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*Kyon kiya*P10 new part : shopping (Page 7)

aisha1 Goldie

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Kyon Kiya


Manthan , in the office to get his job

Boss : you have all the qualification , but someone else come for this job and he had more experience and he come before so i give him.

Manthan : Sir , i promise if take me in this office ,you will not regret … blabla

Boss look at him with serious look

Boss : i like your confidence , and know i have the feeling that you will do big thing , mmmm…i have another job its not as good as the first one but…

Manthan : what is it ???

Boss : We have a Newspaper u know Daily Mumbai

Manthan : yes

Boss : so you can take picture for the rubric and help for the article do publicity for our industry , you will work with someone , secretair

Manthan : ok mm..i accept (he need job)

Boss : good , Tum Wednesday shuru karoge

Manthan : ok thanks sir

Night in gangas party

She do the same speech she have done in Kyunki

Tripti smile evily and look at nakul who smile back

Ganga come near nakul

Nakul : thanks mam , its a pleasure , to work in this project you have done a lot for me

Ganga : i have done nothing , tumare apni gamiabhi tumain yahan tak lahi hai , ho ek minute main abhi ahi


She leave and tripti come near nakul

Tripti : kitni bewakoof hai yeh ganga , sochti hai aisa karke voh tumain pyar jagahai ghi , tumain yeh job dkhar tum usse kareeb hoge , lekin usko yeh nahin pata hai ki yeh karke voh apni barbadi khud kar rahi hai

Nakul : haan mom , sochti hai aisa karke vo mujhe aseel kar sakti hai or wapas SN main a sake ghi , lekin usko kiya pata ki…

Tripti : voh apne ghar main bhi nahin re pahai ghi

Lakshaya heard everything from behind and his shocked

Later in the party

Tripti : so ganga , you think ke yeh karke tum mujhse nakul chin logi , kabhi nahin , voh abhi bhi mujhe ma ketha hai ot tumain mam , poor lady apna hi beta apni ma ko mam ketha hai , how sad , haha , voh tumare pass kabhi nahin ahaiga or voh yeh kaam tumare liya nahin kar raha

Ganga : mujhe pata hai tumare liya kar raha , tumare khene se

Tripti : tum…

Ganga : mujhe pata hai ki tum pouti property chaati ho , nakul yeh saab kar raha hai property ke liyai , vaise bhi mujhe khushi hogi ke voh yeh saab llele akhir uski or laksh ki hi to hai  , aghar usko yeh karne main khushi milti hai to thik hai , meri khushi uski khushi main , main apne bete ko kush dekhna chaati hoon , or voh chin nahin raha , vo uska haq hai , mujhe afsos hai ki nakul mujhe ma nahin kheta lekin mujhe ziada tumpar taras atha hai tripti kyonki voh tumain ma to kheta hai lekin tum uski ma khabhi nahin ban pahi

Ganga glare at tripti then go

We see a shocked nakul yes he heard everything , tripti is fuming , and laksh come near nakul

Laksh : bahi , jisko ap mom khete ho , voh kabhi ma nahin ban pahi , apni hi khushi ke liyai sabkuch kar sakti hai , lekin jo ma hai apne kabhi uske hi pyaar ko tukhraya , jo apko sabkuch dene ko tayar hai uske badle main kuch nahin sirf ek choti si cheez chayen apse jo uski liye sab kuch hai , ke ap unko ma khe kar pukariyai

Laksh put his hand on nakul shoulder

Laksh : bahi apke ar fesle par main apke saath hoon

Than he leave , nakul had a tear


Edited by aisha1 - 09 May 2007 at 5:41am

tsamhita IF-Dazzler

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dat part's good
hope to see sneha and manthan together soon
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Posted: 09 May 2007 at 10:52am | IP Logged
hadnt read it in a while.. read them all togehter.. it is getting interesting.. please continue soon.. good job!!
Supernatural_10 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 10 May 2007 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Awesome Part
babygirl Senior Member

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Posted: 10 May 2007 at 10:47am | IP Logged
wow its realy good plz continue
aisha1 Goldie

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Kyon kiya


Next day

Sneha : yeh laloo kab a raha hai

Piya : laloo ?

