A romance to remember!!! (Page 7)

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Thanks Usha, very nice chapter.

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Usha, No updates? Busy with projects? Smile

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Usha, where are u my dear?

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sorry guys been busy with an assignment!! Written halfway of chapter 15.

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Thank you for your lovely comments. I am appreciated with them. Sorry for the delay since i was busy with coursework. Here's my next installment:

Chapter 15

 

Next day, Prem was walking down Oxford Circus after he was done with some fashion shoots for the latest catalogue of Burton's. As he was walking down he wasn't surprised the number of people he finds running around the city like a bunch of football hooligans especially teenagers since, all London transport services are free for under 18. Despite the fact he seemed to be annoyed by this but, there wasn't anything that can be done. 

 

As he was walking down the street he saw Geeta dressed up like an office girl, high knee skirt, white shirt, nice pony tail and with black hoop earings. She was shopping at New look which, has the best selection of clothes especially for ladies. He walked inside the shop and covered her eyes.

 

Geeta was shocked to see if the shop has short circuited and screamed like a school girl. Everyone at the shop were staring at her and Prem whispered to her, "Geeta dear, calm down its only me."

 

"Prem!!!!!" screamed Geeta, "How dare you? Did this to me since you have scared me to bits." Joked Geeta and hits him on the shoulders.

"Chill! Chill! Girl otherwise, you blood pressure is going to rise." He joked around telling her it's a busy city and all the people are looking at you as if an elephant just roared into the city destroying the shops.

"So, what brings you here?" Geeta asked, "I came to shop especially I am a shopping addict."

"Well, I just did some shoots." Prem smiled

Geeta with excitement, "Oh my god! Photo shoot I can't wait to see them soon."

 "You will!" smiled Prem and looked at her from her to toe and he was attracted with her clothing which was extremely feminine.

"Excuse me! Young man. What are you doing?" questioned Geeta

"Err nothing." Prem smiled.

Geeta signed to herself wondering if he has lost some brain cells, "Anyways, you can shop hunt with me and we can both enjoy."

Prem smiled, "Great idea. I can learn how to shop with you."

"Sure, I can teach you how to shop since, you are a model. A model requires a security or even a life partner." Geeta hints

"Life partner. Right!!!" Prem looks sternly at her and thinks to himself, "Is she in love with me?"

The next couple of hours both of them were shopping around in every shop searching for clothes. Geeta found some wonderful clothes for Prem including a pair of blue jeans with shades of white around the jeans, some wonderful shirts since; Geeta found shirts more sensational than t-shirts. She chose every clothes with desire, perfection and even taught carefully as to see wherever these clothes will suit him. Prem was amused with Geeta's choice of clothes as he wouldn't be able to select them at all.

 

Later, at dawn the sun was setting off beautifully; its rays was hitting off the balcony. Geeta was linking onto Prem's hands was carrying a whole of shopping and stopped looking at the beautiful sunset. Geeta smiled, "Isn't this scene beautiful I feel like going to the Caribbean islands and swim in the deep blue seas. You and me" she signed to herself.

Prem smiled, "One day, hopefully whatever you are thinking about will happen soon."

"I hope so!" smiled Geeta

  They step into the lift and as the lift then stopped suddenly.

 

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Edited by usha_pooja - 27 April 2007 at 8:30am

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Thanks Usha, you have stopped in suspense.

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that was a great chapter usha. it was a refreshing change that you focused on prem & geeta instead of prakash & charu. lols!LOLLOL ohhh. the lift stalled? wonder what will happen now...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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thank you for your lovely comments and now i have tried my hand on an emotional chapter. Hope you guys enjoy this emotional chapter. I decided to protray their love in a different way therefore, here's my next installment hopefully you enjoy the chapter:

Chapter 16

 

"What happened Prem?" Geeta screamed

Prem smiles, "The lift has broken down. That means we need to wait until, the lift starts working."

"What! We need to stay in this small space. Heaven Shake! Press the emergency button." Geeta screams and her face turns red

Prem smiles at her scremish behaviour, "Geeta just calm down. This happens regularly. I will press the emergency button once; I ask you something."

Geeta now calm asks, "What is it?"

"Well, actually I don't know how to start this well, you have been acting weird since yesterday and…" Prem begins

"What… common just tell me." Moans Geeta

Prem tells, "Well…"

Geeta slowly comes closer to him; she unbuttons his shirt slowly and kisses his bare chest. Prem is slowly feeling the romance but pushes her away screaming, "GEETA WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!!"

 

However, Geeta pulls closer to him slowly and gives a stormy kiss continuously. Prem tries to pull her away telling her, "Geeta I can't do this."

"Why?" Geeta questions, "Prem I love you."

"Geeta I can't love you." Prem touches her cheeks

"Why?" Geeta nags, "Is there any wrong of falling in love with a nice, tall and smart guy like you."

"Me, I ain't good for you." Prem explains

Geeta shouts, "No! Don't even say this. You are a star. A man who I would fall in love with."

Prem puts his hand over his head, "I can't fall in love with you."

"But why?" Geeta demands

"I can't explain why?" Prem tells Geeta

Geeta throws a question, "Is it wrong to fall in love?"

"Geeta, falling in love isn't wrong but I ain't the suitable husband for you." Prem explains

"No Prem, you are scared of something." Geeta insisted, "How come why then when I came closer to you, allowed me to kiss you and touch your body. Even you touched me as well."

Prem is shocked at her explanation and says, "But… Geeta"

Geeta tells, "What but… you are in love with me."

"This isn't the case." Prem tells

"Prem stop lying I know you do. Even your eyes tell me there's a sign of love." Geeta tells

 Prem tries to explain, "I can't love you."

"But why?" Geeta nags him

"Geeta I can't explain and will you stop nagging me." Prem shouts

Geeta tells, "I don't care, I will make sure you are the one I shall love."

 

Then the lift starts working and they move up to their floor and it opens to their place. Geeta plucks a big kiss but he pushes her away and walks off with disappointment. Geeta comes out of the lift sits down on her knee and cries so loud, "Prem why cant you love me. I never loved someone this much." Her cries were loud even he was looking at her with sympathy and walks off.

 

Prem goes back to his room whilst Prakash is busy marking his second year's semester work and sees Prem in a depressing mood. He comes into his baby blue coloured room which, is filled with various magazines and portfolio nicely piled and organised.

 

"Prem" calls Prakash, "What's the matter? How come you are depressed?"

Prem hears his brother's voice and sobs crying onto Prakash's shoulder for support. Prakash hugs Prem for moral support.

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Edited by usha_pooja - 28 April 2007 at 12:50pm

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