujal:thanks uncle for giving me so much love...

sujal looks around searching for something....

umesh:nahi beta kashish nahi aayi...in these few months i understood
her very well...she is very swabhimani...i wonder if she will ever
come here...

sujal feels a little bit sorry for her,but he cant forget her close
moving with that other guy...so he thinks this serves her right...but
he did not think that she wld quit...he is feeling guilty for that....

while he is contemplating back and forth of various things that
cld've been and wld've been, shruti and anjali come down like a
toofan...

"oh sujal...sorry for the late...chale"

umesh:kaha jaane ki programme hai...

shruti:papa aaj sujal ne hame shopping le jaane ki promise kiya hai...

sujal:ok uncle we shall make a move now...ok girls..chale?

umesh keeps looking at the three of them who were leaving and thinks
to himself..."sujal when u refused to marry shruti and shruti was
also not too inclided towards marrying u..i thot may be it is not in
my kismat to have u as my son-in law...after i knew that kashish is
my daughter...my hopes again got awakened...but now what is all
this..."

Actually an year ago umesh wanted sujal to marry sruti...but both of
them refuse that proposal...shruti thot that sujal is not her type
and sujal is not willing to marry any rich girl...so that's how that
matter closed...

............................................................ ....

sujal,anjali and shruti just finished a part of their
shopping...sujal is already damn bored and he wants wrap it off and
leave...since he promised them,he is being patient with
them....shruti remembers that her papa asked her to get the medicines
for him...so she tells sujal abt it...they go into the nearest
medical shop...

as they entered they hear a very familiar voice...sujal is the first
one to recognise the voice...."kashiiish"he says to
himself,ofcourse....

kashish is on a hurry and she looked very worried....she is asking
that guy to make it fast...she did not even notice these people
entering and all that....
"please will u pack the injections fast....i need to take them to the
patient right away...dont u understand?"

sujal is surprised to see her in the first place and now looking at
her urgency and worry,he gets concerned...he wished that shruti and
anjali were not there with him...

shruti:arre kashish tum...khya baat hai?itna pareshaan khyo lag rahi
ho...

kashish doesnt even have time to get surprised seeing these guys
there...

kashish:hi shruti...bas kuch nahi...i'm in a hurry...sorry i will
talk to u later...
she takes the medicines and rushes out from there...just for a split
second she looks at sujal....

sujal is very concerned now and want to help her....

anjali is least bothered abt this whole thing...shruti also not too
much...

anjali;;;shruti chale?

shruti:yaa..lets go...suuuuuujal?what happened to u?lets go....

sujal:ha..yeah...girls....i just got a call from the office...they
need me urgenlty for something....if u dont mind, i think i shld
attend to that...ur shopping is also almost done....i will leave the
car and the driver and i will take a taxi and go...is that okay with
u?

shruti and anjali:ok...not a bad idea...

sujal rushes from there....

............................................................ ..

kashish is very restlessly waiting for the bus....already 2 buses
came and left but there is no place for another soul in them...

she senses somebody coming and standing next to her...yes again u
guessed it right...its sujal...

she just turns her head towards the other side....

sujal:why r u looking so worried...for whom are u taking these
medicines? (with full authority and concern in his voice)

no response...

sujal:did u not hear...i'm asking u something....

kashish:very rudely...did u not understand i'm not interested in
talking to u only...forget abt answering ur qstns...just leave me
alone...

sujal:i know u were angry abt y'day but do u understand that u 've
only urself to blame...

kashish:will u please stop it...i'm not at all interested in another
dual with u....please i'm already so worried and dont bother me...

sujal:please tell me kashish...khya hua...tum khyo itna pareshaan lag
rahi ho...ghar me sab thik to hai naa?

kashish:aap se matlab...

sujal:kashish i really want to know and help u...

she senses the sincerety in his eyes...

kashish:i dont need any help from u...anyways ...my mamma is not
well...we joined her in st.john's hospital a few days ago,but today
her condition deteriorated...doctor asked for these injections
urgently...saying this she starts again looking for the bus...

sujal calls a taxi and asks kashish to get in...

kashish doesnt want to get in...but sujal just grabs her arm and
almost drags her into the taxi...taxi wala is a little inquisitive
guy...he looks at them very strangely...thinking why this guy is
dragging her into the car like that...

sujal understands his looks and wants to answer him in the right
way...he also sits next to kashish in the taxi and asks that guy to
take them to so and so hospital...

taxi wala:saab, mem saab bohot tension me hai...sab thik tho hai
naa...kuch acha sa gaana daaldoo?mood ek dam first class ho jaata
hai...

kashish is least bothered abt what's going on...now that she is
anyway forced to sit in the taxi...she is more interested in reacing
there fast....

sujal:just gives him a serious look...

