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Adi''s_GirL

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Posted: 15 July 2007 at 6:19am | IP Logged

yshie!!! glad u loved it! i was waiting for ur review... hehe... i've been soooo
busy with college... i just end up writing a little everytime i have free time...
so no promises at to when the next chapter will be up but im really glad u
liked it! Big smile

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I read all the parts in one go. I like your writing style, it's very desciptive and the characters are very believable. My only complaint is that the story hasn't progressed fast, considering 10 parts have ben posted. maybe its because the parts are short that's the only logic I can think of.

Waiting for next part
Preeti

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Posted: 18 July 2007 at 5:23am | IP Logged

hi preeti! thanks for the comments... im glad u liked my story... and yeah,
the parts are pretty short... i'll try to work on the length of the chapters and
i'll try to make the story move faster! Big smile

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Posted: 18 July 2007 at 12:17pm | IP Logged

Wow! Lovely chapter... I simply loved the last line. It's just brilliant!

The characters are just too well defined! I feel myself understanding each character very well! Really good job on this chapter!!!

-Sam

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Posted: 25 July 2007 at 6:05am | IP Logged

thanks sam!! glad u liked it so much!! Big smile

its great encouragement getting
positive feedback from brilliant writers such as ysh and urself Big smile

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only one update in the whole 6 weeks that i've been in India? You gotta start updating faster dude.

lol...anyway, it was an awesome chapter. I like the way you revealed what happened to Ronnie. She thought that Mark was the perfect guy for her, so it must have really hurt that he didn't want it to last forever. I hope Michael can help her get over the pain.

Looking forward to another update soon!

Adi''s_GirL

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Posted: 10 August 2007 at 6:50am | IP Logged

yup...only one chapter in 6 weeks... i've been really busy with college... and
cuz of all the work, i have a slight writer's block... but i will update as soon
as i can...

glad u enjoyed the chapter!

thanks for the review! Big smile

indiandoll89

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Posted: 21 August 2007 at 11:33pm | IP Logged

Oh wow Rashmi!! Clap

You're an amazing writer!!! Big smile

I totally love this story!!!

Please do continue soon!!

Luv ya loads,

Meera Embarrassed

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