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i thought i'll write one new ff about Jai and Bani.
But with little change in his designation. I thought i'll make him a doctor by profession. Dashing smart arrogant doc. And BAni an Orphan. If guys would like to read this ff pls do send feed backs if not let us forget about it
You guys did encourage me with my two ffs. And thank you all for that.
we will give a name to this ff once u guys decided you want to read this fiction.
here goes the story..... (excerpt from the story line)
She stood on the street deciding what to do....... an idea flashed into her mind.
she limped further ahead watching a vehicle.
the car screeched to a halt..... A man stuck his head out sliiding the windows.
'Madam what in Gods name are you doing? Icould have crushed you to death....' he thundered in his deep masculine voice.
he looked at her for a moment and his gaze softened. 'what happened? are you hurt?'
Bani was breathless. This was hard she thought looking into his eyes and lie.
'Listen girl are you hurt?' He was annoyed at her silence.
'I er.. got hurt... can you give me a lift to the hospital?' she asked hesitantly.
He looked at his watch for a moment and said. 'Hop in.'
He opened the door for her. He saw her limp and asked. "What happened?'
'I fell from the stair... I.... ouch! she pressed her hand on her knee.
He started the engine.."I am a doctor I can take a look at your leg if you let me..'
NO..... er i mean no.. I want to go to a proper hospital... I don't trust doctors i meet on the road...' she said looking at him.
Oh really! then how come you are sitting in my car young lady?' he scowled.
BAni.. think something fast.. she raked her brain.
'I said about doctors and for your information i don't get into any strangers car either... I couldn't find any cab and I was hurt. I din't think well before getting into your car sir I am sorry..' she said sounding hurt and stealing a look at him.
'Okay... okay..." he was in no mood for a verbal war with a child. she has already wasted his time. he had a very rough night he need to get to the hopital fast and here he was stuck in an unwanted situation.
He saw her press her knee again.
'There's a small clinic around the corner i'll drop you there...'
'No.. er....no can u please drop me to Mcholy hospital.
Mcholy hospital ? he thought.
'this could be an harmless sprain..' he said throwing her a gaze.
'My friend is at Mcholy hospital he can take care of me thank you.'
He didn't find that convincing he thought against saying anything.
Bani looked at her watch and sighed. "can you please drive little faster?'
He controlled his impatience. A young lady sitting next to him was giving him orders. he hated everything that was happening with him from the morning. he had to take a shower from the guest room because his shower broke. his cook hard boiled his eggs for breakfast. and here he was trapped with this situation. he hated everything about this intuder. except one thing, her hair. She had an axtra ordinary curly hair. she had pinned into a pony tail.
'STOP.. Stop.. she shouted at the sight of the hospital. He stopped the car and she got out hurriedly thanking him and forgetting to limp.
'Hey!.. he was duped by a mere girl. For a second he thought of going after her and strangling her. he then changed his mind threw his car key to the valet and walked briskly to the hospital.
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