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stargirl345

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Posted: 10 April 2007 at 7:42am | IP Logged
ok, i've decided to write this scene that came across my mind last night. i'm not sure if im going to make it into a ff. it all depends on if u guys like it or not. here we go... Tongue



Vidya, lost in her thoughts was out on the roof, gazing up at the sky. She was a confused gal. She had always wanted sagar to recover, but she never knew that he would become such an arrogant man afterwards.

*~Flashback~*
It was the first night when sagar came home from the hospital after his recovery.
Sagar(gritting his teeth):what the hell are you doing in my room?
Vidya:woh. ji, hum to bas-
Sagar: get...out...
Vidya:ji?
Sagar:i said, GET OUT!

Sagar shoves her out the door.
Vidya, leaves, crying fearfully...

*~End of flashback~*

Tusshar is passing by and sees Vidya crying up on the roof.

Tusshar:vidya, kya hua? tumhare ankhon mein...

Vidya: Tussharji, hum apko kya bataein. jabse yeh theek hogaya, tabse-

Tusshar:Vidya, tum chinta mat karo, sab theek ho jayega. ao, mera saath.

He takes her inside the house. But neither of them knew that Sagar had been watching everything with
a suspiscious glare in his eyes. For some reason, he didn't exactly understand why, but when Tusshar was talking to Vidya, he had
an urge to punch Tusshar, and scream at him.(Jab Dil Miley plays in the background)

Sagar: yeh mujhe kya hogaya hai?

Thunder claps, and Sagar rushes inside...still confused.

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ok, that's all. it's really bad, but it was my first time. plz excuse any mistakes, as i did this really fast.
anyway, plz comment, whether it be good or bad, hopefully good...LOL




-Ruchika




Edited by stargirl345 - 06 May 2007 at 5:06pm

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Posted: 10 April 2007 at 8:21am | IP Logged
wow!! thanks a lot... please do some more scenes..
continue soon..its awesome... Sagar getting jealous LOL Embarrassed

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Posted: 10 April 2007 at 8:48am | IP Logged
thnx yuvika di! Embarrassed

-Ruchika

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Posted: 10 April 2007 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
ok, this is really sad! 53 views, nd only 1 reply(excluding mine)???????? Cry Cry Cry guess i wont turn it into a ff then... Cry
i was so excited b4! Cry


-Ruchika

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Posted: 10 April 2007 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
no no Ruchika!!! Maybe you shud edit the title to tell everyone its a ff!!!!

Anyways on to the actual post!! It was really really good!! I love the jealousy angle specially when it's OUR adorable Sagar!!!

Please continue soon,

Meera Embarrassed Embarrassed

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Posted: 10 April 2007 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Ruchika I like it continue with it...I like the jelousy in Sagar Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

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Posted: 10 April 2007 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
ok, i changed the title, let's see if i get more comments! Tongue

btw, thnx for ur comments meera di nd rushvi di! Big smile

-Ruchika


Edited by stargirl345 - 10 April 2007 at 12:52pm

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Posted: 10 April 2007 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
LOLRuchika it's really very very good . 

Edited by sidbhat - 10 April 2007 at 1:18pm

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