He y i have decided to start a new fanfic it is going to be very small
fanfic as you all know the name is Saving Grace and I got the name from
Julie Garwood's book Saving Grace. Well this fanfic is kinda a
flashback, otherwise Shiv wud be makin his entry only in the 3rd or 4th
part(now also he is not much in it). Hope you all like it and pls
forgive me for all the mistakes and if it is boring.
S A V I N G G R A C E
This part has more of Shashank than Shiv, pls pls pls bear with me.
car followed by two ambulance stops in front of the hospital, and four
guys run towards the ambulance and two guys enter one ambulance each
while the car doors open and comes out a man, two ladies and two boys.
One lady is crying uncontrollably while the other lady is holding her
and one of the boys is also crying and the man is carrying him. And he
turns to look at the ambulance and he sees them carrying out two
unconscious men in two stretchers.
After sometime inside the
hospital, both the men were taken to the operation theater. Gauri has
stopped crying, she is looking at the operation theater and is looking
dazed. She could hear a lot of voices, she could hear Shaurya crying
and asking her whether Papa will be fine?, she could hear Palak sitting
next to her and telling her tht nothing will happen to him and he will
be fine, and she could hear Anupam as he was talking to the cops in a
whisper all she could make out were the names he was mentioning
"Shashank Bose" "Shiv Kapoor".
"Shashank Bose"."Shiv Kapoor".
When Gauri heard these names, she stopped hearing all the noises and
thought of the two men who had come into her life. One she hated the
most and one she loved the most. One who promised her the whole world
and took away her world. One who never made any promise to her but gave
her a world of happiness. One who had come into her life as a savior,
whom she trusted the most, but broke her trust with0ut a thought, and
the other was her Saving Grace, her husband. She thought back to the
day it all had started.
Few years back, when I was just Gauri
with no last name, when I was 20, when I was naive and innocent, when I
used to go to sleep every night praying to God to give me a mother and
a man who would always keep me happy, who could fight for me, who would
fulfill all my dreams, who would........ who would just love me
unconditionally, so I could tell the world that there is someone in
this world who loved me and cared for me, its not as if no one loved me
or cared for me, Dadi did care for me, but she cared for all the people
who stayed in the orphanage with me, because the orphanage was run by
her family, then there was Palak my best friend, we both grew up in the
same orphanage, but she cared for me like a friend just like how Anupam
cared for me. But I wanted someone to care for me the way Anupam cared
for Palak. It was forgone conclusion that Anupam and Palak would get
married, as they were in love since childhood. Ever since Anupam used
to come with Dadi to orphanage, he used to play with us, unlike his
older brother Shashank, who never talked much to the people in the
orphanage on the rear occasions he came to the orphanage. Anupam was
more closer to me than he was to Shashank, in fact he was more closer
to the watchman of our orphanage than he was to Shashank.
and I were sitting in the coffee shop and waiting for Anupam to come.
And sitting there with Palak drinking coffee I was unaware that my life
was about to change drastically, today I was supposed to go with Anupam
and Palak to pick Shashank from the airport. Shashank was coming home
after three long years in the U.S. He was not able to come for Dadaji's
funeral few months back, so maybe thats y he is coming now. He had gone
to the states to do his MBA, then after that he started looking after
the business there. Since their parents passed away in a car accident
they were brought up by their Dada and Dadi. Even though Dadi hated
sending Shashank away, but she loved her grandsons a lot and she could
never break their heart. I was pulled out of my day dreaming when
Palak pulled my hands to show me that Anupam had reached and he is
waiting outside in the car for us.
Later in the car, Palak was
sitting in the front and Anupam was driving, leaving me alone in the
back. Palak and Anupam were talking and laughing and pulling each
others cheeks. I smile looking at them, but couldn't help feeling a
little bit jealous thinking when will I get the man of my dreams.
Finally we reach the airport, and we all get out of the car, and Anupam
immediately spots Shashank who waiting for us outside the airport. He
points to wards Shashank and then call out his name loudly and
Shanshank looked at us, and waved at us as to indicate that he saw us,
and he started walking towards us my hear started beating, I still
don't know why, maybe because he was the most handsomest man I have
ever seen in my entire life.
Anupam: Sorry we r late.
Shashank: Thats okay.
Anupam: Bhai this is Palak, my girl.
Shashank smiles at Palak and Palak starts blushing when Anupam introduced her as my girl.
Anupam: And this is Gauri, my best friend, u know more like a sister.
looked at me first in confusion, then he smiled, his smile resembled
the way we smile when we find something we were looking for.
Shanshank: From the orphanage??
His smile even widened and he puts his hands forward: Its great to meet u again.
We decided to leave, Palak was about to sit behind with me when Shashank stopped her.
Shashank: Palak, y don't you sit in the front with Anupam, I am sure you would prefer that.
blushes and sits in front, while Shashank sat with me in the back and
we both started talking, mainly Shashank asking questions about me and
me answering, I was a little confused with Shashank's interest in me
and my personal life.After that, whenever Anupam came to meet Palak and
me Shashank also came with him and while Anupam and Palak goes off to
romance Shashank and I used to talk. And without much delay I fell in
love with him. But never had the courage to tell him.
my birthday, the day I was brought to the orphanage was considered to
be my birthday, and Palak and Anupam gave me a gold chain, which had
"Gauri" written in it, asking me never to take it off. Then came the
biggest suprise of my life, Shashank gave me a ring and went down on
his knees and asked me to be his wife. And I agreed, and within a week
we got married with Dadi's blessings. And I became the luckiest girl in
the world. I became Mrs Gauri Shashank Bose.
life was perfect, now I had a family. A husband who loved me a lot, a
dadi, a brother who was also my best friend. And life became even more
perfect when Anupam married Palak a month after Shashank's and my
marriage. If anything was lacking in my life then it was a baby. Ever
since we got married, Shashank wanted to have a baby, and its been
three months since our marriage and I was not pregnant yet. Shashank
started getting really depressed.
One day I was alone in our
house as dadi had gone to the orphanage, Shashank to office and Anupam
and Palak had gone to U.K, as Anupam was in charge of some project
which was based in the U.K, and he and Palak would be back only after 6
months. And I was thinking about my life, unaware of the fact that my
life was gonna change this very day, and was thinking how four months
back all I knew about Shashank was tht he was Anupam's elder brother
and now he has become the biggest part of my life. Suddenly I started
getting a little dizzy, and I sat down for sometime, and after sometime
I was fine. And I started getting excited, thinking that finally God
has heard my prayers and I was pregnant. I decided to go to the
hospital without informing Shashank, as I didn't want him to be
disappointed if I was not pregnant.
