*Kyon kiya*P10 new part : shopping - Page 6

Posted: 16 years ago

Kyon Kiya

 

Mrs poketwala is guiding Manthan and Sneha to their flat

Mrs P : yeh lo ha gahai , yeh hai tum dono ka ghar , or yeh lo Keys , abh main chalti hoon .

Sneha : shukriya

Mrs Poketwala leave

Manthan snach the keys from sneha

Sneha : heyyyyy

Manthan : what heyyyy , maine pura din is door ko nahin dekhna andhar bi jaana hai.

Sneha make a face

Manthan open the door , they enter together , with the right foot ( tripical)

Then they look at the flat it wasn't that bad , then they open the door

First bedroom

Sneha : this my room

Manthan : no mine

Sneha : no i say first

Manthan : but i enter firt

Sneha : don't care this my room and that is final , u take the other room , go see ur room

Manthan : you go to the other room i stay here and THAT IS FINAL

Sneha : no

Manthan : Yes

Sneha : NOOO

Manthan YESSS

Sneha : arggg… listen …i will right ur name on a paper and mine on another and we will pik one and the name who is right on the paper will ahve this room

Manthan : fine with me

Sneha take to paper and write name on it and is going to take a paper when manthan speak

Manthan : nonono i am going to pick one

Sneha (give him a look) : as you wish

Manthan take a paper and open it and is shocked

Sneha : mera naam nikla na

Manthan : haan (angry)

Sneha : haha so now outttt

Manthan : hoye tameez se

Sneha : ji ap bahar jane ki takleef karenge (low voice so manthan can't hear) dufer

Manthan : ja raha hoon ja raha hoon , vaise mujhe koi shok nahin tumare saath ek kamre main rena

Sneha : aise ke rahai ho jaise main chaati hoon

Manthan : so to hai

Sneha : uuuu

Manthan leave quikly

Manthan then go to is room he open the door , the room was exactly like snehas , i mean same size , one big windows

Shanti Niketan

Tulsi : main Krishna tulsi se milne ja rahin hoon

Mayank : K k KT se main bhi jahon gha kt se milne

Tulsi : thi …

Damini : nahin mayank tum mere saath shoping karne jaho ghe thik hai

Mayank : nahin main kt se milne jahon gha

Damini : MAYANK  maine kaha na ke tum mere saath ahoge bus tum kt ke pass nahin jaho ghe

Tulsi : are Daminijane do na mayank ko , kyun usko dant rahi ho

Damini : nahin..v..voh main ..voh kt ki alaat thik nahin hai phir mayank usko aise hi pareshan karega

Tulsi : main hoon na  saath…chal mayank

Mayank : KT KT KT main KT se milne ja raha hoon,

Damini couldn't do anythink

Mayank and  Tulsi leave

Damini : bhagwan mayank koi aisi vaisi arkat na kare

Back to MS flat

They come to mainroom

Manthan : voh mmm kaal mujhe apni salary mile ghi so i am going to buy some materiel for the house

Sneha : i don't like ur taste

Manthan : hoye u don't even know my taste so please

Sneha : yeah but i know ki tumari taste bilkul tumari tara hogi …

Manthan : that mean GOOD

Sneha : no kharoos

Manthan : shut up ur choise are bad mine are very good

Sneha : hoye u don't know my choise

Manthan : same as u don't know mine so don't argue

Someone : tum dono ka problem ka hal hai

Manthan And sneha look at the person and its raj

Manthan : hu..tum andar kaise ahai

Raj : voh 2 chabi dene so i  open

Manthan ok

Raj : so i think u should together to bought the house materiel

Sneha N manthan : with HER/HIM eww bad choise

Raj : i am sure ur choise are same , mmm what ur favorate colour

Sneha : Blue and Pink purple

AT the same time

Manthan : Blue and white and black

Raj : see u like both blue

Manthan : eww pink

Sneha : shut up , anyway purple and pink will be my room colour so u can't will not enter

She show him her tongue

 

Edited by aisha1 - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
😆 😆 nice part...cant wait for them to fall in love...can you pls make the parts lil longer...lol
Posted: 16 years ago

Kyon Kiya

Raj : anyway so when will you go for shopping ???

Manthan : tomorrow

Sneha : heyyyy u can ask me its my home too , ur soo mean seriously , u have too ask me , maybe i am busy tomorow so u …

Manthan cut

Manthan : OKKKK BASANTI , kiya tum kaal ja sakti ho shopping karne meri ma , are u free

Sneha : mmmm…yeah

Manthan : uh ???free thi to mujhse kyon kaha puchne ke liye

Sneha : aise hi , so next time u will ask me

Manthan : next time : (gigle) ur are dreaming babes , now its because we need materiel next time u go alone

Sneha : like i want to go with

Manthan : i knowthat u

Sneha cut

Sneha : shut up i don't talk with monckeyssss

Sneha is leaving

Manthan : uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

He was going to catch her when raj hold him

Manthan : leave me i am going  to kill her ,(spyco face) haha i will her

Raj : relax man , don't kill her u will go to police station

Manthan : don't care , i have already went to police station for nothing now i will go for something i have really done

Raj : anyway i am leaving , i have come too give u some food , i have put them here ok

Nandini house

Nandini : hello haan to kaab a rahai ho wapas

********

Nandini : i feel lonely without u come soon

**********

Nandini : sach , u want me too pick u up

*******

Nandini : (gigle) OK OK  i am not comming , put tell me when u will come

*****

Nandini : no tell me nah

*****

Nandini : ok don't tell me anyway come soon before ur bday this time we will celebrate together

Manthan side

We see him entering the hospital ,

Manthan : Krishna tulsi room please

Nurse : u are ???

