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Posted: 12 April 2007 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Clap gret start well done Clap Clap
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Posted: 12 April 2007 at 3:58am | IP Logged
bhabhi agayi!! lolz
i knew it was kripa!!! loved the ak meeting.. so cutee..(kripaaaa)lolz
cant w ait for laksh and krpia to meet.. bhabhi/devar(i think thats what he would be) kaise milte hain.. llolz

(would eh be devar or sala... im not suree. Confused LOL )

continue soooon
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Posted: 12 April 2007 at 7:04am | IP Logged
awww meri jaaneman!!!!awsome fanfic.....do cont sooon!!!mwahhh


Iqra

after my final exams will get over i will cont kmph frequently!!!!! Big smile
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Posted: 13 April 2007 at 4:35am | IP Logged

Originally posted by deeya123

Fantastic start.waitin for next part Clap

Thanks a lotSmile

Originally posted by memze

laiba u started a new ff wow its awesome and u shouted at me for gettin gu engaged to anagd and separating u from laksh ab tum kya karri ho giving kt to laksh lolz anyways it was a awesome intro andan awesome part and my angads so awesome Tongue but why does he have to love ur princess ab mera kya hoga LOL h ya cont soon

LOL just wait and watch Shaz i'll get you back in this FF for making me engage to Angad in a PROMO just waitAngryLOLthanks for the commentSmile

Originally posted by zeenat_786

this is soo cute..i wonder what relationship kripa and laksh share??? cont. soon anyways!!!!!!!

THanks a lotSmile

Originally posted by nehagupta_9

awesome first part... kool.... so angad already luvs kripa kool

Thanks a lotSmile

Originally posted by unnati72003

gr8 strting

love
unnati

THanks a lotSmile

Originally posted by Anam Ali

Awesome Start Laiba cont soon

Thanks a lotSmile

Originally posted by tava

great part continue soon Clap Clap Clap

Thanks a lotSmile

Originally posted by shiv-gauri4eva

hey!!
great intoduction but whois Kripa's bro?

Thanks a lotSmileJosh is Kripa bro but isn't really a art of this FFSmile

Originally posted by monikaseth

Clap gret start well done Clap Clap

Thanks a lotSmile

Originally posted by brainychild92

bhabhi agayi!! lolz
i knew it was kripa!!! loved the ak meeting.. so cutee..(kripaaaa)lolz
cant w ait for laksh and krpia to meet.. bhabhi/devar(i think thats what he would be) kaise milte hain.. llolz

(would eh be devar or sala... im not suree. Confused LOL )

continue soooon

yeah babhi devar rishtaLOLsala is the girl brotherLOLThanks for the commentSmile

Originally posted by me_iq

awww meri jaaneman!!!!awsome fanfic.....do cont sooon!!!mwahhh


Iqra

after my final exams will get over i will cont kmph frequently!!!!! Big smile

Thanks a lotSmile

LaibaSmile

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Posted: 13 April 2007 at 4:40am | IP Logged


At Lakshya place, Lakshya was watching a movie when they came. Lakshya eyes fell on them, he stood up and Kripa came running to him and hugged him tightly.
K:omg i missed you sooo much.
They apart and they all went in the living then sat in the sofa.
A:so Kripa how is everyone in America?
K:fine, Mum and Dad wanted to come but because of buisness they couldn't
L:and Josh? how is he?
K:he is fine, gone honeymoon
A&L(confused)honeymoon?
K:yeah honeymoon
A:with who?
K:his wife of course
L:he got married?
K:yeah
A&L:when?
K:last month you didn't know?(confused now)
A&L:no we didn't
L:how mean he didn't even tell us
A:yeah (upset)
K:aww i'm so sorry i didn't know he didn't tell you, but don't worry when i'll get married you two will be the first to know it
L(looking at Angad in a teasing way)of course HUM hi to pehle honge kyun Angad?
A(giving him a"I'll kill you"look)yeah
K:cool, btw Lakshya can i make a call
L:sure, akhir yeh bhi to tumhara ghar hai
Kripa left and Angad start hitting playfully Lakshya who was laughing non stop. Meanwhile Kripa was on the phone with her friend looking at Lakshya and Angad from the other room.
T:so kya tumne ussey kaha?
K:Tina, abhi to ayi houn abhi ja kar keh thori sakti houn
T:kiya matlab?
K:matlab yeh stupid, ke meine abhi tak ussey kcuh nahi kaha
T:Kripa, i'm gonna kill you! you promised that you'll tell him the minute after you'll reach India.
K:yeah but when i reached India the first person i met was Angad and i couldn't tell him that i love him if i love Lakshya.
T(laugh)yeah true
K:yeah anywes i'm so tired i'll call you later or maybe tomorow
T:ok take care bye
K:bye
Krips disconnected the phone and went to the boys who stoped laughing when they saw Kripa coming.
A:so Kripa are you hungry?
K:yeah very
L:why not eat out today?
A:great idea, come on lets go
They three were about to go that Lakshya stoped. Angad and Kripa turned to him.
A:kiya houa?
L:i'm so dead, i'm so dead!
K&A(confused)what?
L:today i was supposed to have dinner with KT, god i forgot she's gonna kill me
K(jealous)KT?kaun KT?
A(laughing)Lakshya girlfriend
L:stop laughing you idiot(look at Kripa) Kripa i'm so sorry but i wont be able to come with you but tomorow promise i'll spend the day with you two sorry hope you don't mind
K:no its ok(upset)you go
Lakshya hugged Angad and left. Angad and Kripa then both went in Angads car. Their was a strange silence between them. Kripa broke it.
K:Angad
A:hmm
K: Lakshya KT se pyar karta hai ya phir its just time pass.... i mean....
A:are you kidding?Lakshya love KT like crazy he can do anything for her
K(shocked)what?
Hearing this Angad stopped the car and looked at Kripa who wasn't moving. Slowly tears start falling from her eyes. Angad felt something hurt inside his heart.
A:Kripa?Kripa what happened?
K:Angad...Angad
She hugged him nd start crying, Angad hugged her back and was consolling her hoping that she would stop crying. At a moment, she stoped crying and Kripa let him go
K:i'm sorry
A:its ok, now tell me whats wrong?
K:Angad i...i love...i love Lakshya
Angad was shocked and heart-broken.
Preview: Kripa love Lakshya
LaibaSmile



Edited by a-k-fan17 - 13 April 2007 at 4:43am
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Posted: 13 April 2007 at 5:09am | IP Logged
well let me be the first to comment
its a fabulous fan fic i know all your fan fics are and i am waiting for the others to be continued Wink

keep up the good work liaba Clap
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Posted: 13 April 2007 at 5:57am | IP Logged
Awesome Part Laiba
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Posted: 13 April 2007 at 6:22am | IP Logged

Originally posted by apra

well let me be the first to comment
its a fabulous fan fic i know all your fan fics are and i am waiting for the others to be continued Wink

keep up the good work liaba Clap

Thanks a lot Apra! my others FF will be updated soonSmile

Originally posted by Anam Ali

Awesome Part Laiba

Thanks a lotSmile

 

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