Three hours later, I got
the results that I was pregnant, and I was so happy and I wanted to
share this news with Shashank as soon as possible, and decided to head
home and suddenly my cell started ringing.
Anupam and Palak: GAURI!!!!
Gauri: ANUPAM AND PALAK!!!!
Anupam: Gauri guess what??
Anupam: We r gonna have a baby!!Palak is pregnant!!!
Ohmigod!!!U guys thats so cool!!!! Even I am....(I was about to tell
that even I was pregnant, then I decided against it as I wanted to tell
Shashank first about it.)I am so happy for u guys!!!
wanted to tell you first, and we called up home, and dadi told us that
u had gone out, and we told her about it, and she is so happy.
Gauri: Okay I gotta go home now, and I will call you people later...okay?
Anupam:Bye Gauri...eh bhabhi!!!
Gauri laughs: Bye bye!!!
After sometime I reached home. And Shashank was home and he looked angry.
Gauri: Shashank, guess what?
Shashank really angry: I know Palak is pregnant!!!
Gauri(well I was about to tell him that I am pregnant, anyway): Isn't it great???
started screaming:GREAT???(And he threw away the glass he was
holding.)U think that is great news???Anupam is going to get the entire
property now and u think that is GREAT NEWS????
Gauri(shocked): Property???What are you talking about??
Shashank: According to Dadaji's will his first
born great grand son of the family gets the entire property.
couldn't believe what I was hearing, now I knew why he wanted to have a
baby so fast, why he was always depressed whenever he found out that I
was not pregnant. He didn't want a baby, he wanted the property and my
baby was the key to the properties.
Gauri: Is that why u wanted to have a baby?
Shashank:YES!!!And that is why I even married you!!!If it wasn't for the property do you even think I would even look at you??
Suddenly someone knocked at the door and as I saw Ipshitha, Shashank's secretary standing there.
Shashank: You,(I turned to look at Shashank and realized that he was talking to me.) get out of my life.
Dadi: What are you saying Shashank???She is your wife.
I saw Dadi standing there with tears in her eyes, I don't know when she got there.
Shashank: Wife????She is not my wife!!!
Yeah thats true!!!Ipshtiha is my wife. We got married when we were in
US, and Ipshitha couldn't have babies and we decided to use somebody
and when I met Gauri in the airport I knew that she is the perfect
girl, as she is an orphan and so there will be no one in my way when I
divorce her. But marrying her was the biggest, mistake of my life. Now
get the hell out of my life.
I watched Ipshitha walking towards
my husband and hugging him. I saw my dreams, my life shatter into
pieces, and all I could do was watch it helplessly.I could hear Dadi
crying loudly saying this shouldn't happen, this is wrong, then I heard
Shashank scream at her to shut up.
I watched all that
helplessly, suddenly Shashank walked towards me and pulled me by my
arms and throw me out of the house which I considered my own and closed
the door on my face. I couldn't bear the pain, I thought I would die,
then I couldn't hear anything, I couldn't see anything, and without
even realizing I started walking.
I got the idea for this fanfic when I was reading made 4 each other
fanfiction by cute_face86. While reading it, it got me thinking what if
Shiv had really married Gauri in it, then what would happen, then I got
this idea for this story, and I decided to write this fanfic. Hope you
all like this also. And I had asked cute_face86 permission to use her
idea, and she said okay(and thank you so much for that amna) Hope you
all like my story and please do comment.
From now onwards, the story won't be from Gauri's point of view, it
will be in normal narration and not as Gauri's narration.*
Gauri was walking down the road, not knowing what was happening around
her. There were lots of cars passing on both sides of her. A car was
coming her way and it was honking continuously, and Gauri didn't hear anything, the car stopped. But Gauri continued to walk.
the door opened, and a man came out. He was wearing white kurta and
white pants and he angrily walked towards Gauri, and he pulled her hand
making her turn.
Shiv: Are you deaf???Didn't you hear me
honking???Don't know from where all these people come from!!If I hadn't
stopped the car,then you would have......
Before he could
finish, Gauri fainted and fell into his hands. He tries shaking her and
saying "hey wake up", in an attempt to wake her up.
another door opened and a lady came out of the car(Its Shilpa
Siklani/Agnihothri, and her name is Ganga Kapoor in this).
Ganga: Shiv, beta what happened?
Shiv turns to look at her: I don't know mom, she swooned.
She goes to them and looks at Gauri and Shiv was still holding her.
Ganga: We have to take her to the hospital.
Shiv just nodes, and picks up Gauri and takes her to the hospital.
In the hospital.
is sitting with Ganga in the doctor's room, with Gauri who didn't have
any kind of reaction, she just looked blank completely. Its been three
hours since they had come to the hospital, Shiv remembered what
They had taken her to the hospital, and the doctor was
checking Gauri, and nurse had come and given Shiv Gauri's watch and all
her ornaments. After sometime, the doctor came out, and he was smiling.
Shiv: Doctor how is she??Is she fine?
Doctor: Don't worry Mr Kapoor, she is fine. She fainted due to her pregnancy. Otherwise there is nothing to worry about.
Shiv: Thank you doctor.
Doctor: U can go in and see her.
Shiv walked in, and saw Gauri on the bed, he walked towards her, and pulled the chair next to the bed and sat there.
Sorry, I screamed at you before. Well I am Shiv Kapoor. And I know you
are Gauri(he said pointing her chain, which Anupam and Palak had given
her).And congrats about the baby(And he smiles at her very sweetly).
Here are all your ornaments, why don't you give me your husband's
number, I will call him up and inform him about you.
realized that she hasn't said a word, and he starts waving his hand in
front of her chanting "hello".Then he started getting tensed, and
starts calling out her name a little louder each time. Suddenly Ganga
walks in,Shiv looks at her tensed.
Shiv: Mom, why is she not saying anything?
called the doctor and after lot of trying when they also failed to get
any reaction from Gauri, they decided get a complete check up on her.
And after all the scanning and all they were now sitting in the
Doctor: There is something terrible has happened
to her and due to that she has gone into a shock. She is not aware of
anything that is happening around her. She has become a vegetable.
Shiv and Ganga just sat there in shock.
Shiv: How can she be cured?
Well at present there is nothing much we can do, as she is pregnant and
at this condition, it will be dangerous to give her medicines as it
might affect her baby.
