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Oblivion

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Joined: 21 February 2007

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Posted: 31 March 2007 at 12:20pm | IP Logged

Hey guyz,. this was my first poem .. that was a few months ago...

Jitne lamhe is zindagi ne khushi ke dekhe hai
usme aap shaamil to ho lekin
jitna intezar baad main diya hai aapne
usme sirf meri tanhaiye ne saath diya

woh har pal aapki yaad main khojana
bada hi rangeen nasha tha lekin
jitne gham baad main diya hain aapne
usme sirf mere aansoo ne saath diya

Milgaya tha humsafar mujhey
umeed thi saath nibhane ki lekin
jin andheron main saath choda tha aapne
usmey sirf meri bebasi ne saath diya

Woh apke pyar main ji lena
lagta tha yehi zindagi hai lekin
jo bewafaii baad main di hai aapne
usmey sirf meri maut ney saath diya

Edited by Oblivion - 31 March 2007 at 12:21pm

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amisra

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Posted: 31 March 2007 at 2:14pm | IP Logged

Excellent yaar...really very nice Oblivion!! Clap

Cheers,

Anjali

guru12

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Joined: 10 February 2007

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Posted: 31 March 2007 at 5:17pm | IP Logged

very niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee Clap

sweethoney06

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Posted: 31 March 2007 at 7:11pm | IP Logged

very very good!! Clap

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