taxi wala:now he wants to make sujal a little happy...saab aapki jodi
bohot khubsurat hai...ek them made for eachother couple lag rahe
ho...lag raha hai aapko apni biwi ki bohot parwa hai...
(whatever...nazia see what u r putting me thru...u wanted me to write
dialogues in hindi right...as u can see..i'm trying...)

sujal is very happy with this remark...of course he doesnt show it
out as usual and sits very composed...but after a second cant help
giving a side glance to kashish, to see what her expressions r...

surprisingly there r no feelings...he wondered if she is in this
world at all...

now the taxi wala is seeing back at them again and again and also
thru the mirror...he is looking at them very doubtfully as to why
they were sitting so far away...

sujal sees this and understands....so he goes close to kashish and
puts his hands around her....

kashish almost jumps out of the seat at this.....sujal whispers to
her...'please...we have to act..otherwise we will become a laughing
stock in front of this guy'

now some unknows currents are passing thru sujal...its very difficult
to hold such a beautiful girl so close and not do anything...he is
having a hard time controlling himself...

kashish on the other hand is very uncomfortable at his touch...she
wants to run away from him at that minute...she is scared that she
will give away....but this is only for a minute...she remembers her
mamma again and gets lost...she is all worried abt her...she is lost
in her thots...

sujal is really getting turned on now....he is holding her very
gently like a million bucks....

meanwhile they reached the hospital...they get out of the taxi and
pay that guy ....and yes our man did it...he cld not control himself
anymore and just when they reached the footsteps of the hospital he
held her face and planted a sweet and gentle kiss on her
cheeks....kashish tried to resist but in vain...

she cld not believe what he did just now....she gets totally worked
up and raises her hand to give him a tight slap...but sujal stops her
on the way and says what happened...

kashish:u r asking me?arent u ashamed of what u did?

sujal:what did i do?whether u agree or not...hai tho tum meri biwi hi
na..tho phir maine khya galat kiya tha....

kashish:not able to understand what he is trying to say(actually she
is fully aware that this is not the time and place to handle him...so
she postpones it to someother time...right now she wants to rush to
her mom)she just gave him a look and says 'i will take care of u
later' and rushes....

sujal also runs behind her....

............................................................

kashish gave the injections to the doctor...the doctor asks her if
there is any male person to whom he can talk to ....(sorry girls i
know this is too mean...why?we can also handle these doctors...why
these men are needed...but i need them here in my story...so forgive
me...)

kashish doesnt know what to do...shyamlal is also not in town...he
went out on a pilgrimage....

sujal appears there and says yes doctor i'm there....

doctor:oh good...but how r u realted to the patient....

sujal:i'm kashish's friend...

kashish is totally spell bound...

doctor:ok...sir...this is what u need to do now....and explains him
the procedures and stuff...

sujal listens and gets into work immediately...he totally forgets abt
kashish...and gers focussed...

kashish cant believe that the same sujal was behaving like a teenager
just a few minutes ago...

sujal arranges for all the things that the doctor had asked for and
everything is going on like a clock work...he calls another doctor
who is his good friend and requests him to attend this case...that
doctor is only happy to oblige him....so everything is done and
kashish's mom is out of danger...

kashish heaves a sigh of relief and feels happy that her mom is okay
now...

doctor:sujal...u r just in time...good job buddy...

sujal:hey...i 've to thank u...for taking care of the
patient...really..

doctor leaves saying bye to kashish and sujal....

sujal also is abt to leave without saying a word to kashish...

kashish:ek minute....u thot that all this drama will make me think
good abt u?no way...may be somebody else will be fooled by all these
naatak but not me...cos i know behind all this acha hine ki nakaab
there is a cruel heartless person...

sujal:why do u think that i want to make u think good abt me?

kashish:That's exactly what i want to ask u...

sujal:oh...(again his natkat self is out)...may be cos u r my
wife...i want to make good impression on u...tell me am i
successfull...

kashish:mujhe aapke soch par hasi aati hai...u think of urself as a
smart person...dont forget that u r dealing with me...kashish...

sujal:arre nahi..kabhi nahi...if i forgot that how will i be here...u
think i've opened one charity center or what...i'm here cos u r
here...(suddenly he becomes serious)...achi tarah se ye baat samaj lo
aur jaan bhi lo....

he leaves right away...

kashish is confused at his behaviour...she doesnt understand why he
is reminding her again and again that they r married and all that
when they know very well that they r never going to come together...
......................................................

so that's the end of part10...

Is it upto ur expectations?hope so...but do let me know abt it....


plz comment yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzz





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Posted: 30 April 2007 at 1:45am | IP Logged
hey cool part. cont soon. jaldi spice dalo.
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gr8 part
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great part
continue soon

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dear saranya where the 11 part pl, send it soon as i cant wait formore longer.it is going upto my expectations.really very very interesting.pl continue soon.

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