Shiv and Ganga came out with Gauri after sometime, and Ganga was holding Gauri.
Ganga: What will we do now?
Shiv: What can we do? We will inform the cops and they will try to find her relatives.
Ganga: But how can we just abandon her like that?
Shiv: Then what are you suggesting take her with us?
Shiv: Mom,have u gone out of ur mind?? Her relatives might be looking for her.
Ganga: How do you know that her relatives are looking for her?
Shiv: Anyway her husband would be,(he said pointing towards Gauri's mangalsutra).
Shiv, just think for a minute. What would have happened to her, that
made her like this?And if it is her own people who caused her this
pain, then what??Instead of helping her, we might be putting her in
Shiv: But mom!!!
Ganga: Bhoomi was pregnant Shiv.
Shiv looked at her in a way indicating "what are you saying mom?".
Ganga: So is she!!!
Shiv exasperated: Oh mom!!! U don't consider as Bhoomi do you??u think Bhoomi has come back to us, as her??
Ganga: Yes I do!!!
Shiv knew it was useless fighting with her as her mind was made up and decided to take Gauri with them.
took Gauri home, and there was no change in Gauri's condition and Ganga
considered Gauri as Bhoomi, and loved her that way. And time flew and
it was Gauri's delivery. Gauri was in the operation theater and Shiv
and Ganga were waiting outside.
Ganga: I will come now.
Shiv: Where are you going?
Ganga: I will be in the prayer room.
Shiv: You can't leave me here alone.What if something happens??What will I do?
Ganga:Nothing will happen. (Saying that Ganga walked off.)
didn't know why, but he started getting tensed. Maybe 'coz now he
considered Gauri as a part of his life. Whenever his mom couldn't take
Gauri to the hospital, it was him who took her to the doctor, and over
the few m0nths, he started considering her as a friend. Even though,
she never heard whatever he said, he used to talk to her like his mom
did with her. Suddenly the door opened and came a nurse holding a baby
Nurse: Congrats, you have a son.
Shiv looked at the baby, and looked at the nurse: How is Gauri?
Nurse: She is fine.
The nurse put forward the baby to Shiv,Shiv didn't know what to do, he looked at her in confusion: No I am scared.
Nurse: No sir, you don't have to be scared, hold him like this.
again put the baby forward, and Shiv slowly picked up the baby, and
looked at him, and the nurse words started echoing in his mind"you have
a son" and he realized that the nurse right, the baby in his hand is
his son and he has become a FATHER!!!!
and Ganga were hoping that Gauri would recover after her delivery, but
there was no change in her, but now they are hoping she will recover
soon, as now they were able to give her stronger medicines. After a few
days Ganga walks into the house holding Gauri, followed by Shiv who was
carrying Shourya. Ganga takes Gauri to her room, and Shiv sits in the
living room with Shaurya and starts playing with him, by making cute
faces and making Shaurya laugh. After sometime, Shaurya sleeps off.
Shiv looks at Ganga.
Shiv: Mom, Shaurya slept.
Ganga: Okay give him to me, I will take him to my room.He will sleep there with me.
Shiv: Yeah i think thts a good idea, if he sleeps in Gauri's room, then even if he wakes up at night, Gauri won't know.
After that Ganga takes Shaurya to her room.
night, Shiv was sleeping when he heard a noise, he sat up in bed, and
starts rubbing his eyes and thinking wht tht sound is and he realizes
that it was Shaurya who was crying and goes to his mom's room, and he
walks in and he sees Shaurya crying so loudly, and his mom right next
to him and snoring away. Shiv goes and picks up Shaurya, Shaurya looks
at Shiv and stops crying.
Shiv: For such a small body, how did you get such a loud voice.
fact that he was insulted or that he remember that he was in the middle
of crying, Shaurya went back to crying. Shiv immediately picked up the
feeding bottle and started feeding Shaurya and walked out of the room.
From that day onwards it was decided that Shaurya would sleep with
Shiv, as Shiv thinks that his mom sleeps like the dead.
few months, since Shaurya was born, and Gauri was not even aware of
Shaurya. Shiv's day started and ended with Shaurya.Shiv considered
Shaurya as his son, for Shaurya Shiv was his mother and father. Shaurya
loved Shiv the most, and he loved playing with Shiv all the time.
Everyday, before Shiv left for office, he would play with Shaurya for
sometime, and then at 5pm Shaurya would be ready and would be waiting
for his dad(as after Shaurya was born, Shiv decided that he would not
over work as he thought Shaurya needed him the most at the moment), and
if Shiv is late for even a minute he would start crying.
comes home and rings the bell, and when Shaurya heard the door bell, he
started crawling towards to door, Ganga ran behind Shaurya and picked
him up and opened the door, and on seeing Shiv, Shaurya jumped onto
Shiv and started talking about something which made perfect sense to
him and no sense at all to Shiv and Ganga.
Ganga: Shiv, get ready fast, we have to go to the hospital today.
Shiv first looks confused: Oh..... today is Gauri's appointment with the doctor.
Yeah and also for Shaurya's injection also. So while you get ready, I
will get Shaurya ready and u can take him, and I will
Before shecould finish, Shiv interrupts her: NO WAY!!! U can take Shaurya, I will take Gauri.
was about to oppose to that, when she decide against it, she still
remember the last time, Shiv and her had taken Shaurya to get his
shots, and it was Shiv who made a racket out there more than Shaurya.
And she really didn't want to get embarrassed again, so she decided to
let it be.
After sometime Shiv gave Shaurya to Ganga and went to
freshen up, while Ganga got Shaurya ready. And when Ganga went to get
ready Shiv took Shaurya to Gauri's room. It was kind of a ritual for
Shiv to take Shaurya to Gauri's room,since Shiv felt tht, once Gauri
gets fine, she won't be a complete stranger to Shaurya. Shiv takes
Shaurya near Gauri, and puts him real close to Gauri and Shaurya kisses
Gauri, as Shiv tells him to kiss his mama.
After that Shiv, and
Shaurya were playing with each other, and everytime Shaurya laughs, his
dimples become very visible. Shiv looks at Shaurya's dimples and looks
Shiv: Ohmigod Gauri!!! Shaurya got the cutest dimple ever!!!! I always wonder where he got it from. Does his mama have a dimple?
Suddenly Ganga comes, and they all leave.
the hospital, after Gauri's check up, Shiv takes Gauri to where Shaurya
was. And since Shaurya had just gone to get his shot, Shiv decides to
wait outside, and he was walking with Gauri, when she suddenly stops.