Sneha : haan voh mera notanki pati

Piya : uff…vaise yaar 15 minute hon gahai hai hana chayen

Raj house

Manthan : ZzZzzzZZ

Raj enter the room fiting his shirt bouton

Raj : i am ready manthan chal…

See manthan sleeping

Raj : manthaaaaan u r not ready

Manthan still sleeping : yeah yeah

Raj : get up we have to go

Manthan :…tomorow

Raj :Tomorow ?

He goes near manthan and kick him (haha)

Raj : get up lazyyy boyyyy

Manthan : haaaa …ouch

Raj : ouch ke bache tayar ho humain aj tumari hone wali patni se milna hai

Manthan : NAUTANKI patni not for real

Sometimes later

Manthan and raj leave the house

Piya and Sneha side

A kid s ball fall on the               of a dhaba

Sneha look at the kid

Sneha : he is so cute

Kid : uncle uncle kiya aph mera ball upar se nikal sakte hai

Man : chal chal mere pass time nahin hai khana dene ka hai mujhe sabko

Sneha his a litle angry , kid had a tear

Sneha : bara kharoos bandha hai

Sneha goes near litle boy and smile at him

Sneha :i will get it

She take a chair of the dhaba and give the man an angry look

She put another think on the chair so she can get the ball she   on the chair

Meanwhile on the other side manthan is coming with is friend toward priya : manthan didn't see sneha

Sneha trow the ball down for the boy and then she want to get down but instance o that she fall

Manthan : this place is so

Snaha : haaaa

Manthan catch her , he look at her , her eyes were close , her hair come on her face than fell behind , she looked innocent, so beautyful , manthan can't take his eyes off of her ,

Sneha : am i alive

 than she open her eyes ,first eyes slowly than the second quicly, they look into each other eyes but then

Sneha : heyyy live me

Manthan : … (still looking at her)

Sneha : UH ???hey u mister (clck her finger in front of him) leave me

Manthan : are u sure

Sneha role her eyes : yes dufer , i don't want to stay here all my life

Manthan : ok , don't blame me then

He leave her and she fall on the ground

Sneha : ouchhh…dufer

Manthan : i said don't blame …and yeah don't u dare to call me dufer again , u bhootni

Sneha : arggggg

Manthan : hooooo bhootni will atack me

Piya and raj come

Piya : i see that u meet

Sneha and manthan : hu ?

Raj : your are staying together

Sneha and manthan : what with HIM/HER

Piya : yes(cute face)

Sneha and Manthan give eachother a look

Piya : vaise lag rahai ho couple ke tara , you look so cute together

Manthan n Sneha : ewwww

Raj : anyway put it to her

Showing him a mangalsutra

Manthan : what i am not going to put her that

Sneha : like i want to wear it from you

Raj : main hi pena detha hoon

Come near sneha

Sneha : heeeyyyy hooo i can wear it myself

Raj : ho yeah hihi

Sneha :hihi (imiting him)

She put it

Piya : so mmmm raj you will drop them to their house , i have to go ,i have some work

Raj : ok , so new wed couple come

Manthan and Sneha : we are nOT MARRIED

Manthan and sneha look at eachother and give a angry look

Piya gigle and mugling : parfect couple

Snaha : kuch kaha

Piya : hu ??me nono

Raj : ok lets go will drop you

Piya : by manthan by raj

Raj : by (smile)

Manthan : yeah by (annoyed)

Piya to sneha : ur hubby is hot

Sneha : ewwww he is a monckey

Piya : anyway by

Piya hug sneha

Piya : have a good suhagraat


Piya run away

Manthan : hey miss ider rene ka iradha hai kiya

Piya : na , tum ider kabse khare huwe ho ,chalo chalo time nahin hai

Sneha live

Manthan : HU ??ajeeb ladki hai


Edited by aisha1 - 15 May 2007 at 11:57am
tsamhita IF-Dazzler

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thanks that part was really good!!! Tongue
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awesome part Clap
continue soon please

Edited by amrita93 - 19 May 2007 at 11:01am

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