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-Laiba-

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Posted: 11 April 2007 at 8:21am | IP Logged

Hi guys, i'm starting a new fan fiction called:

Characters:

Angad Khanna:

He is 20 years old and is very rich. His parents died when he was kid. He is a rockstar. Lakshya is his best friend and his brother too. He believes in love. He lives in India.

Kripa Sharma:

She is 19 years old and is very rich. She is the jaan of her parents. She wants to be a rockstar. She love her brother a lot and can do anything for him. She believe in love. She lives in America.

Lakshya Virani:

He is 20 years old and is very rich. He is a rockstar and Angad is his best friend. He loves KT a lot and can do anything for her. His parents doesn't care of him so he doesn't live with them. He lives in India.

Krishna Tulsi:

She is 20 years old and is very rich. She loves Lakshya a lot and can do anything for him. Angad is just like a brother to her. She love her parents a lot and can sacrifice everything for their happiness. Lives in India.

So those are the mean characters, the parents and the sibblings wont be really a part of the fanfic.

Hope you'll all like it and will leave lots of comments!

LaibaSmile



Edited by -Laiba- - 26 July 2008 at 10:34am

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Posted: 11 April 2007 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Sounds kool.... cnt wait for u to post the first part!!!!

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Posted: 11 April 2007 at 9:03am | IP Logged

Originally posted by nehagupta_9

Sounds kool.... cnt wait for u to post the first part!!!!

Thanks a lotSmile

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Posted: 11 April 2007 at 10:55am | IP Logged


We see a big white banglow and in it, a big blue room very clean, with lots of pics of a guy.And in the middle, we see a guy sleeping, we could see only his back. His mobile start ringing and annoyed he turned to the other side. his mobile still didnt stop ringing and he had enough so he picked up and sat. We could now see his whole face. It was Angad.
A(angry and shouting)Hello!
Now we see a girl wearing a white jean and baby pink t-shirt laughing with the phone in her hand. We couldn't see her face.
G:hey, itna gussa acha nahi hota
A:(calm down)arey tum kiya baat hai aaj itne subhe humari yaad kaisse a gayi?
G:mister mein sirf yeh pata karna tha ke mein ajj India a rahi houn kiya tum mujhe airport peh lene aoge ke nahi?
A:omg! margaa mein to bhool hi gaya tha
G(laugh)i knew it, anywes tonight at 8pm ok?
A:yeah ok see you tonight bye
K:bye
Angad disconnected the phone and smiled.
A(thinking):finaly she is coming.
He then get up and went to the bathroom, he changed his cloths. After sometime he came ou wearing a blue jean with a tight blact t-shirt. He was looking hot as always. He then left downstair and sat at the table. Soon a servant came and gave Angad breakfast, Angad quickly ate then took his keys and was about to leave but turned to the wall where was Naina and Dilip smilling pic. Angad stared the pic and a tear fell from his eye.
A:i miss you Mum Dad.....
He was feeling like crying but he controled hiself and smiled. He looked at the pic again and left. He came outside and sat in his black sport car and start driving.Soon he reached a big skin colour banglow. He went in and start shouting.
A(shouting)Lakshya
But no answer so he start looking everywhere but no sign of him, suddently he heard someone playing violon he smiled and went toward the room. He opened the door and we could se a guy sitting on the bed,we see his grey eyes then his pink lips and finaly his whole face, it was non other than Lakshya. He stoped playing when he heard Angad. He turned around and went to hug him.
L:hey whats up?
A:whats up ke bache,abhi tak tayar nahi houye jaldi kar rehersals se aaj jaldi chuti leni hai
L:woh kyun?
A:dekha tu phirse bhool gaya
L:kiya?
A(shy)ajj woh a rahi hai
L(teasing way)oh to BABHI a rahi hai
A:Lakshya, she isn't your babhi ok?
L:kyun Angad, bachpan se pyar karte ho ussey lekin ussey aaj tak nhai kaha kyun?
A:kyunke mein nahi janta agar woh mujhse pyar karti hai ke nahi
L:of course karti hai warna America se India kyon ayegi..woh bhi tumse mile?
A:hmm anywes lets go
L:ok
He was about to go but Angad stopped him.
L:abb kya houa?
A:duffer, you are in your night cloths
L(look at himself and smile)solly
He quickly went in the bathroom and changed his cloths. He came out wearing a black pant with white tight t-shirt and they both left.
At night, we see a girl standing at the airport. She was wearing a short white skirt and red turtle neck top. She had her hair open and we couldn't see her face. Angad came running, he start looking everywhere and when his eyes fell on the girl he smiled and run to her then hugged her from the back.
A:Kripaaaaaaa
Now the girl turned around, we could see her light brown eyes then her pink lips and finaly her whole face, it was non other than Kripa.
K(smiled) Hey Angad, so finaly you came
A:yeah, lets go Lakshya is waiting for us
K(smiled big)reallly?god dying to meet him
They both smiled and went outside in Angads car.When they reached Lakshya place, Kripa smiled big and run inside and Angad run after her.
Preview: Kripa and Lakshya meet.

LaibaSmile  



Edited by a-k-fan17 - 13 April 2007 at 4:43am

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Posted: 11 April 2007 at 11:28am | IP Logged
awesome start Clap Clap Clap

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Posted: 11 April 2007 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Awesome start.
liked it.
looking forward to read more.

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Posted: 11 April 2007 at 1:06pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by cupcake

awesome start Clap Clap Clap

Thanks a lotSmile

-Laiba-

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Posted: 11 April 2007 at 1:06pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by ridhijai

Awesome start.
liked it.
looking forward to read more.

Thanks a lotSmile

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