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is it my fault ... my love

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Posted: 25 March 2007 at 11:47am | IP Logged

I kept thinking was it my fault?
that i keep thinking of you all day
i kept waiting, is it my fault?
that my life is great when I go a bit astray!

 

the life it seems is a pool of wonder
which gives a new page every dawn
to paint my own existence
to let the new bud bloom and spawn

 

covered with fallacies i know i'm no
to you a perfect temptress
a ploy to cloy it is my darling
to acquire a morsel of your goodness

 

i know no bounds of how up and down
temperatures go in the furnace
my fire inside can only find
in your words that watery solace

 

the calmness builds like logs oh mate
the higher it goes the deeper
the degree of satiaty needs no clause
consumed in its propeller

 

do tell me what you'd do if you
had a situation, a wish, to face
like this in life as is mine, my dear
oh heaven bless you charm and grace!

(Written by Pallavi Gupta)

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Posted: 26 March 2007 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Excellent poem yaar...thanks so much for sharing!!Clap

Cheers,

Anjali
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Posted: 26 March 2007 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
awesome poem!! Big smile
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Posted: 27 March 2007 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
Thanx a lot..... Embarrassed

this was my first attempt to writing a love poem Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed


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