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this is a fan fic of the marauders,written by me-zuman(sarah_23) and zoya(zoya24) the story isnt completed, plzz review....

  

 

MARAUDERZ

IN HISTORY OF MAGIC CLASSES……

'Psst, moony I'm bored…..' Sirius whispered to Remus.

 'Sssh, pay attention Padfoot'. Remus whisperd back.

'But this is boo-o-ring; Binns classes can put coffee to sleep'.

'But I have to take down notes, because if I don't, you three can't study for exams since you are not writing down your notes'.

Sirius simply grunted. Then he wrote something on his parchment, crushed it and threw it on James head. But James dint seem to realize, he was too busy staring at a pretty green-eyed girl, who seemed to be taking notes furiously. Sirius scowled, and then he slowly took his wand out, muttered something out of his breath and James chair broke and the next moment he was on the ground with ink all over his robes. It came like a shock to James, he turned back scowling at Sirius, then suddenly professor binns turned and asked 'Any problem Mr. Potter?' 'Nope sir, my chair broke itself' James said carelessly. The pretty green-eyed girl giggled and Remus rolled his eyes. 'Ooof at least Evans laughed because of me' James said. She made a face at him. For the next 15 mins Professor Binn's droned on about the wars of the goblins.

After the classes, they went to the lake, it was a sunny day and everyone was sitting outside, talking to their friends, and the pretty girls sat near the lake, cooling their feet, whom James was continuously staring. 'Hey prongs, let do something fun' Sirius said, 'lets sneak into the kitchen'.  'Hello? You'll just had blueberry muffins in binns classes' Remus said. 'Yes but Binn's boring lecture on the wars of the gargoyles has made me hungry again." 'Goblins' Remus corrected. 'Goblins, gargoyles how do you actually differentiate them Moony, they all are ugly bullies'. Wormtail giggled stupidly. But something else caught, Sirius's attention, 'Hey Prongs, look whose coming' Sirius said with a sly smile.  'Oh hello Snivellus' Prongs said.  'Get lost' said a greasy haired, tall guy. 'Where are your manners, grease-ball?' Sirius asked. 'Drown yourself Black'. Snape shot back. 'Unlike you, snivie I am talented and I know to swim'. Sirius said. 'Since you're such a talented swimmer why don't you live with the giant squid, you guys will get along well, I bet'. Snape said. Now everyone gathered with enthusiasm to see them fight as usual. ' Hey snivie, I always wanted to tell you, no offence all right, there's a new shampoo at 'COSMO CRAZE' for greasy haired guys, only 2 galleon and 5 knuts, I'll pay em for you, if you want, you see my rivals also should be at least a little good-looking ' James said.

Just then the bell rang and everyone had to hurry to the great hall for lunch.Snape made a face at him and walked off, as he did Sirius said 'Hey snivie, dont hog off all the food, even we need to be fed'.  Snape turned back, and was about to jinx sirius, But james already jinxed snape, with a lazy flick of his wand. Snape laid stunned for another 15 mins.

'Good one, Prongs'. Sirius said.

'Tell me something I dunno, all that has made me hungry'. James said.

'Hey anyways, Moony, did you complete your 15 inches essay on Dementors?'

'Yeah, but I think you have some problems'. Lupin said.

'What's that?' Sirius asked.

'Am not giving it to you Padfoot'. Remus said.

'Yeah, all right, I'll just sneak it my self, no problem'. Sirius said.

continued here:

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Edited by sarah_23 - 11 May 2007 at 3:13am

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Posted: 29 March 2007 at 7:56am | IP Logged
how is it guys?????? why dont u reply? i mean we cant be that bad Tongue Ouch

Edited by sarah_23 - 29 March 2007 at 8:02am
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Sorry, But be patient next time.
And the story was great!
-Aastha
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Posted: 29 March 2007 at 8:34am | IP Logged
its really good sarah & zoya Smile
& anyway its about the maurauders, so it can never be bad Wink
but great work Clap
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Posted: 29 March 2007 at 9:42am | IP Logged

Originally posted by nitin_dave

Sorry, But be patient next time.
And the story was great!
-Aastha

thnx a lot....

Originally posted by shriyaroxxx

its really good sarah & zoya Smile
& anyway its about the maurauders, so it can never be bad Wink
but great work Clap

yes,anything about the marauders can never be bad...and thnx a lot.Smile



Edited by sarah_23 - 29 March 2007 at 9:43am
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its grt..very nice Tongue
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good one...pls continue
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Originally posted by hazelgirl

its grt..very nice Tongue

thnx..Smile

Originally posted by indira3

good one...pls continue

thank you....Smile

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