Shiv looks at her in confusion.
Shiv:Gauri??Come lets go.
sees that Gauri was staring, and he looks at what she was seeing and
sees a man and two ladies, and the man was hugging one lady and they
all seemed happy, and he heard the man say something.
Man: Ipshitha, we are gonna have a baby. I love you so much.
Ipshitha: I love you too Shashank.
And Ipshitha turns to the other lady and says: We have no words to thank you.
And then all three of them leave, and Gauri was about follow them, when Shiv suddenly holds her back: Gauri???Gauri???
looks at Shiv, and then she looks at the three people who were now out
of sight, she puts her hand forward with one finger pointed at them,
then she suddenly starts screaming, Shiv just looks at her in shock,
and then he again pulls her, calling her name, and Gauri just burst out
crying and after sometime she faints.
comment ppl. I don't even know whether it was medically possible for
Gauri to not realize that she had a baby and not recover immediately
after her delivery, and she reacting when she saw Shashank. If it is a
blunder then pls forgive me, my science is even worser than my singing
. Pls comment guys good or bad whtever pls do comment.
ppl had doubt abt whether dadi was involved in Shashank's plan. Well
she was not. Nor was Anupam and Palak. Thats why I had Dadi saying
this is wrong and all. And Anupam and Palak were not involved in this
and thats y I had them in London, 'coz if Anupam was home, he would
have fought with Shashank and he would have taken care of Gauri.
in the hospital the girl with Shashank and Ipshitha were the surrogate
mother, as Ipshitha can't have babies, they decide to get a surrogate
remembers Shashank saying that Ipshitha is his wife, Shashank telling
her why he married her, Shashank and Ipshitha hugging and finally
Shashank throwing her out of her house. Gauri suddenly gets up and
realize that she was dreaming, and she couldn't control her tears and
she bursts out crying and suddenly she feels someone touching her
shoulders and saying her name, Gauri looks up and she sees a man
standing there and she looks around and she doesn't recognize the
place. She pushes him away.
Gauri: Who are you??And where am I?
Shiv: I am Shiv Kapoor. And you are in a hospital.
Gauri starts looking around: Hospital???
Shiv: Gauri, listen to me(he sits on the chair next to her bed), you were in a shock.
Gauri totally confused: Shock??
the doctor walks in and he checks Gauri, and tells Shiv that she is
fine and prescribes her some medicine and asks her to take rest and he
leaves. All the while Gauri looking on very confused.
doctor leavs Shiv tells her how they found her and took her to the
hospital and found out that she had gone into a shock). Gauri, what
happened to you, that you lost 1 and 1/2 yrs of your life?
Gauri looks at him and tears starts flowing down her eyes.
Shiv: If you don't want to tell me about it, I can understand.
Gauri just burst out crying: Y did he do this to me? Y??
Shiv goes near her to console her, and she hugs him.
Shiv: Shashank??Who is he?What did he do to you?
tells him about Anupam,Palak, Shashank and Ipshitha. After she finishes
also she continues to hug Shiv and cry. After sometime she realizes
what she was doing, she moves back muttering a "sorry". Later Shiv
takes Gauri home, at first Gauri refused to go home with him, but then
he told her to decide whatever she wants after she goes back home, and
Gauri very reluctantly agrees.
Gauri reaches Shiv's place, and
Ganga comes and opens the door, and when she sees Gauri, she burst out
crying and hugs her, Gauri feels really weird but she liked it also.
Later Shiv and Ganga takes Gauri to her room, and asks her to take rest.
is thinking about what all happened, and suddenly she remember what
Shiv had said "1 and 1/2 years". Gauri starts getting worried 1 and
1/2 years, then what happened to her baby(she touches her stomach) and
starts panicking, she was about to run out and find out from Shiv about
what had happened to her baby, suddenly the door opens and in walks
Shiv with a baby.
Shiv walks up to Gauri, and suddenly Shaurya as per their routine, just kisses Gauri.
Gauri looks at the baby in wonder. Shiv smiles at her.
Shiv: He is your son. Shaurya.
Gauri suddenly takes Shaurya and starts hugging him and kissing him all over. Shiv decides to leave them alone for sometime.
later, Shiv hears Shaurya crying and realize that Shaurya might be
hungry and takes his feeding bottle and goes to Gauri's room. And he
sees that Gauri was trying very hard to make Shaurya stop crying.
Shiv: He might be hungry.
when he sees Shiv, he puts his hands forward, and Shiv picks up Shaurya
and starts feeding him. Gauri just watches in shock at the bond between
her son, and this man.
After sometime Shaurya falls asleep. And Shiv was sitting in Gauri's bed holding Shaurya and Gauri was standing.
Gauri: Why did you bring me here?
Shiv was kinda suprised to hear the question: What?
Gauri: Why did you bring me here?
Shiv: My mother wanted to take u home with us.
Gauri: But y?
Shiv doesn't know what to say: Its because....its because.... U reminded my mother of Bhoomi.
Gauri confused: Who is Bhoomi?
Shiv: My sister. Actually my twin sister.
Gauri: Where is she now?
Shiv's eyes started filling with tears: She passed away.
Gauri didn't know what to say, in the end she just said "sorry".
Shiv: U don't have to be, she should be sorry, she didn't even think about us for once.
Gauri starts feeling even more uncomfortable: Was it....was it??
understood what she was trying to say: Yeah she committed suicide. She
loved a guy.... she used to tell me everything, but she never told me
about him and by the time we found out it was too late.....but that guy
was just playing with her, and he left her, she was pregnant, and she
Shiv just put Shaurya on the bed and walked out of the room.
sometime, Ganga comes and calls Gauri for dinner, and Ganga, Shiv(was a
little upset, but was trying very hard to cover it up by trying to have
conversations with Gauri and Ganaga) and Gauri were eating and Gauri
decided it was high time she told them about her decision.
Gauri: I have decided....
Shiv and Ganga looks up at her.
Gauri: I have decided that Shaurya and I will leave tomorrow.
Shiv felt like his world was crashing down.
Shiv and Ganga just watched Gauri in shock. After it felt like eternity Shiv broke the silence.
Shiv: But why??
Gauri was shocked, she thought they wud be relieved that now she has decided to leave but they look shocked.
Gauri: U both have done a lot for Shaurya and me, and I don't want to be a burden to you people anymore.
Shiv trying to reason with Gauri: Gauri u r not a burden for us.
Shiv wanted to say more, but words failed him and so all he said was "Pls don't go."
