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hey nice stry buddy do cont soooon

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lovely story...do cont soon... Smile

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great story
continue soon

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hew fabulous. can't wait for the next update Wink

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part-5

here is the part-5

enjoy this part
here is the next part hope u enjoyyyyyy it

I cant tell u how much i'm enjoying writing this serial...hey dont
think that this is all my own...i've put together all my cinema,novel
knowledge together and since i love these suttle romantic stories, u
will find a lot of those moments in my story....But whatever it is
i'm glad that u guys r liking it and i want to hear more and more
from u so that it will act as a fuel to my stories...u know what i
mean?and also one more foreword...since i'm not a seasoned writer i'm
not able to express certain things even to my liking...so u 've to
bear with me for that...i know dialogues are very imp for such
stories and i'm trying my level best to put all my knowledge into
work...so lets read part 5 guys....
........................................................
Recap:Sujal sees kashish with umesh and family and gets surprised and
then he learns that she is working for them..Kashish doesnt like to
see sujal there...umesh asks sujal to drop off kashish at home....

............................................................ .

Kashish refuses to go with sujal...umesh is surprised with her
reaction and asks her if there is any problem...

kashish:no sir...nothing...actually i want to spend some more time
with pinky....she has been asking me since morning to play with
her...i also want to get to know her in a better way...and also i
dont need to go so early...its only 3pm now...i can stay here for
another couple of hours...

umesh:admiring her commitment towards her work...that's great
than...as u wish...okay sujal i think u can carry on...but please
keep coming...see i've become old and u know how much i'm dependent
upon u.....

sujal is disappointed, at the same time angry with kashish that she
has refused to come with him...he knows that she is only making
excuses not to go with him...he just felt like grabbing her by her
arm and make her sit in his car..."yes uncle...i will make it a point
to come here more often"...he just glances at kashish again and
leaves...

kashish just heaves a sigh of relief...and gets into work...but one
part of her mind is occupied with sujal...his intense glances are
haunting her and somehow for the first time she did not see that
usual hatred in his eyes....whatever it is she just wants to wipe off
his thoughts and forget abt him...
...................................................

kashish reached home in the evening thinking of how to face the
situation...how to say no to Ravi...

Ravi and his grandmother came and they all wanted kashish and ravi to
go out...so they go out to talk to eachother...then kashish tells
ravi that she is not ready to get married now and she is really
sorry...ravi also says that he really appreciates her straight
forwardness and asks her to forget that this ever happened...he says
that we can still be friends and u can ask me whenever u need any
help...

Ravi tells his grandmother that kashish is not the kind of girl that
he wants...he wants somebody with higher education bla bla bla...
(basically making excuses in such a way that the blame doesnt come on
to kashish)so they leave...kashish feels very greatful to ravi...

that night when she was abt to sleep, chandru comes home from the
back door...she feels very happy and starts getting emotional.. the
tears that she is trying to hide from the world, all these days come
out...chandru feels really bad and helpless and his resolution to
make his sister happy strengthens even more....

chandru:kashish(he always called her by her name)....did anybody say
anything to u?why r u crying so much....

kashish:nothing...i'm seeing u after this long no...that's why...how
r u doing?

chandru:kashish listen to me carefully...i've come to just say bye to
u as i got a job in bombay and i dont even know when i will be
coming back...so take care of urself and this is the address to which
u can correspond...u shld be happy and i'm ready to do anything for
u....

kashish:no chandru u r not going anywhere....is that clear?u want my
happiness right?my happiness is in knowing that u r fine and not
going in any dangerous path...

chandru:i'm always happy kashish...dont worry abt me...

kashish:can u promise me that u r not treading in any dangerous path?
promise me chandru...

chandru:gets emotional and goes away saying bye to his sister...

kashish just breaks down...she doesnt know what to tell to her
mom...she has been waiting to see her son for so long....

.............................................

It is almost a month that kashish started working at malhotras...she
has now become a part of their family....its like they have known her
all their lives....to kashish's relief sujal never came to that side
in that one month...he met umesh outside only whenever they had
something to talk abt(sujal takes care of all the legal procceedings
of the malhotra company)...in this one month kashish understood one
thing....sujal is loved by all the people there...if umesh starts
talking abt sujal,there is no stopping....

