A romance to remember!!! (Page 8)

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wonderful chapters, usha. Geetha and Prem are cute pairEmbarrassed what is wrong with Prem? he likes Geetha, but he is hiding something..wonder what that could be Wink

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uh Oh! what happened to Prem...i thought he was ore Jolling Geeta?
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OMG! this is totally unexpected usha! poor geetha.. i know how she must be feeling! i wonder why prem is not accepting her love? is it cos he feels he's not good enough for her?CryCryCry

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Thanks for your comments everyone and a new twist will come within a couple of chapters time with Prem!!!! Meanwhile enjoy the next couple of chapters:

Chapter 17


"Prem, tell me what is the problem? You seemed stressed and you are in a mess especially your hair and shirt is untucked."

"I don't know da, my life is like this." Prem tells

Prakash looks into Prem's eyes, "Listen! I know what my brother is like just tell me?"

"Geeta, what I have done to make you special." Cries Prem

Prakash is shocked, "Geeta! What's going on between you two? I taught you seemed very genuine with each other."

"Really, more like love." Prem signed

Prakash was surprised to hear this, "Did you say love?" he eyes glowed

Prem then explained what happened at the lift. Prakash was shocked and amused with this.  Prakash asks Prem, "Are you in love with Geeta?"

Prem replies, "I don't know. But I can't love her. But I have something for her but I am spilt into two sides."

"You do love Geeta." Prakash smiles

"Please. Don't start again already I am suffering from a dilemma already I don't want anymore." Prem moans

Prakash smiles, "God has created this new girl for you."

"I know, but I have betrayed many girls in life. I don't want to betray another girl." Prem cries

Prakash explains, "You won't betray Geeta because your eyes show you have something for her.! Even you bring her here. Listen you need to speak with her and tell what everything how you feel." Prakash explains

Prem asks, "But how?"

Prakash tells, "Leave it to me! I will be able to do this myself. Come and have some lunch, these markings are giving me a headache."

"Hahahaha!!! You are saying this. Oh my lord! Normally, you enjoy them." Prem laughs

"That's my brother! Now come and eat."


Meanwhile, Geeta is still crying out loud for Prem then Charu runs to her wearing a plain skirt and t-shirt. Charu tells her, "Calm down Geeta! Calm down! Come home."

She takes Geeta inside and gives her a nice cup of cuppa and sits next to her asking, "Now tell me what the problem is?"

Geeta cries, "I had so many problems in life but god has opened my eyes to this new man but he's refusing to love me."

"Which guy?" questions Charu

"It's none other Prem your Prakash's brother." Geeta tells Charu, "But, he's refusing to love me."

"That's good news." Excited Charu, "Prem deserves a man like you since, both of you went through many problems.

Geeta tells the events what happened in the lift and Charu was shocked by this approached and tells her she needs to talk with Prem on her own and I will plan this with Prakash.


Edited by usha_pooja - 02 May 2007 at 1:52pm
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Chapter 18




Prakash knocks at Charu's house and asks her if Geeta could go to his house alone since Prem is waiting to speak with her. Charu tells him, "Actually I wanted to do the same since, you are quick Geeta can go to Prem and solve there problems."


Geeta is called to Prakash's apartment and Prem sits down at the dinning table. Prem questions, "Why do you love me?"

"I told you at the lift." Geeta speaks softly

Prem tells, "I can't love you."

"Why? I have been raped by a college rowdy."

Prem is shocked and asks, "You have been raped but you love me."

Geeta explains the horrific event in a flashback.



Geeta's life wasn't a bed full of roses in fact she faced many problems in her life and had to over come them. Her mother died when she was three when she diagnosed with womb cancer then her father remarried again however, her step mother was jealous with Geeta's love and affection she got from her father. She had tortured Geeta through various ways, throwing hot water at her face, making her clean the house and she will sit on the sofa, even she will burn her with a hot stick to wherever little mistakes she makes. Her father didn't notice this until one day when he read Geeta's diary he was ever so furious and divorced her immediately and took Geeta into a different place. However, Geeta received support from Charu who was her neighbour as she helped her with every problem she faced and even stood up for her. 


