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Posted: 08 April 2007 at 3:53am | IP Logged
I agree with all... Fab story and writing style Clap Clap Waiting for the next part Big smile

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More than the humor in it, i liked the writing style. Clap

Perhaps i didn't get the inherent humor in this one. Confused Embarrassed

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Clap Clap Clap Wow!! great style of writing Shreyu!!! Big smile
can't wait for the next part Embarrassed ...specially want to know the idea behind the roomies thing! LOL

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Posted: 12 April 2007 at 5:01am | IP Logged
is there a part2?

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Posted: 13 April 2007 at 3:54am | IP Logged
awesome, awesome shrey... looooove it Embarrassed Embarrassed
& sharin an apartment? sort of reminds me of joey & rachel.... neway... do continue asap Big smile

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Posted: 13 April 2007 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
The title caught my eye.
I liked the way you told the story especially how you started it off. And i didn't expect her to do that to him for standing in her way!
Great characters the way they speak to one another is entertaining would love to read how their attitude delops towards one another.

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Posted: 14 April 2007 at 7:55am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Tearrops

The title caught my eye.
I liked the way you told the story especially how you started it off. And i didn't expect her to do that to him for standing in her way!
Great characters the way they speak to one another is entertaining would love to read how their attitude delops towards one another.

thanks for replying! Big smile actually this one person did that to my friend.. it was quite painful to see him lke that.. and thus i thought of including it.. thanks for the encouragement Embarrassed

Originally posted by shriyaroxxx

awesome, awesome shrey... looooove it Embarrassed Embarrassed
& sharin an apartment? sort of reminds me of joey & rachel.... neway... do continue asap Big smile

thanks shriya.. yeah its kinda like joey and rachel but they didnt hate each other.. you could imagine monica and janice.. that might be better LOL.. thanks for the encouragement.. continuing !! Big smile

Originally posted by datspreets

Is there a part2?

of course Big smile

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Originally posted by Prenz~13

Clap Clap Clap Wow!! great style of writing Shreyu!!! Big smile
can't wait for the next part Embarrassed ...specially want to know the idea behind the roomies thing! LOL

thanks preru Embarrassed for the encouragement.. and you'll get to know it soon Embarrassed

Originally posted by MNMS

I agree with all... Fab story and writing style Clap Clap Waiting for the next part Big smile

thank you EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Originally posted by datspreets

More than the humor in it, i liked the writing style. Clap

Perhaps i didn't get the inherent humor in this one. Confused Embarrassed

thanks for liking it Embarrassed..

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