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The sky so blue.... Part 3, pg 4 (Page 4)

Adi''s_GirL IF-Rockerz

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yey! can't wait!! Big smile

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Part 3

"Hey, Big Bro," I said, smiling happily.

It's always so good to see Frank back home, since he & I get along so well. I always miss when he's not around, & especially when mum & dad are home. I sometimes wish that Frank were around more than mum & dad.

"Wassup, 'lil sis?" he asked. I could see he was happy to see me. "Where are Alice & JC?"

"Fighting, as usual. How's dear Tessie?" I asked, fluttering my eyes. Tessie is Frank's girlfriend, & also the most annoying person on this planet. Extremely annoying, yes. She once actually asked me if I played with Barbies. I mean, really. If anyone could say anything more revolting!

"Joy, errr, when did you last go shopping?" He knows how much I hate shopping, he often says I'm the only female species on Earth who does.

"2 months ago," I said defensively.

"And does mum know?"

"Do you think I'd live to talk to you if she knew? She's too busy with her parties to notice, and for once I'm glad."

"I heard you're almost Class President."

"Don't believe a word JC told you."


The world's most boring class has got to be History class. Our History teacher makes the life of Abraham Lincoln sound so boring, its hard not to yawn, even when you don't want to. So me, JC & Alice have now stopped listening to what she says. We talk in class instead. Alice doesn't approve of it, but she can't do much about it either. And anyway, our teacher doesn't notice. I don't think she'd notice even if someone brought a fully grown German Shephard to class.

"Please, Miss Smith, why didn't President Lincoln's parents have enogu money?" asked the most irritating girl in class, Elizabeth.

"Why, why does she always have to ask a question that's completely pointless!?" moaned Alice.

The bell rung, & we were saved from hearing Miss Smith's answer.

"You know what, Joy," said JC, as we ate our food, "you should add something else to your campaign."

"Yeah? What?" asked Alice, "Food fights? I'm sure you'll say something thats completely absurd."

"Actually, I was gonna say better food, but if you don't want the idea, then....."

"Anyone want my cookie?" asked Alice.

"Me!" both me & JC said at the same time.

She neatly broke the cookie in two pieces, & gave a piece each to both me & him.

"I shtill dom ghet why u dom like cookie." said JC, his mouth full of cookie.


Well, thats it for now guys, do comment & review, please.

Adi''s_GirL IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 May 2007 at 12:00am | IP Logged
finally!! hehe... the chapter's waay too short!! i want longer chapters next

i dont think joy is the only one in the female species who doesnt enjoy
shopping... im not a big fan of it myself... hehe

i'd like to know more about her family... her mom seems like a social
butterfly, always busy with parties and all...

i wonder what kind of person her dad is...

i like the relationship she has with her brother... its nice how they seem
to be so close even if her brother doesnt really stay with them

annoying classmates who ask stupid-ish questions... grrrr... Angry Angry Angry

over all, i enjoyed the chapter... do continue soon!

oh and i forgot to mention... joy, alice and JC kinda remind me of lizzie,
miranda and gordo... especially with the three-way calling thing... Wink
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Posted: 21 May 2007 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
yea rashmi said the lizzie miranda gordo thingie...

And the chapter was too good yaar!!!

And surprisingly i didnt find it all that short... ohm i must b really sleepy if i didnt find it too shortLOL

and i can totally get bout boring history teacher.. u knw we had one who would have us all FLAT ON THE TABLE (trust me its true... a friend of mine tuk a pic on his cell wich shwed half the class incl me FLAT) 5 mins into the class... d other gals were eiher too scared or too polite... so it was just me nd the guys who would sleep LOL

nd yea ter is dis pesky gal whu asks such dumb questions in our class too LOLLOLLOL

luv d chap and post another one soon...
ps- i updated mine


Adi''s_GirL IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 May 2007 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
ysh didnt think the chapter was short? u must be sleepy!! go over it again
wen ur not so sleepy and u'll see how short it is LOL
HPmaniac IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 May 2007 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
just read the last 3 parts...luve them.. Clap plllz continue asap. Smile Smile
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Posted: 28 May 2007 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
i saw ur sig n clicked on it, n it came here hehe so cheked out ur story n omg its fab...i like it...plz continue asapBig smile lol
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thnx a lot for d comments, i'll try to contine asap.... but till den, keep commenting, & keep reading Wink Embarrassed

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