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Laksh and Manthan
BY MADIHA SHAH
manthan is ruff but deep down has a heart of gold and is in love with sapna but doesnt get along with nakul
laksh is a caring ,sweet and sensitive guy and is in love with kt and is also best friends with manthan
kt is a sweet girl and is in love with laksh
sapna is a sweet and caring girl and loves manthan
nakul is in love with sapna and tries breaking manthan and sapna apart he hates manthan and cant stand him
hey guys im making a ff of manthan and laksha i hope u like it
manthan is walking down da road and laksh is oppisite him and manthan goes to cross the road and sees laksh and gives him a dirty look laksh gives a bright smile to him and manthan says something in his head ( man why is dis lover boy smiling at me ) manthan is walking and suddenly sees a car and is standing in the middle wot da laksh sees and shouts Manthan move !!!!and jumps in the middle and saves manthan ahhhhhhhh umm yaar laksh you saved my life and hugs laksh and soon relised he is huging laksh and lets go and tries to act kool umm yeh thanks for saving my life but it still doesnt mean im ganna be nice to u and if u tell anyone about this about wot dat i gave u a jappi(hug) ur seriously ganna get beats anyways thanks bye and gives laskh a smile and den a dirty look
soon they return home and tulsi enters laksh manthan kitne deer lagayti laksh why are you bleeding manthan looks at laksh umm nothing tulsi dadi i fell down oh okay and manthan why are your clothes dirty umm woh i fell down heheh just like laksh okay go and get changed manthan leaves
laksh goes to meet ba hi ba oh mera kisna wots wrong nothing something must be going on umm ba you no everthing well i dont no its manthan ab kya kiya osne what did he do now ?? nothing laksh tell the whole story to ba and says i dont no when he huged me i felt dat there was another side to him and his not bad i felt like i found my brother but den he just messed everything up later but in some way i no that he wont forget what i did for him aacha you both was hugging are you sure your not in love with him ba !! tum bi na
hi guys tell me if u like it
too be continued
this is part 2 of yeh dosti i hope u like it
manthan is in a club with his friends and after 5 minutes laksh enters manthan isnt that your cousion umm whats his name umm loli no lucky wait umm oh laksh yeh thats it i dont no what your talking about i dont no this boy never seen him in my life soon laksh sees manthan and smiles manthan sees and gives a dirty look laksh comes towards manthan(oh god please tell me his not coming here hi manthan hey yaar i thought you said you didnt know him um um what nonsence laksh says his like my brother were tight man right manthan ?? yeh what ever and thinking in his head man go away his friends start talking to laksh manthan gets bored and starts drinking a lot
manthan here take a orange juice remember what happend last time you drank so much manthan gives a sarcastic smile your not my mum laksh does a sad puppy face okay fine im taking the juice laksh smiles so laksh you must know a lot about manthan yeah i guess you can say that manthan goes to the bathroom so laksh anything embrassing happend with manthan like really funny oh well there was this one time when he was really tried and wasnt botherd to wear any clothes so he was wearing his underwear and didnt relised what he was wearing and walked outside when it was dewali and everybody was outside and lots of guest and everyone started laughing soon he relised he was wearing his underwear and ran and then a sunk came and manthan was stinking puff his friends started laughing ha ha ha dat was funny man yeh now when the aunties see him they call him chadi sab ha ha ha manthan came back whats so funny guys chadi sab what who telled you this laksh ha ha ha laksh sorry man they wanted to know another one of manthans friend came hey man wow look at that girl yeh shes okay wait ill be back im just going to see her im just getting a drink says laksh okay go right ahead the bar is right down there ----> yeh i know chadi sab shut up now !!!
laksh gets a drink and by accident spills it on manthans friend what the hell do you think your doing umm sorry you better be soon laksh sees that manthans friend is being offfensive and abusive to a girl the girl goes to laksh save me please and manthans friend is just about to slap the girl when laksh comes look man leave her alone no not you again i have to teach you a lesson now manthans friend starts hitting laksh den laksh kicks him and manthan friend hit laksh really hard oy manthan look your cousion is getting beated up yes !! i mean yeh soo what should i do go and help him soon manthan cant take it and sees laksh in pain move out of my way and beats up his friend and saves laksh sorry he says to his friend but well you better well just stay away from my brother if you even touch him ill break your hands come laksh thanks manthan its okay come lets go okay are you okay look your bleeding a lot let me see if theres a hospital down here somewhere no its okay no its not okay look your in pain and i cant see you in pain why ??? because i care for you thats way laksh is suprised manthan thinks what the hell did i say awww aww man i love you hey man im not like tha laksh laughs i was just jokin sure you whats wrong cant we be nice to eachothers yeah but i enjoyed making fun of you jokin look we both are like brothers so we should be good to eachothers now give me a japppi what hug man they both hug and soon the whole parivaar comes and sees oh my god are you seeing what im seeing yes laksh and manthan stop hugging um we was just no need to explain its good to see you both like this nukul says i cant bealive your friends with this this idot hey dont talk about my brother like that what im your brother not him you both are and if you say anything bad about manthan not ones ganna be worser then me manthan looks at laksh and smiles ba says laksh are you still sure your not in love with him everyone starts laughing laksh says i do love him beacuse his my brother well just like my brother
hope you liked it
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