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The sky so blue.... Part 3, pg 4 (Page 2)

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Posted: 16 April 2007 at 5:33am | IP Logged

Originally posted by umrao_jaan

Hi Shriya!!!
Glad to see you here!!!
I think I like this story! It kind of reminds me of the rivalry between Mia and Lana in Princess Diaries. And the story line seems really interesting too, specially due to the fact that it focuses on a different theme that usually what we find at Tales Corner. Go on yaar! I'm looking forwards for the next installment!

hey nutz Hug

well, i didnt really think of mia & lana wen i started this, but now that u've said it, it does remind me of the two..... thnx for likin it, btw Smile

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Posted: 16 April 2007 at 5:34am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Super~Star~Sri

great start shriya...
waiting for your next chapter and make the chapter a bit longer.

thnx sriSmile

will try to make the next chapter longer Big smile

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Posted: 25 April 2007 at 11:14am | IP Logged
LOL LOL LOL u promised a longer chapter....

wait a minute...

u promised a chapter... Angry

u rnt gttting out of that honey... Angry Angry

u r gonna post or i will not post Disapprove

and trust me i'll do it...

so u update and i update

or you dont update

and i dont updateDisapprove

choose...

would u lyk blackmail or the entire nagging committeee on ur case LOL ??? LOL LOL LOL

lubooo
and update soon
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Posted: 26 April 2007 at 4:42am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Head of Blackmailing community

LOL LOL LOL u promised a longer chapter....

wait a minute...

u promised a chapter... Angry

u rnt gttting out of that honey... Angry Angry

u r gonna post or i will not post Disapprove

and trust me i'll do it...

so u update and i update

or you dont update

and i dont updateDisapprove

choose...

would u lyk blackmail or the entire nagging committeee on ur case LOL ??? LOL LOL LOL

lubooo
and update soon
-HeartYshHeart-

LOL LOL alright, alright, m updating.. but only on d condition that u will too Wink

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Posted: 26 April 2007 at 5:14am | IP Logged

 

Alright guys, I'm finally updating, Ysh, this also means that you'll hv to update soon too.... otherwise this muderer in making will be a murderer LOL Wink

"Matt Damon is coming to Minneapolis!" Alice shouted over the phone.

"Who? The sweeper?" asked JC.

"JC, shut up! Alice, u sure?"

"Course I am...."

The three of us were having a three-way conversation on the phone, discussing Matt Damon, mine & Alice's crush. JC was only calling him a sweeper to tease us.

"You guys got any plans for the President thingy?" I asked.

"No... none." replied JC.

"That's great news." said Alice, sarcastically.

"Yeah, you know what Alice...."

"Quit fighting, you two! Anyway, I have to go... Frank's home....", I said, keeping the phone down, & sure that the two would fight for half an hour before promising to never talk to each other for the rest of their lives before banging the phone on each other. But they do that practically everyday, so I didn't have to worry about that. Besides, Frank, my brother was back from University for the long weekend.

Alright guys, this is just part 2A.... what I mean is, it isn't complete, but mum's yelling, & I really have to go do my homework. So will edit this asap.... tonight, in fact Big smile

Enjoy readingSmile

 



Edited by shriyaroxxx - 26 April 2007 at 5:15am
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Posted: 27 April 2007 at 4:09am | IP Logged
finally!!!!!!!!!!!! Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
that was a nice nice lovely brilliant chapter LOL bt too shrt Cry but its gona b longer lyk u sed so im Big smile
and Alice and JC were cute... JC totally reminds me of a friend of mine who woiuld kip irritating us by calling SRK a grandpa Angry
bt gr8 going!!!!!!! Clap Clap Clap
of course tis means i hv to update...
but yea it also depends on Tanu remember... as her to update her fanfic Wink

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Posted: 02 May 2007 at 3:38am | IP Logged
awww i luv it shri Hug characters seem real nice LOL cant wait to c what happens next update soon Wink

Originally posted by Ysh

JC totally reminds me of a friend of mine who woiuld kip irritating us by calling SRK a grandpa Angry


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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 1:00am | IP Logged
Awesome! Can't wait to read more.

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