Gauri: No Shiv. One day Shaurya and I will have to leave. The earlier the better.
Shiv was about to say something when Gauri interrupts him.
Shiv, I know you love Shaurya a lot and Shaurya also loves you a lot
and he is really attached to both of you. And one day Shaurya will have
to leave you. So it will be better if we leave now, because then your
separation will not be very hard because with each day passing, you
both are becoming closer and closer, and in the end it will be very
difficult. I know Shaurya thinks that you are his father, but the truth
is you are not.
Shiv felt like thousand daggers were piercing his
heart. Without saying anything he just gets up and leaves. Gauri looks
at Ganga, and realize that she had tears in her eyes, Ganga looks at
Gauri for sometime, silently pleading her to change her decision and
then gets up and follows Shiv.
Ganga walks into Shiv's room and
sees him standing near the window, looking out. She goes to him and
puts her hand on his shoulders.
Shiv: Why mom??why??Whoever we
love are taken away from us. First dad, then Bhoomi and now Shaurya?
Why can't he(God) let us be happy??
Ganga just puts her head on Shiv's shoulder and starts weeping. Shiv turns around and hugs her.
After sometime Shiv with a determined look say: I won't let her take Shaurya away from me.
Ganga: No Shiv, we can't do that. She is Shaurya's mother. And she got more right on him than us.
Shiv: Shaurya doesn't even know that she is his mother!!!
Ganga: Yes Shiv, but that doesn't change the truth.
Shiv: But mom....
Ganag: No Shiv, there is nothing we can do.
night Gauri, was trying to put Shaurya to sleep, but Shaurya kept on
crying, and Gauri was feeling so helpless and whatever she did, Shaurya
continued to cry. After sometime Ganga came and she also tried to put
Shaurya to sleep, but Shaurya continued to cry.
Shiv was sitting
in his room, and he could hear Shaurya crying, but he remained in his
room. After sometime he couldn't stand it any longer, he walked into
Gauri's room and without saying anything he just took Sharurya into his
arms and when Shaurya saw Shiv, he instantly stopped crying. Shiv took
the bottle from Gauri's hand and went out of the room with Shaurya.
Gauri just stood. She was happy that Shaurya stopped crying. But she
was sad that she was a complete stranger to her son.
sometime, Gauri was sitting in her room, wondering about the bond Shiv
shared with her son. Suddenly she heard a knock on the door and she
turned and saw Shiv with a sleeping Shaurya in his hands. Shiv walked
in, and put Shaurya on the bed.
Shiv(still looking at Shaurya): He
gets up around 2:30 - 3, and you will have to feed him that time. I
have filled the bottle(and he gives Gauri the bottle).
Shiv turns to
leave, then stops and looks at her: Gauri, you know I consider Shaurya
as my son, but you don't know that my mother consider you as her
daughter. She never gave you Bhoomi's place, you were Bhoomi to my
mother. There is something you don't know. The day we met you, my
mother and I was returning from Bhoomi's barsi pooja. And my mother
thought that God had given Bhoomi back to her.(With tears in her eyes.)
Please don't do this to her. I might be able to live without Shaurya,
but my mother won't be able to live without you.
Saying that Shiv just walks off.
Next day morning.
comes out of her room holding Shaurya, and she sees Ganga and Shiv
sitting there all depressed. Gauri goes to Shiv and gives Shaurya to
him, Shiv and Ganga looks at her in shock.
Gauri: I don't know,
how could I even think of separating Shaurya from his father. Shiv, you
were not only his father, you were a mother to my son, when I couldn't
be a mother to him. I never had a father, and I know what is it to not
have a father, and I can't give that pain to my son.
Even after seeing the bond you have with my son, if I take him away
from you, then that would be the biggest injustice I could do to my son.
Shiv just hugs Shaurya and starts kissing him, and in between he looks at Gauri and says "Thank you."
looks at Ganga: When I was small, I used to pray to God to give me my
mother. Now that God has answered my prayers, I don't know how I cud
even think about leaving my mother.
Ganga comes to Gauri, and
puts her hand on her head, and Gauri looks at her and with tears in her
eyes says "I am sorry ma." And Ganga bursts out crying and hugs her,
and Gauri also starts crying.
Later that day night.
after she gave Shaurya his bath, she put him on the bed, and was
talking to him nonsense as she applied powder on him, and she was not
aware of the fact that Shiv was standing at the door and watching her.
Shiv was smiling at looking at Gauri, when she suddenly started laughing.
Shiv thinking: I was wrong. Shaurya doesn't have he cutest dimple, his mother got.
suddenly Shiv realized that Gauri is very pretty, and he was shocked
with his realization, and when she wa walking around picking up
Shaurya's clothes Shiv realized that she got a great figure to go with
Shiv thinking: What the hell am I thinking?? This is not
the first time I am seeing her, but then why am I having this sudden
Suddenly Gauri turns and sees Shiv standing, and she realized that he was frowning.
Shiv: Hey Gauri!!!I just came to give Shaurya a good night kiss.
smiled, as Shiv walked over and kissed Shaurya and starts playing with
him and tickling him, and Shaurya started laughing.
Shaurya went to sleep, Shiv turned to look at Gauri. And realized she
was deep in her thoughts and she had tears in her eyes.
Shiv: What happened Gauri?
Gauri starts wiping her tears: Nothing, I was just thinking about Anupam, Palak and Dadi.
Shiv: Do you think they would be looking for you?
Gauri: Might be.
Shiv: If you want we can contact them.
Gauri thinks about it for sometime, then decides against it: No, I am not ready yet.
Shiv smiles: Alrite.
Shiv was about to leave, when Gauri calls him again.Shiv turns and looks at her.
Gauri: Your mother consider me as her daughter. So can I consider you as my brother?
was shocked with her question and he didn't know what to say. He just
looked at her and then started clearing his throat: Gauri..... I
am.....I am sorry..... I can't let anyone take Bhoomi's place.
Gauri's face started to fall.
Shiv: But I can promise to be your friend.
Gauri smiled: Thanx.
Shiv smiles: Good night.
Gauri: Good night.
Shiv walked out of the room, and closed the door.
Shiv muttering to himself: Hell I am gonna let her be my sister. She is too hot to be my sister.
