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Adi''s_GirL

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Posted: 25 March 2007 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ~Sirius*Ysh~

ooo.... intresting.... johnny sounds cute Embarrassed Embarrassed
Embarrassed so meg is dating brothers best friend and brother will date her best
friend??? i like the way it works Wink kinda like harry, ginny, ron hermy in
HP cos hermy's like harrys sister...
good going rashmi!!!!
want more!!! pls post soon!!!!!!
loving ur story!!! its awesom!!!!
and nice cliffehanger...
i bet tey r going to set her up on a blind date


yea... johnny is cute... but i like michael better (maybe cuz wentworth
miller, the guy hu plays michael scofield in prison break is like the
ultimate hottie!)

yup...meg is dating brother's bestfriend but dont know if brother will date
her bestfriend... i mean, so far, ronnie is busy wallowing in her sorrow...
never thot of it as harry-ginny, ron-hermione tho... hehe... clearly, ur an
avid fan! hehe...

blind date? not too sure... but there is something big... hehe... Wink

im really flattered that you like my story considering ur such a great
writer urself! Embarrassed

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Posted: 25 March 2007 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Ahhhh Rashmi!
Awsome part...
I like johney!!
Nice cliffhanger..
But i cant wait..
Please continue soon!
Big smile

-Mahak-

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Posted: 25 March 2007 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mini786

Ahhhh Rashmi!
Awsome part...
I like johney!!
Nice cliffhanger..
But i cant wait..
Please continue soon!
Big smile

-Mahak-



thanks mahak! glad u liked it... will post in a day or two... Big smile

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Posted: 25 March 2007 at 8:06pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by SpoILed BraT

hey! this is my first story here... im not a very good writer so i'm really
looking forward to receiving help from the great writers here...

this is all i have so far... if u guys like it, do let me know so i can
continue... leave your comments/reviews/crticisms... anything that could
help me improve! thanks!


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As she stood alone by the shore, Veronica's mind raced back to the first
time she saw Mark. She felt a tear roll down her cheek and she lifted her
hand to wipe it away. But a split second later, another tear rushed down
her face. Then came another and another until there was a steady flow
running down her cheeks.

     It had almost been a year since Mark left but his image was still
clearly imprinted in Veronica's mind. His voice still echoed in her ears. His
laughter still rang in her thoughts. She could still recall the day they met
for the very first time. The events so clear that it seemed like it was only
yesterday when they bumped into each other...

     "Oh no! I'm late for class... AGAIN!" uttered a panicky Veronica as
she gathered all her books. She knew that this day would not go as she
had hoped it would. She woke up late, made a mess out of her breakfast
and got stuck in traffic for about an hour. And now, she was late for class.
She hurried down the corridors, which were almost empty by now, and
made her way to class. She knew she had to run faster to avoid getting
into more trouble. Bad idea! Just as she started running, bang!, she
bumped into someone. Her things went flying in all directions. She
scrambled to gather her things while muttering apologies to the person
she had run into.

     "Oh my god! I'm really sorry...I should learn to watch where I'm
going... I'm so so sorry..."

     "It's alright. It my fault too. I should have seen you coming. Here, let
me help you with those."

     He bent down to help her with her books. "I'm Mark by the way.
What's your name?"

     "Veronica."

     "Are you new here?"

     "Yea, and I'm really late for class so I need to run."

     "Oh, alright. Just be careful."

     "Thanks."

     And without looking back at Mark, she rushed to her class.

wow!!! Rashmi Clapyou are genius yaar,

Nice love story ....I liked the way you narrated it....omg!!!! your charecters veronica and mark seems to be cute and innocent.....how pity to note that veronica just in a panic of picking the books missed Mark unnoticed...

part one is good....will see the part 2 next and give you my reviews next...

"congratulation"...Big smile 

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Posted: 25 March 2007 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
thanks thameem!!! im so glad u liked it! Smile

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Posted: 26 March 2007 at 3:06am | IP Logged
hey its amazing yaar Big smile
poor ronnie wish shed get a move on LOL
n i like meg n michael too Embarrassed like meg cares so mch fr ronnie...wish michael would too Wink n johnny seems nice too bt i lyk michael more too Big smile

Adi''s_GirL

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Posted: 26 March 2007 at 6:15am | IP Logged
thanks niyu! glad u liked it! will post as soon as i can Big smile

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Posted: 26 March 2007 at 7:45pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by SpoILed BraT

"Ronnie... Ronnie! Is that you?" Veronica was pulled out of her reverie by
the booming voice of Meg, her best friend. She quickly dried her tears,
plastered on her best smile and turned to face the direction Meg was
coming from.

     Meg was half-walking, half-running towards Veronica. "There you
are! I've been looking all over for -- have you been crying again?"

     "Huh?! What? No... I'm fine." lied Veronica, looking away from Meg.

     "Ronnie, I'm not stupid you know. I've known you for 10 long years
and I can tell if you've been crying or not. What's wrong?"

     "Nothing... Really... I'm fine."

     "Like that's really gonna convince me. If you don't wanna talk about
it then that's okay, i'll let it be. But when you're ready to do so, I'll be here
to listen okay?"

     "Yea... Thanks Meg!"

     "You're welcome. Anyways, you up for breakfast?"

     "Nah... I'm not really hungry."

     "Michael's making chocolate chip pancakes... your favorite."

     "I'll pass."

     "You sure?"

     "Positive. You go ahead"

     "You'll be okay right?"

     "Yeah, don't worry."

     With this, Meg walked away from the shore leaving Veronica to her
memories again.

     As she made her way back to the beach house, Meg remembered the
old Veronica, the brown-eyed girl who had a smile that brightened
everyone's day. That girl was now lost somewhere.

     "Where's Ronnie?" asked Michael as Meg stepped into the kitchen.

     Michael was Meg's twin brother but they looked nothing like
siblings. Meg had thick mahogany hair that ran half-way down her back ,
dark brown eyes and beautiful fair skin. Michael on the other hand had
brownish-blonde hair that was always cut short, deep blue eyes and a
tanned complexion he had permanently acquired because of his love for
surfing.

     At that moment, Michael was standing by the kitchen counter and
was tossing freshly made choco-chip pancakes onto a plate in a neat pile.

     "She's by the shore. I asked her to come up for breakfast but she
said she wasn't hungry."

     "Did you tell her I was making choco-chip pancakes?"

     "Yeah."

     "And she still refused?"

     "Well, she's not with me, is she? So i guess that means she did refuse
right?" replied Meg, rolling her eyes at Micheal.

     "Geez... chill sis! She's thinking about Mark again, isn't she?"

     "She didn't say anything when i asked but it was obvious from her
swollen, bloodshot eyes that she had been crying again thinking about
him."

     "She really needs to move on you know."

     "Yeah, you wanna go tell her that?"

     "The last time I tried, she didn't speak to me for two whole weeks. I
don't think I wanna bring it up again."

     "We should just give her time to recover."

     "It's been a year Meg! How much time does --"

     "Could we just drop the topic please? Where's Johnny?"

     "That lazy bum isn't even up yet."

     "Then I guess its just you and me for breakfast bro!"

This part is also good Rashmi....nice going....I am tempted by choco chip pancakes....yumyum yummy

ok next part review next timeSmile



Edited by thameem - 26 March 2007 at 7:46pm

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