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Last Day At Home - Flash Fiction (Page 2)

Tearðrops Senior Member

Joined: 24 February 2006
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Posted: 13 April 2007 at 4:01pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by datspreets

thanks guys for the reviews, this wasn't my best ever piece, but writing off and on and even not such good stories keeps the writer active in me :)

I thought it was different to the way you usually tell you're stories but nonetheless it still has that great moral to it like all your stories do! Smile

datspreets Goldie

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Posted: 15 April 2007 at 11:08am | IP Logged
^ awww...so you read it, hehe, i was kinda waiting for your comment, they're quite special. Big smile
putturani IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 May 2007 at 8:03pm | IP Logged
Hey I totally empathize with your story. I know the pain of moving away from the city you are brought up in and love At least, I am lucky enough to be able to visit very often. utit is never enough, there is always that feeling of homesickness and longing. Beautifully porttrayed. Clap

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