4 years later( I know I have been leaping and leaping for quiet sometime now....this is my last leap, I promise)
early in the morning, and Gauri was running around, picking up
Shaurya's books and packing his lunch, and ironing his uniform. This
was her daily routine. She gets up early along with Ma, and she does
the pooja with Ma, then helps her cook breakfast and pack Shaurya's
lunch, then get ready as she has to go to office, Shiv had insisted
that she join office, more than for time pass he wanted her to be
independent in life and move forward and forget Shashank, actually she
now rearly thinks about Shashank, he has really become her past. Now
her life was Shaurya her son, Ganga her mother and Shiv her best friend. Its
been four years since she had recovered, but it feels like she has
known Ganga and Shiv all her life, especially Shiv. Shiv knew her
inside out. If anything he didn't know about her was that somewhere
down the line she had fallen in love with him. First she thought that
she wud never be able to love anyone else in her life after what
Shashank did to her. But Shiv with his patience and nature proved to
her that not all men are alike. She loved everything about Shiv. The
way he loved life, the way he loved Shaurya and his mom, the way he
manages to charm everyone especially the girls, but she never had
issues with that, as she knew that Shiv was a charmer but not a flirt.
She loves it when he gives in to all of Shaurya's demands. The way he
himself makes silly demands. She still remembers the time when they
bought the new house, how Shiv insisted on having a connecting door to
Shaurya's room in his room. In the end, he turned the terrace between
his and Gauri's room into Shaurya's room with connecting door to both
his and Gauri's room. Even though Gauri thought he was being silly, she
really loved him for that. That was one of the moments when she
realized that how much she loves him. Gauri got out of her day dreaming
and went to Shaurya's room and woke him up and asked him to get dressed
for school and went to her room, to get dressed.
Gauri got ready and was sitting in front of the mirror and putting make up, when she saw Shaurya standing near the door.
Gauri: What happened Shaurya???How come you are not ready???
Shaurya: Mama, do I have to go to school today?
Gauri: Yes baby, you have to.
Shaurya: I don't want to go.
Gauri: No Shaurya you have to go.
Shaurya starts pouting: No I won't go.
Gauri slightly loosing patience: No Shaurya you have to go.
Shaurya takes Gauri's hair brush and throws it down.
Shaurya screams: No I won't go.
Gauri now really lost her patience: What is this Shaurya??Is this the way to behave?
Suddenly Shiv walks in all dressed up and all: What is it Gauri? Why r u screaming like this?
Gauri: Shiv, its all ur fault!!!u r the one who spoiled him!!!
Gauri tells him everything. After hearing everything Shiv gets angry.
Shiv: Is that anyway to behave Shaurya??? This is it!!!I am not going to let you go off so easily like everytime. U r grounded!!!
pulls on Shaurya's hand and goes to Shaurya's room leaving behinnd a
shocked Gauri running behind them, and locks the door connecting to
Shiv: Till you learn proper manners, you are going to be grounded.
Gauri: Shiv, its okay Shiv. He will behave properly.
Shiv turns towards Gauri: No Gauri, I thought he will learn, but he insists on learning the hard way.
He pulls Gauri and walks out of the room, and locks the main door from outside.Ganga who heard all the commotion comes running.
Ganga: What is happening?
Gauri tells her everything.
Ganga: Shiv, let it be.... don't lock him up.
Shiv: Enough!!! No one will say anything.
Shiv walks to his room and Gauri looks at him suspiciously , Shiv closes the door, but forgets to lock it.
Shaurya is sitting in his room, and playing playstation, with the TV on mute. Shiv walks in thru the connecting door.
Shiv: Hey tiger!!!
Sharuya runs to Shiv: Papa!!!
hugs him and they both laugh on how their plan worked. Later Shiv and
Shaurya starts playing. Shiv picks up the Nutella kept on the side
table and starts eating and puts a spoon towards Shaurya, but before
Shaurya cud take it, he pulls it back.
Shiv: Before that, you have to promise that, tomorrow onwards you have to go to school regularly.
Shaurya: I promise!!!
Shiv hugs him: Thts my son.
He gives him the spoon, and they continue to play for some more time.
I think I will go out and see what Gauri is doing. She might get
suspicious. I will come with her and open the door, you switch this
off(indicating towards the play station), and wash ur mouth, and lie
down here and act as if you r crying okay? I will come in with Gauri.
Shaurya: And when Mama sees me crying, she will feel bad.
smiles: Yeah!! Then to cheer you up, I will suggest we go to that
amusement park you said you wanted to go, and Gauri will agree to cheer
Shaurya grins: Mama is so silly!!!
Shiv: Don't talk like that about your mother.
Shaurya: Sorry....... but she is.
Shiv smiles: Yeah she is.
and Shaurya starts laughing quietly again. Later Shaurya goes into
the washroom, and Shiv watches him leave. Shiv smiles and realizes how
his life had changed in the last couple of years. Since Shaurya and
Gauri entered his life, his life was perfect. Shaurya was more than his
son. Shaurya was everything to Shiv. And Gauri.... Shiv smiles thinking
about Gauri.... over the years Gauri had become a part of his life and
family. If there was any problem in his life, it was that he loved
Gauri, but she saw him as her best friend. He wanted to tell her about
his feelings, but he was scared, because somewhere deep down he had
this feeling that Gauri still loved Shashank. Each time he thinks about
Shashank, he gets angry. He decided that he should go out and do his
Shiv walks to his room, thru the connecting door. And he was about to open the door when suddenly.
Gauri: U know you should also wash your mouth, otherwise you won't look convincing enough.
turned back and saw Gauri sitting on the couch. He looks towards the
door and realize that he had forgot to lock it, and he felt like
Shiv panics: Gauri???
Gauri gets up from the
couch: I knew you were up to something, when you said that he had to
learn it the hard way and all. First I was confused, then I figured
that before coming to me, Shaurya might have come to you, but then you
knew I wudn't let him, so u made up this plan. I shud have known it
then when Shaurya started making a fuss, because he is not like tht.
Shiv tries to smile: Gauri, he didn't want to go to school!!! And his age is to play around, not study!!!
gives him an angry look and then looks at her hand, and Shiv looks at
her hand and sees her holding one of his belts. Now he really started
Shiv: Gauri, actually......
Gauri starts playing with the belt like a whip: U taught him to lie Shiv!!
Shiv: Gauri....it was just a joke...
she hit him with the belt, and Shiv screamed in pain, and started
running around, Gauri was running behind him hitting him with the belt,
then Shiv fell on the bed and somehow Gauri
managed to fall on top of him. Shiv tries taking the belt from Gauri,
while Gauri starts struggling, suddenly Gauri looks into Shiv' eyes and
Shiv also looks into her eyes, and they just forget what was
happening, and kept staring at each other.