Manthan : familly

Nurse : ok room 125

Manthan : thank you

Nurse : can you sign here

Manthan sign but not is sign

Nurse : thank you

Manthan take a breath and was going to enter when he heard mayank talking he look from the door (we cant see him)

He see tulsi sleeping neer KT and mayank talking to her and holding kt hand while KT his sleeping too

Manthan : shit

And he leave

 

 

With who Nandini was talking???

Did manthan find the culprit

did he have some shak on Myank

what is next step

Edited by aisha1 - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
kl update...great!! next time update sooner 😆
Posted: 16 years ago
hey nice fanfic. By the way are u going to pair karna nandini ??Any ways great ff, It's really diffrent
Posted: 16 years ago

note

 

I am going on Holiday

So i will not write For a month and half

I will come back the first september and post the 2nd september

Anyway have a good time

Shorry

Love

Aisha

Edited by aisha1 - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome Part

Its ok Aisha u enjoy holiday
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by ahmad111


r u dead. idiots

??? are yo saying idiot to me

lol

anyway though that no one like it so i didn't continue ...but u will know

Posted: 16 years ago

Kyon Kiya

 

Manthan was in his office...

Manthan (thinking) : yeh KT hosh main kab ahai gi ... pata nahin kiss mussibat main dal diya isne...upar se abh mujhe us 2 by 2 ke saath rehna hoga...anyway manthan yeh problem chor .. yeh soch ki agle maine ke liye tu kiya kare ga ...ek to advance manga ...i have to find another job...

It was now time for manthan to leave and go for shopping...

Sneha was sitting in front of the mall ... looking at the watch

Sneha : oulou... time par bhi nahin puhunch sakta

just then manthan arrived

Manthan : hoye uth ... hum bethne ke liye nahin ahai

Sneha mouth drop : hoye sarkari hospital ki toothi huwi bench ...phele to tum late ho upar se mujpar hi barak raahai ho

A couple pass

Woman : dekho bilkul hamare tara hai

Man : dekhna itna pyaar kare ghe yeh ek duja se

Sneha and manthan look at the couple

Manthan : NEVER

Sneha : sorry aunty uncle lekin yeh or main Kabhi nahinn

the couple laugh

Couple : bass kuch hi waqt ka intezaar hai

Manthan and sneha were in painting shop

Snaha : monckey i have picked my room colour ...we may choose dining room colour

Manthan : first my name is MANTHAN ok ...and i have also picked mine ...which is not PURPLE like urs yuck

Sneha : you may close your mouth ...then come follow me

MAnthan : i am not your dog

Sneha : Ho no a dog is cute and ur not

Manthan : bandarya

Sneha : i think we should take Orange

Manthan : yurk Nooo ... mmm perot green its good

Sneha : NoooOoo

MAnthan : not orange

Man : may i help you

Snaha : ap kaun hai

MAnthan : can't you see , he is the shop sailor

Man : yeah so what colour did you choose

Manthan : creme

Sneha : gold

manthan and sneha give each other an cold stare

Man : beautyful combination

both look at the man

sneha and manthan : combination?!

man : yeah ...so are you for it

Both : yeah...

they buy some materiel...

Sneha sit on a bench ... she was a litle tired...

Manthan : hoye bandarya ...kiya huwa

Sneha : you don't "hoye" me ok...and i am tired ...can we PLEASE make a pause

Manthan : ffff those girls i swear...

Sneha : thanks god u finally said that i am a GIRL

Manthan : yeah yeah ...anyway you can sit i will be back in 5 minute

Sneha : ...

Manthan goes ... sneha was siting alone , when a man come to sit near her , sneha look at him weirdly...the man come closer to her...he put his hand on her shoulder

Sneha :(angry) take off..

Man : hey babes you want us to go to an long drive

Sneha : shut up...

man hold her hand ...sneha was hopping for some help

Suddenly the man hand got expulted from sneha shoulder ...

sneha and the man look at the one who had do that

It was our hero MANTHAN

Sneha was relieved

MAnthan : come sneha...

Sneha did,'t say anything and stand up ...

Man : hey who are you

MAnthan : some one with whom you should not mess ok

Man didn't say anything because he saw the anger in manthan eyes

Sneha look at manthan carefully without manthan noticing it

Manthan : chalo sneha

2 minute later

MAnthan : bandariya jab voh bast* tumare pass betha to tum uth nahin sakti thi

Sneha : hoye monckey voh mera haath pakar raha tha

MAnthan : usko thapar nahin mar sakti thi ...ho sorry your a girl

Sneha : HOYEEE its not because i am a girl that i can't

MAnthan : ho yeah its because of it

Sneha : shup up monckey ...tumne bhi to kuch nahin kiya

Manthan : what do you mean ...you wanted me to punch him

Sneha : atleast yes...phir mujhe nazar atha

Manthan stoped and goes toward the man direction but sneha stoped him by holding his hand (both feel something for 2 second)

Sneha : rehne do rehne do...kissi or din dikhana

Manthan : as if i will save you again...

Sneha : haah

Edited by aisha1 - 16 years ago

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