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*Kyon kiya*P10 new part : shopping (Page 7)

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tankoooooo
dat part's good
hope to see sneha and manthan together soon
loooooooooooooool

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hadnt read it in a while.. read them all togehter.. it is getting interesting.. please continue soon.. good job!!
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Awesome Part
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wow its realy good plz continue
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Kyon kiya

 

Next day

Sneha : yeh laloo kab a raha hai

Piya : laloo ?

Sneha : haan voh mera notanki pati

Piya : uff…vaise yaar 15 minute hon gahai hai hana chayen

Raj house

Manthan : ZzZzzzZZ

Raj enter the room fiting his shirt bouton

Raj : i am ready manthan chal…

See manthan sleeping

Raj : manthaaaaan u r not ready

Manthan still sleeping : yeah yeah

Raj : get up we have to go

Manthan : yah..mm…tomorow

Raj :Tomorow ?

He goes near manthan and kick him (haha)

Raj : get up lazyyy boyyyy

Manthan : haaaa …ouch

Raj : ouch ke bache tayar ho humain aj tumari hone wali patni se milna hai

Manthan : NAUTANKI patni not for real

Sometimes later

Manthan and raj leave the house

Piya and Sneha side

A kid s ball fall on the               of a dhaba

Sneha look at the kid

Sneha : he is so cute

Kid : uncle uncle kiya aph mera ball upar se nikal sakte hai

Man : chal chal mere pass time nahin hai khana dene ka hai mujhe sabko

Sneha his a litle angry , kid had a tear

Sneha : bara kharoos bandha hai

Sneha goes near litle boy and smile at him

Sneha :i will get it

She take a chair of the dhaba and give the man an angry look

She put another think on the chair so she can get the ball she   on the chair

Meanwhile on the other side manthan is coming with is friend toward priya : manthan didn't see sneha

Sneha trow the ball down for the boy and then she want to get down but instance o that she fall

Manthan : this place is so

Snaha : haaaa

Manthan catch her , he look at her , her eyes were close , her hair come on her face than fell behind , she looked innocent, so beautyful , manthan can't take his eyes off of her ,

Sneha : am i alive

 than she open her eyes ,first eyes slowly than the second quicly, they look into each other eyes but then

Sneha : heyyy live me

Manthan : … (still looking at her)

Sneha : UH ???hey u mister (clck her finger in front of him) leave me

Manthan : are u sure

Sneha role her eyes : yes dufer , i don't want to stay here all my life

Manthan : ok , don't blame me then

He leave her and she fall on the ground

Sneha : ouchhh…dufer

Manthan : i said don't blame …and yeah don't u dare to call me dufer again , u bhootni

Sneha : arggggg

Manthan : hooooo bhootni will atack me

Piya and raj come

Piya : i see that u meet

Sneha and manthan : hu ?

Raj : your are staying together

Sneha and manthan : what with HIM/HER

Piya : yes(cute face)

Sneha and Manthan give eachother a look

Piya : vaise lag rahai ho couple ke tara , you look so cute together

Manthan n Sneha : ewwww

Raj : anyway put it to her

Showing him a mangalsutra

Manthan : what i am not going to put her that

Sneha : like i want to wear it from you

Raj : main hi pena detha hoon

Come near sneha

Sneha : heeeyyyy hooo i can wear it myself

Raj : ho yeah hihi

Sneha :hihi (imiting him)

She put it

Piya : so mmmm raj you will drop them to their house , i have to go ,i have some work

Raj : ok , so new wed couple come

Manthan and Sneha : we are nOT MARRIED

Manthan and sneha look at eachother and give a angry look

Piya gigle and mugling : parfect couple

Snaha : kuch kaha

Piya : hu ??me nono

Raj : ok lets go will drop you

Piya : by manthan by raj

Raj : by (smile)

Manthan : yeah by (annoyed)

Piya to sneha : ur hubby is hot

Sneha : ewwww he is a monckey

Piya : anyway by

Piya hug sneha

Piya : have a good suhagraat

Sneha : PIYAAAAAA

Piya run away

Manthan : hey miss ider rene ka iradha hai kiya

Piya : na , tum ider kabse khare huwe ho ,chalo chalo time nahin hai

Sneha live

Manthan : HU ??ajeeb ladki hai

 



Edited by aisha1 - 15 May 2007 at 11:57am
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thanks that part was really good!!! Tongue
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awesome part Clap
continue soon please

Edited by amrita93 - 19 May 2007 at 11:01am
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i luv ut ff plz continue! Embarrassed

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