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ayeshacassim

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Posted: 30 March 2007 at 2:13am | IP Logged

Hi guys. i have started this new fan fic on the rajveer-naina romance in LRL. hope you like it!

Part 1:

BAM! there was a gunshot in the tunnel. Rajs heart almost stopped beating. He had not shot and no one had shot him. So either Ritu had shot naina or naina had shot ritu or they wanted 2 shoot him but had missed their aim. If ritu was shot or their aim had missed it was okay..... but if naina had been shot....... he would die. the truck came out of the tunnel only to reveal Ritu lying on the ground with blood all over her chest, and quite dead. he turned and saw nainas gun pointing at her. He had surely not expected this. "naina...." he said softly. she turned and aied the gun at him, a blazing look on her face. h eput his hands up. "naina plz let me explain...." he started. but she interrupted him. "aap ne yeh soch bhi kaise liya ki.... ki.... mein aapko maaroongi? how did you ever think that i will kill you?" she asked angrily, pressing the gun at his chest. What was going on? raj could not understand anything..... he had not expected this. ever. "yaani ki tum mukhse naaraz nahin ho?"
Niana- aap ne toh m,ere bhaiya ke liya itna bada kaam kiya.... aap toh unhe maarna nahin chaahete the. lekin unki khushi ke liye unhe hi..... aap ne toh yeh sab unke liye kiya tha. unse retrial ka dard nahin saha jaata. anyway woh log unhe maar hi dete. Aap ne jo kuch bhi kiya, majburi mein kiya. aap ka irada bura nahin tha.asli gunhegaar to yes Ritu thi. aap ne toh har mod par meri madad ki, mujhe sahara diya, mujhe bachaya....aur kya mein aapko itni stupid lagti hoon ki aap hi koh maar doongi?"
Raj- yaani tum gussa nahin ho mujhse?
Naina- gussa nahin thi.... magar ab aapko jaan se maarne ka dil kar raha hai.
she pulled the trigger and aimed it at him, but he smiled and pulled out the gun from her hand and threw it on the floor. for a moment they just stood looking at each other. and then they were in each others arms. naina was sobbing and raj was consoling her. such a long passionate hug.... they wished they never had to depart....



Edited by ayeshacassim - 27 June 2007 at 4:46am

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Posted: 30 March 2007 at 2:29am | IP Logged
hey ayesha it was very nice .i really liked it .continue soon

ayeshacassim

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Posted: 30 March 2007 at 2:31am | IP Logged

Originally posted by ROSHNI88

hey ayesha it was very nice .i really liked it .continue soon

Thanx a lot!Smile

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Posted: 30 March 2007 at 2:51am | IP Logged
hey Ayesha Tongue

very good yaar Smile

continue thenext soon Clap Clap Clap

mahek-e-gulab

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Posted: 30 March 2007 at 2:56am | IP Logged
hey ayesha...

ab main kya kahu tarif me shabd kam pad gaye hai aur raj-naina ki hug ki baat sunkar to main blush karti nahi thak rahi Embarrassed

overall gr888888 n awessssome Clap

sanyamalhotra

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Posted: 30 March 2007 at 4:24am | IP Logged
THis is intresting...continue soon Ayesha!!

ayeshacassim

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Posted: 30 March 2007 at 4:43am | IP Logged

Originally posted by yoginisahakari

hey Ayesha Tongue

very good yaar Smile

continue thenext soon Clap Clap Clap

Thanx a million 4 d encouragement!

ayeshacassim

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Posted: 30 March 2007 at 4:44am | IP Logged

Originally posted by mahek-e-gulab

hey ayesha...

ab main kya kahu tarif me shabd kam pad gaye hai aur raj-naina ki hug ki baat sunkar to main blush karti nahi thak rahi Embarrassed

overall gr888888 n awessssome Clap

i am so glad you liked it! thanx a lot!

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