Suddenly they hear Shaurya(who had heard Gauri's voice from Shiv's room) whispering from his closed door: Papa, has Mama gone?
Gauri and Shiv realizes what was happening, and Gauri starts blushing
and gets up and goes out.Shiv gets up with a sign muttering that his
son has no sense of timing.
was sitting in her room(now even she was lazy to go for work like
Shaurya and Shiv), and reading a book,actually was trying to read the
book, but what happened in Shiv's room kept coming back to her and she
was blushing thinking about it. Suddenly she heard the door open and
she looked up and saw Shaurya's standing at her door. She ignored him
and went back to reading. Shaurya slowly came near her, stood near her.
Gauri continued to ignore him. Suddenly Shaurya just put his hands
around Gauri's neck and pulled her close to him and gave her a
biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiig kiss on her cheek. In the end Gauri couldn't
help it, and she broke into a smile.When Shaurya realized Gauri was
smiling, he left her neck and looked at her and smiled sweetly.
Shaurya: Sorry Mama!!
Gauri(smiles): Its okay.
Shaurya: I won't do it again.
Gauri smiles at him.
Shaurya: R u still angry with me?
Gauri: No sweety.
Shaurya: I love you Mama.
Gauri: I love you too Lucifer!!
hugs Gauri, Gauri pulls Shaurya into her lap, and kisses him. Then they
start talking for sometime, after sometime when Gauri looks up she sees
Shiv standing there, and immediately she remembered about wht happened
in the room, and she started blushing, not to show that she was
blushing, she asked in a stern voice to Shiv.
Gauri: What are you looking at?
Shiv without missing a beat: You!!!
Gauri starts blushing again. Suddenly Shaurya jumps and goes to Shiv and starts pulling him.
Shaurya:Come Papa lets play.
Shiv looks at Gauri: Coming to play with me..... I mean us???
Gauri starts blushing even more and Shiv breaks into a grin.
Shaurya: Come Mama, we all play!!!
Gauri: No!!! I have to help Ma in the kitchen. U both play.
Shiv picks up Shaurya and goes out.
goes to the kitchen and was helping Ganga make rasmalai. But she was
thinking about Shiv. Was he flirting with her? Or was she reading more
to it than wht was happening? She knew Shiv, he was not a flirt, but
then wht was happening? Suddenly she turns and bangs into Ganga who was
holding milk and it falls on Gauri's saree. Ganga asks her to change
her saree, and Gauri goes to her room.
Shiv and Shaurya were playing hide and seek and Shiv goes to Gauri's
room to hide and he hides behind the two seater. Suddenly he hears
someone lock the door, when he looks up he sees Gauri,he was about to
tell her that he was sitting there when suddenly Gauri starts removing
her saree and immediately Shiv's mouth went dry and all he could do was
watch Gauri. He knew there were so many women who were prettier than
Gauri, but for him Gauri was the most beautiful girl in the world.
Suddenly Gauri went into the bathroom. Shiv just stood their
mesmerized, and he cud hear the water running, he wanted to go to
Gauri, take her into his arms and make her his, but he knew he can't.
In the end he somehow managed to walk towards the door, when suddenly
Gauri walks out of the bathroom with a towel wiping off the water, and
Shiv again gets rooted to the ground, Gauri looks at him and smiles and
walks towards the cupboard, when she suddenly realize that she is only
wearing her blouse and under skirt, and tht too a WET blouse, she turns
and tries to cover herself with the towel, and looks at him.
Shiv starts walking towards her and Gauri starts moving back till she
reaches her cupboard and now she has no place to go. Shiv looks into
her eyes and Gauri looks back at him and gets mesmerized in his eyes
and slowly Shiv comes closer and his lips descends on hers,and he
starts kissing her, and Gauri couldn't control any longer and kissed
him back with all her love.
horrible at romantic scenes, pls bear with me. I really suck at romance
and to write this part one of my IF friend helped me, she gave me the
idea for this scene. Pls comment.
had completely forgotten about that she was only half dressed, that Ma
was waiting for her in the kitchen, all she knew about and only cared
about was Shiv, and that he was kissing her with so much hunger, she
was loosing her senses completely suddenly she heard someone banging on
the door and she immediately came out of her trance, and she pushed
Shiv away and tried to cover herself with the towel, while Shiv was
still in a daze, and was slowly coming to his senses, and then he heard
the banging. Shaurya started screaming from the other side of the room.
Shaurya: Mama, open the door.
Gauri: What happened Shaurya?
Shaurya: Is papa there?
Gauri: No, he is not here.
Shaurya: Open the door Mama, I want to look.We are playing hide and seek and he might be hiding in ur room.
Gauri a little desperately: He is not here Shaurya.
Shaurya: Pls open mama, I want to check.
Shiv whispers to Gauri: U better open the door, otherwise if he screams anymore Mom will come.
Gauri nodes: Shaurya wait for two mins I will open now.
Shaurya: Okay but no two minutes only one minute.
Gauri: Okay okay.
Gauri takes a saree and goes to the bathroom and changes and comes out.
Shaurya: Mama open!!!
Gauri: Yeah baby coming.
Gauri whispers to Shiv: U go hide somewhere.
nodes and goes and sits behind the couch. Gauri opens the door, and
Shaurya comes in running and starts looking around, while Shaurya was
busy looking at the other end of the room, Shiv slowly creeps into
Gauri: I told u Shiv is not here.
Shaurya: Then where did he go???
Gauri: I don't know go and check his room.
Saying that Gauri walks off and Shaurya runs off to Shiv's room.
that, Gauri didn't see Shiv for the rest of the day, but she cudn't
forget the kiss they shared. Every time she forgets it, she wud hear
Shiv's voice or laughter and she remembers what happened. It was dinner
time, and everyone has gathered there for dinner, still Gauri continued
to ignore Shiv. Shiv also never bothered to say anything to Gauri, so
Gauri thought that maybe Shiv wants her to forget what happened, thats
why he didn't try to make any kinda conversation with her.
was watching Gauri's every move. He knew she was trying to ignore him,
and after their kiss it was now that he saw her, and she looked very
nervous. Even he was thinking about their kiss the whole day, and he
was really happy because now he knew that Gauri loved him otherwise she
wudn't have kissed him, and in that kiss he felt her love. He was so
happy, his life is going to be perfect now, with Mom, Shaurya and
Gauri, there wasn't anything more that he wanted from life.
wanted to look at Shiv to see how his mood was. Was he angry with
her?or did he feel anything when they kissed?or worse does he even remember
their kiss??? She looked up at Shiv, and she was shocked to see him
looking at her, Shiv smiled at her, and she also smiled at him and
suddenly he winked at her, and Gauri started blushing and seeing that
Shiv started grinning. Gauri just looks down at her food.
after Gauri put Shaurya to bed she was going to her room. She was
thinking about Shiv, Shiv had come to kiss Shaurya goodnight, then he
had gone to his room, when she had wished him goodnight, he just looked
at her and smiled at her and walked off.