Then until the day she turned 18, Geeta father died from a heart attack, she was sent to hostel where she lived the peaceful life until one day whilst she was travelling to college some guys called her horrible names. Then one guy called Arun came to her and touched her several times and attempted to kiss her Geeta couldn't take this until she took her slippers and slap the guy many times and warned him not to even dare touch me. She walks off furious with the whole college academy looking at Arun with embarrassment. He was furious that he was eager to tear her life into pieces. He then observed her every move each time wherever she went and followed her.


Until, one spooky night, the full moon was shining high on the sky, the pavements was glittering with the reflection of the moon and Geeta dressed in a pink sari was walking back after spending the last day at college. Arun followed her behind her back all the way home but, Geeta was too busy singing loudly Vasantha Mullai from the movie Pokkiri. Arun mutters to himself, "You keep on singing and singing and any minute your life will be turned upside down."


Geeta was smiling cheerfully and entered into a hostel room however, before she stepped inside there. She saw the evil guy who harassed her and she ran and ran around the road looking for help however, she failed and the guy grabbed her from the arm and covered her mouth tightly until, she fainted. Her eyes slowly drooled into sleepiness and fainted. He picked her up from the feet and placed her into his posh car and drove her back to his house.


He picked her into his house and then spoke to an unconscious Geeta, "Geeta, that slap you gave me. You think I have forgotten about this. But NO!! I haven't it still hurts inside me and now I want to take my revenge on you. I want to ruin your life and make you a disgrace to the society and to your self."

He unbuttons his shirt and touches her soft, candy floss face and removes her jewellery slowly resulting in messing her hair. Then, he slowly takes everything off and going through her inmate parts. He kisses her non-stop everywhere in the body and wraps himself and her with a white duvet cloth, he hugged her and slept.


Next morning, Geeta woke up to her mystery she has been raped by Arun and finds him smiling, "Good morning dear!"

"You cheat! You traitor! You cheap guy! Is this the way you treat a woman you disgusting pervert." Geeta screams

Arun calmly tells, "You look so gorgeous when you scream."

"Shut up! Arun!" Geeta screams, "You have destroyed my life as my world has tiered into pieces."  

"That's what I wanted to happen Geeta since, my life is destroyed and I wanted your life destroyed." Arun yells

Geeta tells, "Really, let me tell you something, I will finish my education, earn lots of money and then find my self a decent man who will respect woman, understand my feelings and I will live happily with that guy."

"You are challenging me!" Arun sarcastically tells, "That won't happen since all women are always committing suicide."

"I don't think so since, they have become independent and learn how to survive from men like you." Geeta tells and she leaves the house after getting dressed.


Since this horror Geeta succeeds into getting into Kingston University to study biomedical science and becomes pregnant and she aborts the baby since, she is unwilling to carry a rapist baby.


At the present day, Prem is horrified to hear this and tells her, "Geeta I cannot believe you have been through. But I can't fall in love with you since, Im scared I will destroy your life again."

Geeta tells, "But why? I have been raped?"

"No! I have cheated on many women and I don't want to betray you." Prem explains

Geeta tells, "Well, you have changed that's the case. You are not the Prem who will cheat on me."

"Geeta! It's not easy to have a permanent relationship." Prem tells, "But I…"

"Forget it I am not whiling to listen to you since you don't understand the value of true love." Geeta walks off leaving Prem throwing glass bottle onto the floor.




Edited by usha_pooja - 02 May 2007 at 1:54pm
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WOOOW...WHAT A TWIST, Usha. I feel so bad for Geetha Cry , I hope guys like Arun burn in hell Angry
I am sure Prem will love her back Embarrassed
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Hey Usha.....That is wonderful....I never knew you can write this good.( because I never had a chance to read all your writings )Cry...OMG I really wish I had time to read the whole chapters. I browsed here and there into the chapters.....your writing is really good dear. Keep going Usha. Clap Clap Clap

Good job....

Edited by atina - 05 May 2007 at 7:43am
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WOW! great chapters usha!ClapClap poor geeta! she had such a tragic past and now even her future with prem seems hazy. poor girl! she deserves some happiness in her life.CryCryCry

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