Shruti also became very friendly with kashish...kashish realized that
shruti is very moody and howmuch ever she talks like a friend, she
never wld like kashish to forget that she is an employee
there....there is a thin line ther and kashish is sensible enough not
to cross that ever....

But pinky is a sweetheart....she loves kashish like anything and now
she just cant stay without seeing kashish everyday....since she cant
walk properly, kashish strolls her in the garden everyday for one hr
telling all nice nice stories...kashish really has a way with the
kids....

umesh also loves kashish just like his other 2 daughters...he was
never able to tell her abt that though...and this feeling is mutual
between them...but sometimes the untold feelings are better
understood than the ones that are told...this father daughter
relationship gets on to the nerves of shruti and she feels jealous
abt kashish....she thinks that his father is giving kashish that
love,which he was never able to give to his own daughters....

Sujal wanted to come there so many times just to see kashish....but
whenever he wanted to come he remembered the hatred in her eyes and
just got put off...he only knows how difficult it is for him, not to
see her....without his knowledge he started caring for her...he
started looking for her...he started feeling more possessive abt
her...and yes may be he started LOVING HER....as much as he want to
hate her....

............................................................

Pinky,kashish and shruti are playing some game...raghu kaka was
holding pinky in his hands so that she can also participate in the
game...kashish is the police and she is running behind shruti and
pinky to catch them....(chor,sipahi game...i know its silly but its
needed here )kashish is so lost in running that she is not able to
see anything else...she runs and dashes into somebody who just
entered the gate....(yes u guessed it right...;-)...)

sujal holds her very carefully so that she doesnt fall and helps her
balance herself....both of them are in a very strange state of
mind...he gets shocked suddenly...kashish sees this difference and
wonders why...she looks towards where he is looking...he is looking
at the mangalsutr around her neck....she is very embarassed,but
conceals her emotions and slowly leaves from there....

sujal cant believe what he just saw...he is very happy...he never
thot that kashish wld respect that forced marriage....this gave him
some courage to talk to her and find out what is there in her
mind....now he is really looking forward to catching kashish when she
is all by herself...

Sujal comes in and by then shruti and pinky also saw him...pinky just
clings on to him and shruti is also very happy to have him there...

shruti:hi sujal...long time no see....

sujal:yeah a little busy u know...(he is talking to shruti but his
eyes are looking for kashish...)how r u shruti...how is ur
college...this is ur final year...i hope u r concentrating properly...

shruti:hoffo...please stop treating me like a kid sujal...i know what
i need to do okay...tell me what u want to have...coffee,tea,coke?

sujal:hot hot coffee...(he knows that shruti doesnt know how to make
coffee...he doesnt know if kashish knows how to make coffee but just
wanted to take a chance....)...

shruti:hm...let me see if kashish knows how to make coffee...(goes in)

Shruti goes and asks kashish if she can make a cup of
coffee...kashish cld not say no...so she makes and gives it to
shruti...

seeing shruti coming out with the cup of coffee, sujal is very
disappointed...not that he expected kashish to come running to him
with a cup of coffee...he starts drinking that coffee not like coffee
but like amrit that has directly come from heaven.....

shruti finds it real funny...she asks sujal after how many days he is
drinking a cup of coffee...he says for the first time i'm drinking...

shruti:what?really...

sujal:i mean for the first time i'm drinking such a nice coffee...

shruti:u want one more cup?

sujal:yeah sure...

shruti again goes in and requests kashish for one more cup of
coffee...kashish gets really annoyed and feels like throwing that hot
hot coffee on sujal...but resists herself...she doesnt understand
this new form of sujal...she thinks that he is trying to trouble
her...

meanwhile umesh comes there and he asks for kashish...shruti says
kashish is doing some work inside...

sujal says that he came there to invite all of them for lunch at his
home and ALL OF THEM shld come...he meant kashish also,but obviuosly
cld not take her name....umesh says that they will defntlyu come...he
goes in and tells kashish that the next day is a holiday for her as
they r not going to be around...hearing this sujal gets really
annoyed...he invited them home just to grab some moments with
kashish but this old man spoilt that also...
.............................................

