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Originally posted by ~Sirius*Ysh~

and i love this part... Embarrassed
the mark-ronnie thing is building up... Embarrassed
and i really lyk micheal too.. duno why he just makes me smile... Big smile Embarrassed
hopefully hell be the potential BF Embarrassed

totally agree! i love this part n michael too LOL

n i luv ur description of mark too Big smile

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thanks coolniyu! Big smile

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LOL her names plain niyu rashmi...
[quote=Hugi'm so flattered that you like my story...i think mentioned before how ur so
brilliant that ur my idol!

i'll update my story as soon as you update urs

and i'll get ronnie and micheal together as soon as you get alex and ryan
together!    
[/QUOTE>
awwwww Embarrassed thank u soo much Hug now i am flattered Embarrassed
well my story could take a while as its on the laptop and the charger doesnt work :( so i cant bring it to u even though i have almost done the next chapter...

and no this is not fiar... alex and ryan could take a LONG LONG LONG while to get back together Angry Angry Angry u gta get ronie and micheal b4 tht Cry Cry
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ok... i'll call her niyu... thanks for letting me know! Big smile

and as for my story... since u've put up 6 chapters of ur story... i'll put up my
next two soon then im not gna update till u do... how bout that? and well,
ronnie and micheal... give it 3-4 chapters more? hehe...

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"Hey Ronnie!" For the second time that day, Veronica was brought out of
her memories by a familiar voice. She faced the direction where the voice
was coming from and saw Michael, her best friend's brother, walking
towards her.

     "You've been here all morning and I thought you might be hungry so
I brought you a sandwich." he said, as he sat beside her in the sand.

     "That's really sweet of you Michael. Thanks." replied Veronica, taking
the sandwich.

     "We all missed you at breakfast. I even made choco-chip pancakes
for you."

     "Yeah. Meg told me. I'm really sorry for not showing up."

     "Hey, it's alright!" he smiled.

     "Where's Johnny?" asked Veronica.

     "He's with Meg. They wanted to spend some alone time together so I
left them and then I decided to check up on you. Meg said you didn't look
so well this morning. What's up?"

     "It's nothing, Michael." lied Veronica trying to blink away the tears
that were forming in her eyes.

     "Ronnie, you and I both know it's not nothing. It's about time you
said something. You can't keep all your feelings bottled up. You need to
let them out and you need to talk to someone."

     "And say what?! There's nothing left to say and there's nothing left
to do. I think all of you should just leave me the way I am." All her
attempts to blink back her tears failed and Veronica started wiping away
the drops that were now rolling down her cheeks as she looked away
from Michael.

     "Ronnie look... I know it's really hard for you to forget all that Mark
did but you do know that you have to move on right? You can't spend
your life like this and I'm sure you'll find someone better, much better. He
didn't realize what he was losing when he hurt you and that's really his
loss. You can't keep crying over him because honestly, you're better off
without him." Michael sounded really earnest and although his voice was
calm and steady, it really pained him to see Veronica so broken.

     "It's so easy to tell someone to move on right?" choked Veronica as
she finished drying her face.

     "I know it's easier said than done but you've got to give it a try and
the first step in trying is letting your feelings out. Talk to someone. You
know we're all here for you."

     "I know that but I don't know if any of you understand what I'm
going through. I probably look like a pathetic loser to you guys."

     "We can only understand if you talk to us Ronnie. None of us are
psychic you know."

     "I just don't understand what went wrong. I tried so hard to make
things work but I guess I wasn't good enough right?"

     "You're perfect just the way you are and if Mark failed to see that
then that's really his problem."

     "I don't know what to do anymore Michael. It's not that I don't want
to move on, it's just that I can't seem to."

     "You've got to go out and meet other people Ronnie. You can't allow
Mark to ruin your life. He doesn't have the right to do that."

     "I know! But --"

     "You know what? I know exaclty what you need. You're going out
with all of us for dinner tonight, it'll be the start of your getting-over-
mark therapy, and you're gonna enjoy the rest of this trip, okay?"

     "But --"

     "No if's and no but's -- Oh! and no no's either! You're coming and
that's decided." said Michael. His decision was final and Veronica knew
there was nothing she could say that would get her out of going to dinner
that night.

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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Ha u posted!!!
yea ok ill stick to the deal... but yaar i have trouble with the laptop and cant post the next one soon yaar!!!

coming to this chapter... i really liked it!

mark is so understanding and so cute Embarrassed i think im falling i n luv wid him... gimme a chance to se his romantic side Wink

well... i cant say update soon cos it all rests on me now i suppose... but i am gonna say great going!!!
luvya loads

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Posted: 04 May 2007 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by freaky_angel

oh cool i just read all of ur chap's!
ur stories r great!
gd luck wiv da rest of ur stories!
*horia*


thank you! im glad u liked it! Big smile

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