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Lyrics i wrote and the mp3 of the lyric.

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Hi guys,

for those of you who were not on .in must've have read the lyric which i had written.So i'm posting it here, one more.

Baby, How much longer do I wait?

-Preeti Datar

 

Ice cream is crying a stream

The bed's fallen asleep

Roses are wilting-dead

Rust is creeping up the Iron Gate.

 

CHORUS-

Baby, how much longer do I wait?

(I'm bored of having you in dreams,

You know, everyone has their needs.)  

 

{Background-

Coffee is getting cold

But I'm warm enough to hold. }

 

CHORUS-

Baby, how much longer do I wait?

(My skin will forget your touch

If you test my patience so much.)  

 

Sun is forgetting to shine

Faltering is the commitment of mine.

Even wine has got a funny taste

Youth is transient, what a waste!

 

CHORUS-

Baby, how much longer do I wait?

(I'm bored of having you in dreams,

You know, everyone has their needs.)  

 

{Background-

Coffee is getting cold,

But I'm warm enough to hold.}

 

CHORUS-

Baby, how much longer do I wait?

(My skin will forget your touch

If you test my patience so much.)  

 

A distance from you I'll create

Our equation it will equate.

Picture your face it'll be frustrate, And

You'll run right to me, and say-

'Baby, how much longer do I wait? '

 

Umm…maybe until the coffee is…(fades)  

 

(14 December 2006)

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One of my orkut pal made the music for this lyric^ and recorded the song in his own voice. Here you can hear the mp3-

direct link - http://www.badongo.com/file/2649502

clickable link - http://www.badongo.com/file/2649502

If the links don't work. PM me.Smile

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Hope you guys like it :)

Preeti

Do Leave your reviews :). they'll be much appreciated!

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Posted: 03 April 2007 at 3:50am | IP Logged
WOW...AWESOME yaar Preets! Really very nice!! Clap Clap Clap

Cheers,

Anjali
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Posted: 03 April 2007 at 8:26am | IP Logged
anjali, did you hear the mp3 also, it sounds even better!
thanks for your comment, as always :)
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Posted: 03 April 2007 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Preeets, I did download the mp3. I agree...it's even better! Clap I've been listening to it ever since!! Embarrassed

Cheers,

Anjali
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Posted: 03 April 2007 at 11:01am | IP Logged
nice Preets...did Rav record the song or someone else?
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Posted: 03 April 2007 at 8:25pm | IP Logged
Not Ravu, one of my orkut pals. his name is Arshaj, he writes poems too, that's how I got to know him. Smile
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Posted: 04 April 2007 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by datspreets

Not Ravu, one of my orkut pals. his name is Arshaj, he writes poems too, that's how I got to know him. Smile
ohh ok...I don't know y for some reason I thought it was RavLOL
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^ cause the guy had accent? lol Wink

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