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Posted: 17 years ago

 Kyon Kiya

 

We see her bleu-green eyes , her lips , her jair come in her face  than with her fine finger she put her hair behind her ear

Girl : akhrir i am Sneha Khana  (i change the name because priya and riya its to similare and i love another fanfic jo yeh naam use karta hai so 😛 and i like his fanfic)

we see her face and its (later i will tell you😆)

Gangas office

nakul come

Nakul : you call me mam

Ganga : yes nakul , aj shaam maine party rakhi hai , us project ke liya jo tum or janvi kar rahai ho , or tumari promotion ke liya or main chati hoon ki tum apne pariwar ke saath aho

Nakul : ok mam

Ganga smile at him

Nakul : can i leave

Ganga ; yes

 Nakul : thanks mam

he leave , behind we see ganga with tear

Ganga : nakul jab bhi tum mujhe mam ke kar pukarte ho , mujhe bohut dukh hota hai , jaise koi mujhe dil par mar raha ho , sirf ek baar ek baar mujhe ma kekar pukaro , mujhe lage gha khi mujhe duniyan ki sari khushyan mil gahi ho

she close her eyes and think about the moment she spend with him and Lakshya

Hospital

Laksh was with Kt , he was holding her hand

Laksh: Kt ji , thik ho jaho ,phir hum dono shaadi kar len ,phir honeymoon chale 5 , 6 bache hoon

KT : ha

she move a litle but it hurt her

Laksh tense : Kt itna hilti kyon ho , tumain pata hai na tum hili to kiya ho sakta hai phir...

KT look at him smiling and Laksh see it , she was smiling because he love her so much and cant see anything hapened to her

Laksh : tumain pata hai na ki tumain kuch bhi ho jaata hai mujhe kiya ho jata hai , tum hi meri zindagi , or meri jaan tumain hai sambal ke rakho

KT feel so good that he is near her

Laksh : or phir agar tumain kuch ho gaya ,to mere 6 bache kider se ahaige

KT give him an angry look

 

 

Edited by aisha1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Kyon Kiya

 

Manthan and Raj were walkind on the street , and

Manthan : yaar batha na  ghar ke liya

Raj : i find one , mushkil se lekin...

Manthan: lekin kiya??

Raj : voh mm jiss flat main rehne wale ho udhar ka jo malik hai voh badha kharoos hai

Manthan : uski phirkar math kar

Raj : uski fikar nahin kar raha  , lekin he accept only wed couple

Sneha : What , but i am not married , sooo

Priya : uski arangement karli , ek ladka mil gaya

Manthan : ladki mil gayi , are u crazy i am not donna marry a girl i don't kno

Raj : stupid i didn't say to marry her , i am not that crazy

Sneha : sooo??

Priya : u will act like u are , i mean just to get the flat ,its just for sometimes

Raj : aur vaise bhi maine flat dekh liya hai there is 2 room , tumain uske saath ek room nahin share karna pare gha

Manthan : better be 2 room , i am not sharing a room with a stupid girl

Priya : how can u say he is stupid , tum usse janti bhi nahin ho

Sneha : u know i have a 6 sens , and i am sur

Manthan and Sneha : she/he is a big duffer

pass se guzar the hai and she bumpt there shoulder , Sneha return to see who do it but manthan didn't return and there is lot of poeple 

Sneha : Andha kayinka

Laksh is in his room thinking : Ek baar kt thik ho jahai main ,is rape ka case reopen kar doon gha , or us manthan ko andhar kar dhoon gha

Joydeep and bhoomi s room

Joydeep : bhoomi tum kahan jha rahi ho

Bhoomi : tumse matlab , mera sir na khao or yahan se jaho

Joydeep is sad

bhoomi sell ring , joydeep go to take it but bhoomi come

bhoomi : don't u dare to atent my calls

bhoomi pick up : hello

Bhoomi : hey i am comming don't worry

Bhoomi : ok by love u

Edited by aisha1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesomeeeeeee plzzzzzzz continue 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part 👏
it's like hungama (rimi sen ..)
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
great part! keep up the good work! :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
pls continue
this is the best fanfic ever
i hooe that guy on BHoomi's cell is Abhir.....
this ff is just the way i want it to be
😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Kyon Kiya

 

Manthan , in the office to get his job

Boss : you have all the qualification , but someone else come for this job and he had more experience and he come before so i give him.

