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Early Morning Treats(4 SOS contest)

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Posted: 04 April 2007 at 1:38am | IP Logged

Hi,

I wrote this for SOS contest. It was entry no. 24. But since the voting and declaration of winners is done, i thought why not post it here and get your reviews on it.

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Early Morning Treats

Sunrays disquiet your sweet slumber,

As you twist in bed, coiled in bedspread.

Your arms settle on my body

Perhaps, they were searching for me.

Wrinkling your nose, you turn to face me

Our cheeks caress, ever so gently.

Your stubble tickles me ample

As your eyes open with a twinkle.

You say, "Nice sunshine we got there

But it broke my dream - how unfair!"

I say, "Honey, just lounge between the sheets

Close your eyes and go to sleep."

You fall asleep and your face reflects peace.

And what do I get in lieu? –

Being able to endlessly gaze at you,

And enjoy my early morning treats!

(5 Feb 2007)

 



Edited by datspreets - 04 April 2007 at 1:39am

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Posted: 04 April 2007 at 1:47am | IP Logged
Awww...this is soo cute. Embarrassed It's AWESOME Preets...thanks for sharing!! Clap

Cheers,

Anjali
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Posted: 04 April 2007 at 1:49am | IP Logged
awesome preets keep them coming dear Clap
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