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Oblivion Newbie
Oblivion
Oblivion

Joined: 21 February 2007
Posts: 34

Posted: 31 March 2007 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Hey guyz,. this was my first poem .. that was a few months ago...



 Jitne lamhe is zindagi ne khushi ke dekhe hai
usme aap shaamil to ho lekin
jitna intezar baad main diya hai aapne
usme sirf meri tanhaiye ne saath diya

woh har pal aapki yaad main khojana
bada hi rangeen nasha tha lekin
jitne gham baad main diya hain aapne
usme sirf mere aansoo ne saath diya

Milgaya tha humsafar mujhey
umeed thi saath nibhane ki lekin
jin andheron main saath choda tha aapne
usmey sirf meri bebasi ne saath diya

Woh apke pyar main ji lena
lagta tha yehi zindagi hai lekin
jo bewafaii baad main di hai aapne
usmey sirf meri maut ney saath diya    

Edited by Oblivion - 31 March 2007 at 12:21pm

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amisra IF-Dazzler
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Joined: 12 July 2006
Posts: 3011

Posted: 31 March 2007 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
Excellent yaar...really very nice Oblivion!! Clap Clap Clap

Cheers,

Anjali
guru12 Senior Member
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Joined: 10 February 2007
Posts: 900

Posted: 31 March 2007 at 5:17pm | IP Logged
very niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee Clap
sweethoney06 IF-Rockerz
sweethoney06
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Joined: 03 December 2005
Posts: 5195

Posted: 31 March 2007 at 7:11pm | IP Logged
very very good!! Clap
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