Manthan : Sir , i promise if take me in this office ,you will not regret … blabla

Boss look at him with serious look

Boss : i like your confidence , and know i have the feeling that you will do big thing , mmmm…i have another job its not as good as the first one but…

Manthan : what is it ???

Boss : We have a Newspaper u know Daily Mumbai

Manthan : yes

Boss : so you can take picture for the rubric and help for the article do publicity for our industry , you will work with someone , secretair

Manthan : ok mm..i accept (he need job)

Boss : good , Tum Wednesday shuru karoge

Manthan : ok thanks sir

Night in gangas party

She do the same speech she have done in Kyunki

Tripti smile evily and look at nakul who smile back

Ganga come near nakul

Nakul : thanks mam , its a pleasure , to work in this project you have done a lot for me

Ganga : i have done nothing , tumare apni gamiabhi tumain yahan tak lahi hai , ho ek minute main abhi ahi

 

She leave and tripti come near nakul

Tripti : kitni bewakoof hai yeh ganga , sochti hai aisa karke voh tumain pyar jagahai ghi , tumain yeh job dkhar tum usse kareeb hoge , lekin usko yeh nahin pata hai ki yeh karke voh apni barbadi khud kar rahi hai

Nakul : haan mom , sochti hai aisa karke vo mujhe aseel kar sakti hai or wapas SN main a sake ghi , lekin usko kiya pata ki…

Tripti : voh apne ghar main bhi nahin re pahai ghi

Lakshaya heard everything from behind and his shocked

Later in the party

Tripti : so ganga , you think ke yeh karke tum mujhse nakul chin logi , kabhi nahin , voh abhi bhi mujhe ma ketha hai ot tumain mam , poor lady apna hi beta apni ma ko mam ketha hai , how sad , haha , voh tumare pass kabhi nahin ahaiga or voh yeh kaam tumare liya nahin kar raha

Ganga : mujhe pata hai tumare liya kar raha , tumare khene se

Tripti : tum…

Ganga : mujhe pata hai ki tum pouti property chaati ho , nakul yeh saab kar raha hai property ke liyai , vaise bhi mujhe khushi hogi ke voh yeh saab llele akhir uski or laksh ki hi to hai  , aghar usko yeh karne main khushi milti hai to thik hai , meri khushi uski khushi main , main apne bete ko kush dekhna chaati hoon , or voh chin nahin raha , vo uska haq hai , mujhe afsos hai ki nakul mujhe ma nahin kheta lekin mujhe ziada tumpar taras atha hai tripti kyonki voh tumain ma to kheta hai lekin tum uski ma khabhi nahin ban pahi

Ganga glare at tripti then go

We see a shocked nakul yes he heard everything , tripti is fuming , and laksh come near nakul

Laksh : bahi , jisko ap mom khete ho , voh kabhi ma nahin ban pahi , apni hi khushi ke liyai sabkuch kar sakti hai , lekin jo ma hai apne kabhi uske hi pyaar ko tukhraya , jo apko sabkuch dene ko tayar hai uske badle main kuch nahin sirf ek choti si cheez chayen apse jo uski liye sab kuch hai , ke ap unko ma khe kar pukariyai

Laksh put his hand on nakul shoulder

Laksh : bahi apke ar fesle par main apke saath hoon

Than he leave , nakul had a tear

 

Edited by aisha1 - 16 years ago
tsamhita thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
tankoooooo
dat part's good
hope to see sneha and manthan together soon
loooooooooooooool
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Posted: 16 years ago
hadnt read it in a while.. read them all togehter.. it is getting interesting.. please continue soon.. good job!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow its realy good plz continue