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~*MaNnU*~

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Posted: 23 March 2007 at 7:57pm | IP Logged

hi guyzzzOuchi wrote this poem for a frewnnn....dats really upset with me rite nowwwOuchOuchcan u plzz givee me feedback on it plzz

I'm sorry

 

Im sorry for all the trouble.
and bursting your bubble.
I'm sorry for not being me.
and not what you see.

 

Im sorry for faking it all.

And making it all fall.

Im sorry for lying to you.
and so called dying too.

 

Im sorry for giving you a brother
which was just another.
im sorry for the Guri
it wasn't even jaruri

 

I'm sorry  for that luvie
that you got from your so called hubbie.
I'm sorry for that friend
that couldn't stay til the end

I'm sorry that I betrayed you
and that I hurt you
I'm sorry for the memories.
that will come back every little breeze.

I'm sorry for everything
and anything
I did, am doing and will do
IM SORRY



Edited by ~*MaNnU*~ - 23 March 2007 at 7:58pm

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Posted: 24 March 2007 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Really very nice Manu!!!! Clap I loved it! Embarrassed It's very touching and insightful! But please, don't be sorry!

Cheers,

Anjali

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Posted: 24 March 2007 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
y shud i be sorry..i mean i lied to her BIG timeee Ouch

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Posted: 26 March 2007 at 5:32am | IP Logged
it didnt workkk guyzz...
Ouch Ouch Ouch
she's still mad
and...didnt even say "aww" or nethinggg Ouch Ouch

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Posted: 26 March 2007 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
awesome poem!! Big smile Dont be sorry!!

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Posted: 28 March 2007 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
thats so sweet mannu!!!!
dont be sorry
maybe you should talk to her!!

~*MaNnU*~

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Posted: 29 March 2007 at 9:16am | IP Logged

Originally posted by THiNKiN OF YOU

thats so sweet mannu!!!!
dont be sorry
maybe you should talk to her!!

i did..Ouchshe said noOuch

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