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desi chic

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desi chic

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Posted: 04 April 2007 at 11:02am | IP Logged

Hi all, I suppose I'm new here. This is the first time I'm posting some lines in this forum, hope I don't make a fool of myself!LOL Thanks to Taniaji for the invitation!

 

Jeevan ke dariyan main chale teh jawab dhoondhne,

Aa kar kinaare par, lehron ko chodhne.

 

Ye kaunse dagar hai jispe larkhara rahe hai kadam,

Milna saath pheron se, toh par kyun chotah par raha hai ye janam.

 

Kaanch ke jaise bikhre huay hai rang,

Saath reh kar bhi hai doori sung.

 

Dhundhla hua sa hai karam ka roop,

Jal rahe hain hum, kaisi hai ye dhoop.

 

Jab dekha sheeshe mein khud ko rhootah,

Jawab toh kya, ayeena bhi sawal banke toota.

 

Cheers,

dc

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amisra

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Posted: 04 April 2007 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Wah wah...AWESOME DC!! Excellent poem! Clap Clap Clap

Btw, welcome to the forum!! Clap

Cheers,

Anjali

desi chic

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Posted: 04 April 2007 at 11:17am | IP Logged

Originally posted by amisra

Wah wah...AWESOME DC!! Excellent poem! Clap Clap Clap

Btw, welcome to the forum!! Clap

Cheers,

Anjali

Shukriya jaanemanWink

And thanks for the welcome!Tongue

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 04 April 2007 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
very nice Clap Clap Clap

desi chic

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Posted: 04 April 2007 at 1:47pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by guru12

very nice Clap Clap Clap

thankuTongue 

Cheers,

dc

Reema_J

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Posted: 04 April 2007 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
That was VERY well written! Clap

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