Next day morning sujal calls umesh and asks him if he has anybody who
can assist him in arranging for lunch as he is expecting more
people...sujal says they shld be really capable enough to handle such
things....umesh cld think of only one person and that is kashish....

he sends a car for kashish and sends her a message that she is needed
to come urgently....so kashish comes there....umesh tells her abt
sujal and requests her to go and help him....kashish is really hurt
with this whole thing...she feels that because of her neccessity is
having to go to those places where she wld never want to go....she
feels that sujal is purposefully doing all this and he is taking
advantage of her weakness...she cld not say no and leaves with the
driver to go to sujal's home....

Sujal knows that kashish is going to come...he is waiting for her in
the hall very anxiously...kashish comes there and hesitates a little
bit to enter that house...she came there before also,but so many
changes have happened in her life after that...sujal sees her and
asks her to come in...he behaves very normally...as a boss behaves
with his employee...she just doesnt know what to do so she stand
there without saying anything...he comes and gives her a list of
things that she needs to get done...there r some phone numbers that
she needs to call and make sure that certain things like catering and
stuff like that are taken care of...and also she needs to arrange for
the drinks etc and other logistics also need to be taken care
of...she just forgets abt everything else and gets into work at
once...(she just wants to finish off everything fast fast and push
off from there and also she doesnt like anything to be done half
heartedly)

While she is busy arranging for things,sujal from a corner of his eye
is observing her very happily....for a moment her felt like kashish
is the bahu of that house carrying her duty very faithfully...he just
hit himself gently and smiled...

suddenly he goes to her and asks her if she wants to have a cup of
coffee....she says no thanks,without even looking at him...he says"no
no that day u made coffee for me and i dont like to keep anybody;s
favour..so u 've to drink...(he says like its an order)"kashish is
annoyed but keeps quite....

sujal gets into the kitchen and after a while a big sound is heard
from the kitchen...kashish choses to ignore and get on with her
work,but since there is no further sound from the kitchen she is
forced to go and see what is happening....

There sujal is trying to wash his hands with water and they were
burnt...they see eachother but choose to keep quite...he
says"sorry...now u will have to make ur own coffee and give me also
some" it just in no way sounded like a request...she is totally
irritated...when she is just abt to leave from there,sujal shows her
where the milk is...now she is forced to make coffee...

she gets into the kitchen very reluctantly and starts making
coffee...he doesnt move from there and keeps watching her...she
doesnt feel comfortable at'll...she is searching for sugar and coffee
powder but doesnt want to ask him...he understood what she is
searching for and gives those things to her...saying"u have to know
so many more things here"...she looks at him with a question mark
face...but doesnt care to respond...sujal says.."kashish i want to
talk to u...i've been waiting to talk to u.."..now this is totally
unexpected from him...so she doesnt know what to say...
sujal:kashish say something...i'm asking u something here...

kashish:............

sujal:kashish...

kashish:i have nothing to talk to nobody...i'm here on my work and i
wld like to finish it off as soon as possible and get out of
here...that's all...

saying that she tries to leave from there...but sujal puts his hand
on the way and says that no matter what,she will have to listen to
him...otherwise he doesnt know what he is going to do....

kashish:yeah this is nothing new to u...forcing things on
others...and spoiling other people's lives...what else can u do to me?
u have already done the biggest damage possible...so there is nothing
else that u can do to me....
her eyes are fuming with anger and hatred...

sujal gets taken aback with her words...he takes off his hand and she
walks off like a queen from there without any fear...by then she
finished all her assigned work so she leaves from there...and sujal
doesnt know how to stop her...he keeps quite...

...............................

so that's the end of part5...hope u all enjoyed it as much as i did
writing it...



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dont mind but have u posted this fic in KTH forum 1st...

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Posted: 26 April 2007 at 5:57am | IP Logged
wow saranya awesme parts toooooooooo gooooooooooood continue soooooon

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ya but bhaskar told me to shift in fan fic thats why iam stating it from first so that every one can read it

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