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Posted: 17 years ago
thnx meera di, but i know ur only saying that to make me
feel better!😆ok anyway, here's the next part!

                             Part 5

The next day, Vidya wakes up early to make breakfast. She is wearing this saree



She is making tea when someone comes and tugs her pallu. She turns around to see that it's Bharat.

Bharat:Vidya maami. Vidya maami. Aap mera saat chalo na. Aapko school ka ek project dekhaan hai.
Maine khud banaya.

Vidya:Bharat, hum abhi nashta bana rahe hain na? Toh hum thori der mein ate hain. Theek hai?

Bharat:Ok maami.

He runs off playing with his ball. Vidya smiles at seeing him so playfully. She goes back to
making tea. A couple of minutes later, someone tugs at her pallu again!

Vidya(slowing turning around as she talks):Bharat, humne bola th-

Someone spins her around and pushes her against the wall.

Sagar(puts a finger on her lips to hush her and whispers):Shhhhh. Koi sunlaga toh?

Vidya:Aap? J-ji. Aap kab aya?

Sagar(gives a flirty smile):Isse tumko kya? Aur agar tumko abhi tak pata nahi
chala ho, toh main Bharat nahi hoon.

Vidya(sighs):Aapko kya lakte hai? Ki humhe yeh pata nahi hai? Woh toh aisi bas...

Sagar:Bas kya Vidya? Well anyway, I frankly don't care.

Vidya(confused):Ab aap hatiye na. Humhe nasta banana hai.

Sagar:Toh nashte mein thori der hojagi. Isse mein kya?

Vidya(blushing):Humko nahi pata. Aap bas hatiye.

Sagar:Hai, hai. Kitne jaldi sharma jati ho tum. (At this, Vidya blushes even more)
Theek hai, main tumhe jaana doonga, per ek kiss ke baad.

He leans towards Vidya and right that moment, Sindoora walks in.

Sindoora:Hello? Iss ghar mein koi nau-

She stops talking as she sees Sagar and Vidya. They immediately break apart.

Sindoora:Excuse me. Lekin iss ghar mein kamro ki koi kami hain kya?
Ki tum log yeh saab kahin akela mein karo?

Aniket comes in to scene.

Aniket:Sindoora, ab rehene bhi do na. Naiye naiye shaddi hue hai in donoki.
Ab sab log tumhare jesa toh nahi rahe te na? Ki apne pati se itne dhoor rahein.

Sagar snickers at this comment, while Sindoora gives him a look.

Aniket:Waise mujhe tum dono se hi baat karni thi.(Points to Sagar and Vidya)
Tumhari abhi abhi shaadi hui hai, toh honeymoon ka bhi sochna chaiye? Hai na?

Sagar:Great idea Jiju! Lekin hum jaye kahan?

Aniket:Chinta maat karo Sagar. Maine already do ticket Goa ki liye book kardiye hain.
Ab tum dono jaldi se packing karo, kal subhe ki flight hai.

Sagar:Thanks Jiju.(hugs Aniket and goes to his room)

Vidya blushes.

Vidya:Jijaji, yeh honeymoooon kya hota hai?

Aniket(smiles):Vidya, tum bas socho ki tum aur Sagar kahi bhar ghomna ja rahe hain. Theek hain?

Vidya nods, blushes, and runs off to finish making the tea.

Sindoora:Aniket, tum bhi na.

She scowls and leaves.

Aniket:Sindoora, tum toh ab dekhte jao. Tumne kya socha tha, ki mein aisa hi Sagar aur Vidya ki jodi ko itne asane se tootne doonga?
Kabhi nahi. Maine hi to Tusshar ko dance ka idea diya tha. Ab tum dekhna, main Sagar aur Vidya ko kaise milata hoon!
He has a smile on his face.
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ok that's it for today! sorry it was so short! and no romantic scenes either! sholly, but def. tomorrow i'll have some! but we keep the same routine, no update till 5 replies!
btw, here's Sagar's outfit, i forgot to post it in there!





-Ruchika


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Posted: 17 years ago
Absolutely great update! Hope you continue soon. Can't wait for their honeymoon!!
stargirl345 thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
Originally posted by: kshre25

Absolutely great update! Hope you continue soon. Can't wait for their honeymoon!!



thnx! 😳
congratulations! ur my first commentor! 😆
4 more to go!
cant wait to write about their honeymoon! 😳 😳 😳

-Ruchika
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Posted: 17 years ago
sholly!*double post*

-Ruchika
Edited by stargirl345 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
That was amazing Ruchika! 😳 ooh Sagar's flirty smile huh? 😳
I love that beautiful saree, it's Vidya's color I believe, although she looks pretty in any color, she looks extrememly beautiful in pink! Must say, I'm loving all these fan fictions, please do continue soon, It's so pleasant getting sweet dreams! 😳

Keep smiling..
Love
Soni
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Posted: 17 years ago
Double posting sorry!😳

Keep smiling..
Love
Soni Edited by soni595 - 17 years ago
SRKPC07 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Really nice.......Cant wait for their honeymooooon!! 😆
stargirl345 thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
Originally posted by: soni595

That was amazing Ruchika! 😳 ooh Sagar's flirty smile huh? 😳
I love that beautiful saree, it's Vidya's color I believe, although she looks pretty in any color, she looks extrememly beautiful in pink! Must say, I'm loving all these fan fictions, please do continue soon, It's so pleasant getting sweet dreams! 😳

Keep smiling..
Love
Soni



thnx soni di! 😳 ya, vidya looks pretty in pink. from now on, im gonna post their outfits too, it's fun! 😆
3 more comments to go! 😆

-Ruchika
stargirl345 thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
Originally posted by: sweety_16_usa

Really nice.......Cant wait for their honeymooooon!! 😆



thnx sweety! 😳
ya, i cant wait for the honeymoon either! 😆 😳 😳
2 more comments!
u know, i really think that this drill is working out well! 😆

-Ruchika
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Posted: 17 years ago
great!
can't wait till the next update Ruchika ! 😊