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Posted: 11 July 2007 at 1:09pm | IP Logged

note

 

I am going on Holiday

So i will not write For a month and half

I will come back the first september and post the 2nd september

Anyway have a good time

Shorry

Love

Aisha



Edited by aisha1 - 11 July 2007 at 1:11pm
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Awesome Part

Its ok Aisha u enjoy holiday
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Originally posted by ahmad111

r u dead. idiots

??? are yo saying idiot to me

lol

anyway though that no one like it so i didn't continue ...but u will know

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Kyon Kiya

 

Manthan was in his office...

Manthan (thinking) : yeh KT hosh main kab ahai gi ... pata nahin kiss mussibat main dal diya isne...upar se abh mujhe us 2 by 2 ke saath rehna hoga...anyway manthan yeh problem chor .. yeh soch ki agle maine ke liye tu kiya kare ga ...ek to advance manga ...i have to find another job...

It was now time for manthan to leave and go for shopping...

Sneha was sitting in front of the mall ... looking at the watch

Sneha : oulou... time par bhi nahin puhunch sakta

just then manthan arrived

Manthan : hoye uth ... hum bethne ke liye nahin ahai

Sneha mouth drop : hoye sarkari hospital ki toothi huwi bench ...phele to tum late ho upar se mujpar hi barak raahai ho

A couple pass

Woman : dekho bilkul hamare tara hai

Man : dekhna itna pyaar kare ghe yeh ek duja se

Sneha and manthan look at the couple

Manthan : NEVER

Sneha : sorry aunty uncle lekin yeh or main Kabhi nahinn

the couple laugh

Couple : bass kuch hi waqt ka intezaar hai

Manthan and sneha were in painting shop

Snaha : monckey i have picked my room colour ...we may choose dining room colour

Manthan : first my name is MANTHAN ok ...and i have also picked mine ...which is not PURPLE like urs yuck

Sneha : you may close your mouth ...then come follow me

MAnthan : i am not your dog

Sneha : Ho no a dog is cute and ur not

Manthan : bandarya

Sneha : i think we should take Orange

Manthan : yurk Nooo ... mmm perot green its good

Sneha : NoooOoo

MAnthan : not orange

Man : may i help you

Snaha : ap kaun hai

MAnthan : can't you see , he is the shop sailor

Man : yeah so what colour did you choose

Manthan : creme

Sneha : gold

manthan and sneha give each other an cold stare

Man : beautyful combination

both look at the man

sneha and manthan : combination?!

man : yeah ...so are you for it

Both : yeah...

they buy some materiel...

Sneha sit on a bench ... she was a litle tired...

Manthan : hoye bandarya ...kiya huwa

Sneha : you don't "hoye" me ok...and i am tired ...can we PLEASE make a pause

Manthan : ffff those girls i swear...

Sneha : thanks god u finally said that i am a GIRL

Manthan : yeah yeah ...anyway you can sit i will be back in 5 minute

Sneha : ...

Manthan goes ... sneha was siting alone , when a man come to sit near her , sneha look at him weirdly...the man come closer to her...he put his hand on her shoulder

Sneha :(angry) take off..

Man : hey babes you want us to go to an long drive

Sneha : shut up...

man hold her hand ...sneha was hopping for some help

Suddenly the man hand got expulted from sneha shoulder ...

sneha and the man look at the one who had do that

It was our hero MANTHAN

Sneha was relieved

MAnthan : come sneha...

Sneha did,'t say anything and stand up ...

Man : hey who are you

MAnthan : some one with whom you should not mess ok

Man didn't say anything because he saw the anger in manthan eyes

Sneha look at manthan carefully without manthan noticing it

Manthan : chalo sneha

2 minute later

MAnthan : bandariya jab voh bast* tumare pass betha to tum uth nahin sakti thi

Sneha : hoye monckey voh mera haath pakar raha tha

MAnthan : usko thapar nahin mar sakti thi ...ho sorry your a girl

Sneha : HOYEEE its not because i am a girl that i can't

MAnthan : ho yeah its because of it

Sneha : shup up monckey ...tumne bhi to kuch nahin kiya

Manthan : what do you mean ...you wanted me to punch him

Sneha : atleast yes...phir mujhe nazar atha

Manthan stoped and goes toward the man direction but sneha stoped him by holding his hand (both feel something for 2 second)

Sneha : rehne do rehne do...kissi or din dikhana

Manthan : as if i will save you again...

Sneha : haah



Edited by aisha1 - 23 February 2008 at 10:02am
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