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freakandnut57

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Posted: 02 April 2007 at 11:47am | IP Logged
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"Utho...."

"ummmmm...."

"Get up! Its 8.30.."

"Noooo....."

"UP!!....common up, Naina!"

"10 minutes....pleeeeese......", Naina's hand went up in the air!

"Had karti ho...."

"mmmmm........."

"Nahin manogi?"

"hmmmm.......kya yaar.....Hitler....."

"Pakka? Am asking you for the last time...."

"Nope!!!!", and she snuggled deeper into her soft bedding like a kid!

She sleeps for 5 more minutes....peacefully.....

 

....and then......


"SPLASH!!"


Almost half a bucket of ice-cold water is splashed on her head......

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA....................."

She gets suffocated....her bedding...cloths.....body.....hair.....eerythng drenched in water.....

.....did she feel like it, or someone had purposely turned the AC on "chilled" mode!.....brrrr....it was cold...she was angry......annoyed....irritated....sleepy.....and now.....cold!!

"HA...HA....HA....HA...."

..........when she heard loud sound of laughter....

"RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAJ..........tum hamesha...........kyu .....ruko....ruko.....chodungi nahi.....", and she ran behind the charming tall fellow, who ran from the bedroom....in fits of laughter!!

 

"HA...HA HA.....", he couldn't control his laughter.....he laughed again and again.....looking at red-and-annoyed Naina.

Finally she caught hold of him in the passage....and started beating him!

"Arre....arre....arre....biwi....arre[she was continuously beating him].....OUCH!"

He stumbled and fell on the sofa in the hall....frightened, if she had hurt him too hard....naina stooped...at him...

"Kya....kya hua...."

He pressed his eyes close....and acted as if in severe pain....Naina gt restless....she was fidgiting....worried.....

"Kya....yeh maine hi....ek strong si captain banai....aur ye to dushman ki jagah....mujhpar meri hi saari tricks....Ouch!"

"Achha, Major kahan lagi....zara mujhe bhi to pata chale...ki Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ko kahan maarne pe itna dukhta hai...."

....both of their heads turned towards the doorway....


Edited by jivora - 03 August 2007 at 12:10am

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Posted: 02 April 2007 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Hey Friends,

This is a completely different and new fic I have started. I thought that we always show how sad the parting od Rajveer and Naina is....or how the meet after years....why are we so sure about their at the moment failing love? so....i thought why not show them married....right from the beginning?

So tel me how do you like it. We fic-writers loooove readers comments.....

Tell me if its gross, boring, usual, substandard, ok, ho-hum, good, ordinary, better, or wowie!!!!!

Cheers,
JIV

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Posted: 02 April 2007 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
gr8 start Clap ...cont soon

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Posted: 02 April 2007 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cnt wait to read more of this ff!!!!

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Posted: 02 April 2007 at 6:46pm | IP Logged
fabulous start! Clap Clap Clap ...yay raj and naina already married Big smile

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Posted: 02 April 2007 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
great agian


good job it is fabulous

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Posted: 03 April 2007 at 1:18am | IP Logged
awsome plz..do continue.. Clap

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very nice jiv please continue Wink

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