Gauri was not feeling
sleepy, as her mind was clouded with Shiv's thoughts. She has been
lying awake for sometime now, and she started feeling thirsty, so
decided to go drink some water, she goes to the kitchen, and it was
dark, but she didn't want to switch on the light, so she opens the
fridge and was looking for the bottle, suddenly she felt a hand near
her and suddenly the hand pulled her back, and before she could scream
another hand covered her mouth.
Shiv: Shhhhhhh its me.
turned to look at Shiv, (since the fridge door was open, the light was
on them and the rest of the room was dark) and he slowly took his hand
off her mouth.
Gauri: What are u doin? Leave me.
Shiv: No...I won't.
Gauri: Shiv whats wrong with u??Leave
Shiv: No first u tell me what are u doin here? Y r n't u sleeping?
Gauri: Because I was not feeling sleepy. Now leave.
Gauri: Why??? Why what???
Shiv: Why r u not feeling sleepy?
Gauri: I don't know.
Gauri could see that Shiv was smiling now: Liar!!!
Gauri: What??Y r u calling me a liar??
Shiv: U know y u can't sleep..... u were thinking about me thats y u cudn't sleep.
Shiv: I know u were thinking about me!!!
Gauri: I was not!!!
Shiv: u were thinking about our kiss.
Gauri didn't know what to say, as she knew he was ri8.
Gauri: I don't even remember that kiss.
Suddenly Gauri saw a glint in Shiv's eyes and she knew he was up to something.
Shiv: Now I have no other choice other than remind u about our kiss ri8?
was shocked when he said that, before she could say anything Shiv's
mouth was on her mouth and he was kissing her as if his life depended
and Gauri continues to kiss, Shiv starts kissing Gauri on her neck, her
shoulder and all. After sometime Shiv looks into Gauri's eyes and sees
tht she is completely dazed, and gives an arrogant grin. Slowly she
starts coming into her sense, and she realize what she was doing,
suddenly pushes Shiv and starts to run off. And Shiv catches her hand.
Shiv: Hey Gauri.
Gauri: Leave me Shiv.
Shiv pulls her back, and hugs her from behind.
Shiv: Why r u running away from me?
Gauri: Leave me Shiv. Some1 will come.
Shiv starts getting irritated.
Is it necessary to say everything??? Tum meri zindagi mein ek dost ban
kar ayi, lekin tum kab meri zindagi bangayi mujhe patha bhi nahi chala.
I love you Gauri!!!
Gauri suddenly starts blushing and smiling. Shiv
slowly turns Gauri and sees her blushing and smiling in the dim light
and starts smiling.
Shiv: I love u Gauri.
Gauri: I love u too Shiv.
Gauri hugs Shiv.
Shiv: Shaadhi karogi mujhse??
Gauri starts nodding her head.
Shiv hugs her more tightly.
Next day, Ganga is sitting and reading a magazine, suddenly Shiv comes there.
Shiv: Mom, I need to talk to u. Its really urgent.
Ganga closes the book: Yes Shiv, tell me.
Shiv: Mom. don't u think it is high time that I got married? So start looking for a girl.
Shiv: I have decided mom!! I am getting married. And I want to get married very very soon. Hmmmm within a weeks time.
Ganga: What??? R u crazy???Within a week??? And were am I gonna find a girl??
acts as if he is thinking: Hmmmm Actually mom, when we have a girl in
our house, why do we have to look else where?? I will adjust with Gauri.
Ganga suddenly jumps up from her chair.
Ganga: What??Gauri??Our Gauri??
Shiv: Only if u like her!!!
Ganga starts pulling Shiv's ears: So this is what is been happening behind my back?
Shiv starts blushing.
goes to Gauri's room and sees her looking out the window. She goes to
Gauri, and puts her hand on Gauri's head. Gauri turns and looks at her.
Ganga: U have no idea, since when I have been dreaming of this day.
She pulls Gauri close and kisses her on her forehead.
Ganga's eyes starts filling with tears: I am so happy Gauri.
hugs Ganga, and Gauri sees Shiv standing at the door grinning at them,
and he suddenly winks at her and Gauri winks back at him and starts
ShivGauri and Shaurya goes for shopping, Shiv was looking through some stuff. Gauri comes there.
Gauri: Do u like this? (Suddenly) OHMIGOD!!!
kinda gets confused, and starts thinking: What is wrong with her? Why
is she so suprised to see me? Oh God why is she crying?? And she is
smiling at the same time? Why is she coming to me with her arms open?
Is she gonna hug me here? Oh God, she is really gonna hug me here!!! I
think just now only she realized tht I am so hot and sexy!!!Maybe it is
this new shirt!! Shud get couple more with the same color!!! What the
hell????Has she gone blind???? She just ran past me!!!Who the hell is
that Guy???What the hell???Why is he hugging my Gauri???? Why the hell is she hugging him???WTF?!! She is kissing him!!!He is kissing her!!!This is it!!! I am gonna kill him!!!What?? He missed her!!!And She missed him too!!! Even when I was with her??? This is it!!! I am gonna kill her too!!!!Okay great!!Now both r crying!!! What a sissy he is!!!
Shiv starts walking to them.
Shiv thinks: Great!!Now she has become immune to my voice too!!!!
Shiv little more louder: Gauri!!!
The guy looks at Shiv.
Guy: Gauri, I think he is calling u.
Gauri turns and looks at Shiv, and smiles at him.
Gauri: Shiv, this is... this is...
Guy: Who is this Gauri?
Before Gauri cud reply Shiv: Her husband!!!
Gauri: He is Shiv and we r gonna get married...... Shiv, this is Anupam.
Shiv thinks: Oh Anupam!!! They r like brothers and sisters!!! No need to kill him!!!
Part 11-16 on Page 18
Part 17 on Page 19
Part 18 on Page 21
Part 19 on Page 22
Part 20 on Page 24
Part 21 on Page 26
Edited by shivgauri - 04 October 2007 at 8:45am