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Posted: 31 October 2007 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
the episode ended with another suspense...good...

i prefer a happy ending!! Big smile
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Posted: 31 October 2007 at 7:11pm | IP Logged
Saw ur post at Arase thread and come here...I still has to read 10th episode...busy with school work..so will come back and post my comments and read it Wink
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Posted: 31 October 2007 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
A very gripping episode. I like your idea of the grandfather making decisons about the grandaughter's life just like he did his daughters. A tyrant no doubt. Should be interesting to know what happens when he is oposed by daughter and grandaughter - if they dare!

Your story has good flow - keep going and I would certinly like to see an ending that is totally different that the usual ones. An ending that would be both logic, realistic and one that would make the women proud!(it's my feminist side talking Wink ).

Thanks S.C.

Pat
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Posted: 01 November 2007 at 8:15am | IP Logged
keep going selvi....i want both the endings....
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Posted: 01 November 2007 at 11:14am | IP Logged
great going buddy.
selvifanmsia Senior Member
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Posted: 01 November 2007 at 6:33pm | IP Logged

Thanks for all your kind words. I hope to have the next chapter sometime next week because I will be very busy during the weekend. I have decided to try and work this story out in such a way that we can have BOTH endings (alternate endings, like they sometimes use in Hollywood) as suggested by Jasunap. That way, everyone will be happy Big smile

Also I have decided on the theme song for this serial: (It is a song used in "Arase" serial). I am sure some of you recognize the lyrics and maybe you can help me out to correct any mistakes / fill in the blank (???)

Uyire uyirinanuve undhan idhayam ennai marekadey
Manase en manase ennul pirivennum valaiyay visathey
????? ????? yagume
Yugangal maari pogume
Kannavilum pirivey thangumaa
Kanneerai sogum karaiyumaa
Nambikkai poital, namakkul tsunami
Unmaiyay irunthen, iraiven saatchi
Thavarey poruppai theerpathal theerkathey
Manippai erippai ellerum inikkevey

Uyire uyirinanuve undhan idhayam ennai marekadey
Manase en manase ennul pirivennum valaiyay visathey

* If anyone knows the words in the blank (?????) please let me know! TQ

** The English language theme song I have chosen will have its lyrics posted here soon as well.



Edited by selvifanmsia - 01 November 2007 at 6:37pm
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Posted: 01 December 2007 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
Oh my gosh it has been one month since I updated. Meli drew my attention to this. i was working on the storyline but got entangled so now I have to work it out. Hopefully this week I will post the next part!
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Posted: 03 December 2007 at 7:20am | IP Logged
good. have been waiting patiently for that!!! Big smile

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