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Key To My Life-FF epilogue pg 18

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Posted: 22 March 2007 at 12:33pm | IP Logged

hey everyone


my first ever attempt at writin inspired by all the wonderful ff writers we have on this KS forum ...


havent ceen this show ona regular basis do no abt the main characters.. though....in my fanfic will start off with just the main char will add on as i continue its gonna be a relatively short ff


ideas n comments always welcome if u dont like it let me no i wont mind it one bit.. i am quite self critical ma self...


ok cumin to the basic story line and char..


Jai: he is 32 yrs ... rich , goodlooking , smart , vvsuccessful has taken his fathers business to unimaginable heights in quick time, is an MBA ,workaholic, has had a ruf time as far as a relationship is concerned. this relationship caused a lot of turmoil in his life left deep scars n he sort of lost that zing in his life and this very relatioship also changed his equation with his parents they were his friends earlierbut now it was vformal relationship where he jus didnt want to hurt his parents again, the relationship led to sum personality changes where jai becamevquiet , rude attimes...earlier he was the soft caring vsweet types


Bani: 21 yrs , vnaive ,lost her parents v early in life , is a very quiet yet fun kinda person vsweet n caring girl she is , lives with her massi , she doesnt have siblings.she is vbrite and has just dun her undergrad in business and management.


Jai's parents cant think of names of them letc wht we do abt them n will refer to banis maasi as maasii


ok


the basic plot now:


Jais parents happened to be at a weddin where they were quite mesmerised by bani n they get in touch with her massi and ask for her hand now jai due the fact that his parents suffered so much due to his past relationship cudnt say no to ne thing he had avoided marriage uptil now by pure luckeven though his mother had made upteen efforts in this regard previously but this time he was not as lucky as things fell in place rather out of place for him n the marriage was fixed as for bani she had other dreams but decided to forget abt them as she cudnt be a burden on her massi.


so jai n bani just have a formal meeting with the parents arnd n the next thing is that they r married and its bani's first nite after marriage.....



tell me if i shud continue ... sorry for the mistakes and the boredom...


part1 -pg 2


part 2,3,4 -pg 3


part 5-pg 6
part 6-pg 8
part 7 -pg 10

part 8 -pg 12
part 9-pg 14

part 10 -pg 16

Edited by bccool - 31 March 2007 at 9:43am

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Posted: 22 March 2007 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
intersting start!! would love for you to contnue!

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Posted: 22 March 2007 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
hey intresting carry on plz soon
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Posted: 22 March 2007 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
awesome start dear Clap
JB in an arrange marriage aur shaadi bhi hogayi hmm lets see wat happens next
continue soon Clap
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Posted: 22 March 2007 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
interesting concept...rivs
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Posted: 22 March 2007 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
a really brillant start
cant wait for the next part

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Posted: 22 March 2007 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
great start, do continue soon.

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yeah, plz do continue!!! that was a great start!! Clap Clap

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